Still impressed with how well you detail the difference in scale and power between Avalee and the fairies. The way you describe her simply holding Willow is already tantalizing enough before we even get to the vore scenes. The absolute contempt Avalee shows towards fairies is striking, and it's interesting seeing how she rationalizes sparing Willow (for now, at least) and the small bursts of sympathy crack through her uncaring shell. Good job on continuing the great work!

This was fun to read. I like the sorta-rambling style of the narration as Hector processes the whole experience. The stream of consciousness works well to convey the guy's fantasies coming true.

Really enjoyed this one. The characters and their interactions were all very charming, and I don't think I'll ever get tired of super horny pixies. Topnotch tongueplay too, befitting of a frog girl story.

This was a fun read. I liked the childhood friend angle, both the wholesome interactions, but also the references to the past they'd make (usually in their thoughts). It added a fun layer to their love making, them surprised at each other or knowing how to press the other's buttons. Also, a couple that plays fighting games together is destined to have a happy, long-lasting relationship and will lead to many interesting punishments for lost matches.

This is definitely a good setup for an episodic series. I like the two protags, and they play well off each other. It'll be interesting to see what escapades they get up to together. The descriptions of Caroline's feet were really vivid, top-notch stuff.

Hey, I know this is supposed to be a mostly gentle story, but if you decided to force a 1 inch Stella into some form of excessively violent "accident," I'm just saying you wouldn't hear me complaining. I'm genuinely impressed with how insidiously evil you made her. Like, I'd have more sympathy for a villain who kicks puppies as a hobby.

While I'm on the topic of genuinely impressive, everything Titty related this chapter (and really every other chapter too, but this is a review for this chapter so I'll attempt to reign in my praise) is a delight. Titaness tickling session lived up to the hype, I loved Dick's words of worship directly in her ear, and Ronnie as the living, growing dildo is a kiss from the chef of a 3-Michelin star restaurant (I think three is the highest one? Whatever, you get my point). Oh! And Jen getting battered mid foot worship/tickle sesh was excellent too. 

You damn near gave me a heart attack when Stella attempted to dose her with shrinking sugar. Claire already had one huge slip up, and boy was I afraid of another. It was a huge relief when she saw through it, even though the panic came back in full force at Stella's gulping gambit.

My only extremely minor criticism is the insane whiplash going from Stella swallowing Tara back to fun, sexy orgy time. It's really difficult enjoying the gals and Dick playing Tiny Tetris inside Titty's pussy when my thoughts are still on what's happening in the backroom. I get why you organized the scenes like that though, as it allows everything to line up nicely by the conclusion, so like I said very minor but notable enough to point out. And honestly, I think the badass transitions of the following sections more than make up for it (going from Ronnie thinking "How is this my life?" to Claire thinking the same thing in a very different context and then again from "There's no way it could work." to "It's working just fine" from an oblivious Olivia. Goddamn that prose is almost as sexy as the smut itself.)

I didn't realize Olivia herself was into shrinking. I'd say I'm excited to see what her and Missy bring to table both as a tiny tag team, but that cliffhanger seems to have other plans in store. Also, eating a shrunken person just before you are about to shrink even smaller doesn't seem that well thought out of a scheme, unless Stella's banking on digesting Tara before her insides can become her outsides? I'm just glad she didn't chew her first lol.

For starters, kudos on effectively managing so many moving parts within a single chapter. Everything is segmented and paced really well here, cutting to and from the many different scenes and characters at the perfect times for the perfect durations.

Fucking Stella. Fuck. She's reached the point every good unlikeable character reaches for me where she has become so hateable that I fall in love. This chapter does a great job in painting her as utterly despicable, both through her actions and the narration during her segments, while maintaining her as realistically evil (she doesn't come off as a cartoon character, even with how fucked up some her alleged and seeable crimes are). The introduction of her cruelty in this otherwise gentle story has really spiced things up in a way I'd normally be wary towards, but from everything I've read from you so far, I know I can trust whatever direction you're heading in will be a good one.

Man, for a minute you had me believing Claire was playing 4D chess leaving out those shrinking sugar crystals for Stella to take only to reveal she's playing goddamn checkers by not knowing Tara was in the bathroom (or at least not accounting for her). So, from Claire's insanely risky play here, Titty making an opening in the frosted glass with her honkers, and Olivia ensuring Aidra is capable of not not becoming Skynet, I think Melissa is the only one of the Fab Four that has yet to do something to potentially lead to the group's catastrophic downfall (unless I'm forgetting something).

Now you have me questioning all of Victoria's whole everything, knowing now that she is actively trying to screw over Stella. It has me wondering if her various acts of sabotage are all an act, but with my current understanding of things, that seems farfetched. I'm very curious to see how this dynamic plays out and what twists you have in store.

I think you did great with Kim and Jen this chapter. Kim's reaction feels much more deserved now, and Jen's rant was a punch straight to the gut. (Paraphrasing:) "Normally sex with you is sterile as hell, but not today, today with you has been great because of everybody but you." Goddamn. Cutting out half of Jen's listing off steps to replace it with descriptions of how she's listing them off was really clever. It gives the reader the impression that Kim isn't listening to the words, that she doesn't have to, because she's focused on the intent behind them, and how Jen's body language is hurting her because its showing her true thoughts. There were some really hard hitting lines throughout that section, and I had to step up and walk away to think quite a few times this chapter.

What we get from Dick's initial reaction to being shrunk is incredible. It was so vivid, the idea of Titty essentially existing on another plane of existence she's so big to him, I'm jealous of how well you sold her scale through words alone. It was like I was looking at artwork displaying it. Speaking of jealous, kudos on making me feel bitter envy towards a fictional character (specifically Dick, specifically when he opened his eyes to see the giantess stepping on him while sucking off the tit of the taller giantess with titaness Titty squirming in the background. Phuck!) 

As an addendum to my last review: I went back to prior chapters and realized my error in visualizing the space. When the adult store is first shown, there's a scene where Olivia walks into a heavily locked backroom to find Titty testing out her tentacles. This takes place days before the actual presentation, but in my head I had gone forward with the assumption that the backroom was were the demonstration was being held when a chapter or two later clearly describes it taking place in the main room. That's my bad, I have a bad habit of filling in blanks with assumption when there wasn't a blank there in the first place. And in regards to Chae-won peering in, I hadn't put together that the imprint Titty's titties left literally created the opening for her to look through. As I alluded to before, I think it's really clever how the Fab Four are responsible for the cascading failures that I'm getting more and more sure are awaiting them in the future.

Absolutely worth the wait.

The general pacing here is really good, both within the chapter and the story as a whole, from the steady build to last chapters explosive release to this chapter's mellow intermission before ramping up again. I really liked the use of repetition in the opening section (specifically, detailing his busy lifestyle and describing Ronnie's body), really made that segment stand out to me. I also liked the focus on temperature regarding Jen's segments. It adds an extra layer to the scene's movements while simultaneously emphasizing how small she is (and descriptions of breathing on tinies always gets a thumbs up).

I'd compare this chapter to sitting down to eat a full course meal, only to finish it, full and satisfied, and realize that was just the appetizer. Get to the halfway point of the chapter, turns out there are two more feasts worth of high-quality smut still to go. Nah, make that three or four.

Every sentence was packed full of detail, and it was a delight to read the whole way through. There was some really creative sequences here: Titty rubbing Jen against her breasts with her forked tongue, Titty dominating Kim's ear, all the nipple grinding, "breastslide," the waterslide of spit into Kim's panties, tribbing and sixty-nining with Jen in the mix, so on and so forth. It's wild how fresh and exciting everything here was; even well-played out concepts felt like I was reading them for the first time.

Wordplay, vocab, alliteration, etc. were all on full force here, making a satisfying read in more ways than one.

Claire's minor role in this chapter was very amusing.

At this point, I may as well stamp every review with "I love Titty. She's the best. Fuck."

So yeah, good chapter.

I totally feel you on coming up with new size comparisons. Conveying difference in size in a unique and tantalizing way is something I always stress over, and I'm afraid that I never do a good enough job at it considering how important it is to most reader's enjoyment of size smut. 

I'll admit, I didn't realize that was what the elevator metaphor was indicating. I interpreted it as symbolic of how Jen felt shrinking, like her heart rising out of her chest from shock. I understood the pokeball imagery once she was free and the clothes were on the floor, but Kim's actions were lost on me til that point. 

Looking back on it, the word "indistinct " in "Jen had the indistinct feeling of rising and falling" is what tripped me up. I thought the feeling being indistinct meant it wasn't really happening, when really it was and Jen just wasn't fully aware of it, like someone riding in an elevator. Personally, I think a more objective statement that she is in fact being lifted up at the start clears up any confusion (i.e. "Jen felt herself lifted up within the confines of her clothing, giving her the indistinct sensation of rising and falling, like she was riding a high-speed elevator... and continue from there with what you had.) "Show, don't tell" is great and all, but I've found in my own experience there are times where you need to tell or else the reader doesn't get to see what you're trying to show them. 

But I'm as much (or maybe moreso) of an amateur as you are, so take any advice I give with a healthy heaping of salt lol.