There are all sorts of things that the rich take for granted.
Hmmm, ok, that kind of threw a wrench in my assumptions but I loved it! I don't know what some reviewers are talking about though, except for this chapter, the things Susan has been putting Holly through has been pretty tame.
Not sure what is going to happen now but can't wait to see!
So, I was right! Figured it had to be a set up, threw me a little when she broke Holly's hand, little extreme but I guess so is shrinking a person! I almost never go for happy endings for the shrinkee but in this case, pretty fitting, how cruel would that have been to eat her after she was a changed person.
Good work.
Story One of my Danza Macabra Series of Short Stories, as voted for by my readers ^_^ (well, the majority at least :P)
No description of the Shrunken Woman, because she has no mirror to see herself with and it is mostly told from her POV. Also so the reader can place their own character within the situation should they wish to. (read: Use your imagination you lazy sods! ;) )
Happy with this as my premier story to get me back into the writing mood 
Its a concept i've been wanting to do for a very long time now.
Hope you enjoy!
You never disappoint! Wasn't expecting this, different type of story from you but excellent all the same. Conveyed the little girls confusion very well and thought the "Tear Here" was a nice touch and how she misunderstood it's meaning. Also thought the description of how the girl went about twisting her head was great.
Very well done!
Glad you enjoyed :) I like to try new things now and then, keeps the violence fresh lol!
Natalie finds herself shrunken and in the hands of her recent ex boyfriend. He promises to help her out of her predicament, but his new girlfriend seems to have a different plan in mind.
Love the start, think I am going to enjoy Brittany's character a lot!
Oh man, this is heating up! Brittany didin't hesitate, shoved her right in her mouth! Hope you keep most of the action between Brittany and Natalie but I'm sure it will be a fun read regardless!
A lonely girl sits at a bar waiting for a date who doesn't show up. The night isn't a complete loss however thanks to a friendly bartender who gives her something special to enjoy.
The second in my Danza Macabra series :)
I'm loving this series! Good job at conveying how unimportant the shrinkees are to them. Looking forward to the next one!
Next one (i -think-) is the human insole one... Dont quote me on that lol. Glad you enjoyed this one though. Danza Macabra (or Danse Macabra) is one of my favourite thought provoking themes or concepts, so to be able to put a series of stories together that suit the title has been really good fun ^_^
Abbey likes to live in what she considers to be a perfect world, and she doesn't like it when people dont conform to her understanding of that.
Smoking may kill, but it may not always be the smoker who winds up dead ;)
Story 3 in my Danza Macabra series.
You're awesome! I actually felt bad for the tiny but it was so deliciously dominant and mean :) This series is fantastic and F/f is great, I love it and not nearly explored enough, don't let anyone else tell you different!
Hehe, maybe i should ease up on the torture then ;) cant have people feeling bad for the tiny things!! :P
Its cool though, I'm far from done with F/f, haters can hate but at the end of the day i dont write for them so i dont care lol Glad you enjoyed it hun!
Sam's work life isn't getting any easier, but at least she hasn't run out of toys to make her home life that little bit more pleasurable yet.
This is a sequel to Relaxing After Work (obviously) but for some reason it didn't feel right to simply add it on as a 2nd and 3rd chapter, probably because the original was never really supposed to have any further chapters to it, but i just felt the character of Sam was just too sexy to waste on a single chapter story :P
::THIS IS STILL A FURRY GIANTESS/SHRUNKEN HUMAN STORY:: So yah, fair warning :P (Oh! and as a side note, although this is tagged as having Toilet content in it, there will be NO scat! )
Enjoy!
Shower time! I just absolutely love your stories, the descriptions and attention to detai you use to explain what the tiny is going through is great. Can't wait for the next part!
hehe thanks hun ^_^ I'm always in two minds as to whether i'm doing too much descrip but i'm glad its worth it :)
Outstanding! Best wash scene ever and the best part is it isn't over yet *weg*, love it! Once again you make the reader feel like they are in the tinys place, superb story telling, can't wait for more of this :)
not so sure you're going to want to be in place of the tiny for part three ;) You wont have to wait too long to decide though, i should be getting it finished tomorrow :)
Instantly one of my favorite stories! I found myself wanting her to be kept as her wash rag but thouroughly enjoyed the ending you wrote. I absolutely love how you painted the picture of how she was used to wash each body part and the both point of views was awesome, you don't see that enough in stories anymore. I loved how she wrung her rag out too, that was a nice touch, she treated her exactly how you would a real wash rag. Then being dumped in the toilet and urinated on was the perfect humilating end for her. Thank you very much for this!
Ash loves her tiny snacks, but its a pain when you just cant get that last little bit out from between your teeth.
Thats what shrunken slaves are for!
Can't get enough of your stories! The way you treat the tinies is great and the descriptions of what they go through is amazing, like when you described emma being folded in half before being swallowed, loved it! You're the best!
lol well thats good for me!! Means i will always have at least one person to read&rate my stuff hehe ;) But yeah, i went for different styles of detail on this one because of the lack of dialogue and set up so i had some extra word count to play with :P
Oh man, big time tease for a cliff hanger! Love that Paige has him back, cant
to wait to see what she does with him, I'm almost hoping she eats him or maybe she will just chew him up a bit, just enough to bruise and batter him.
Great stuff!
I'll make sure the next parts are interesting, Maximus. Thanks for reading and for the review!
Holly is a two-inch tall 19 year old attempting her first year at college. Along the way she'll have to learn how to handle her ravenous roommate and the struggles of being surrounded by new people.
I love the dream sequences with Diane eating Holly, there's a real danger there where as Susan doesn't want to digest Lindsey, Diane definitely wants to eat Holly. I like Holly but I can't help really wanting that to happen!
Best vore story ever! Guess thats the end of Linsey, love how nonchalant Holly is about it. Only thing that would of made it better was a scene of Linsey being eaten by her.
I really wanted Holly to be eaten by Diane for good but then I guess the story would be over, lol. Now Diane feels guilty though so that cat and mouse game is probably finished. I loved how much Diane was dying to eat her.
Great stuff!
When every member of her family is shrunk to doll size 16 year old Erica becomes head of the house.
Will the Rockwell family adapt to the once shy Erica being in charge? Will Erica let the power go to her head?
Great story but man that was a terrible tease with Terri! Should have let her have Derrick :)
Love the lenght of the chapters too, very well written and really lets the reader get into the story, you put a lot of work into it.
This is a very short story about me getting bored with a little man and tricking him into his own doom.
Good first attempt. My tiny advice (tiny, get it get it) is more "foreplay" more of that kicking him across the room, bat him around a little more, would have given the story just enoiugh length to be acceptable for a short story and given the reader a fun scene :)
Good job though!
First, thanks for the review. I agree definitely on the "foreplay". The next story I'm collaborating with Deelann on has a nice amount of it. I look forward to posting more stories and look forward to your input.
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Mistress Anez
In a world where shrunken clones called YouPets are sold as servants and toys, a young woman takes the phrase “identity crisis” to the extreme by purchasing a copy of the one person whose desires and fears she knows more deeply than anyone else: herself.
Oh wow, this is going to be an instant favorite, I love the stories where the shrinkee is very durable, makes scenes like where she was stepping on her so much more fun *weg*
Fantasitc writing style as always, great character development, good descriptions.
Looking forward to more!
Thanks very much!
Ash has been waiting for her friends to arrive all morning, but just as they arrive she is struck by a fast acting genetic disorder which reduces its victims to the size of a cockroach.
Based off of a 'New World Order' style concept where certain people are genetically susceptible to sudden shrinkage, these people being immediately stripped of their common rights and privileges are reduced to basically sub-human property for whoever finds them.
::This is likely to be quite a long story for me as 1: i'm enjoying writing it in detail, and 2: there's going to be quite a lot of body play and each segment is likely to get its own chapter.::
Hope you like it ^_^
That was not boring! Excellent descriptions as usual, you always make the reader feel like he is in the tinies place. Love how easily over powered she was by her friends toe and how you described the breast flesh constantly smothering her as it thwarts her efforts to get air.
Was checking back here ever day for this, so glad to have a new chapter to read, thank you!
That breast scene was awesome, I don't think I have ever scene it explained that way, the pure torment that would actually be felt if someone were really subjected to that. Fantastic job!
Love the overall helplessness you have conveyed of Ash, to be regulated to a game piece, she's completey at their mercy. Can't wait to see what fun they have with her next!
I do like bringing new light to previously poorly-thought-out situations lol :P Benefit of being female and writing about females i guess, we know how much we 'move' lol!
Seems like i'm only writing this for about 3 or 4 people now, no-one else seems to enjoy it, but i guess they can go fuk themselves, i enjoy writing for my friends anyway ;)
Ohhhhhh yeahhhhhh! A story by Harlequin! Nothing makes me happier then seeing a story by you ;)
True to form, great as always. Love the set up, description, easy for the reader to feel like he is in Ash' place.
This is going to be one fun story, I can tell, thanks for sharing it!
