Let's just see what's new today...[SQUEAL!]

Adrenaline taste hit me before I finished the first paragraph. 

Now the real fun begins, as Jack, Kelly, and Brian struggle individually and collectively about what to do next.  Julia doesn't even have to appear or say anything more for these three to start tearing into each other.

Bad play, Art.  Brian's got a lot of frustrated rage pent up, and when he realizes A) Goodwin hasn't been able to escape himself for three years, and B) Goodwin has probably been aware of their entire captivity and didn't do anything to help until now...

If I ever read a better exploration of a giantess's ass, this story blew it away like one of Carlotta's fermented gusts.  A classic "be careful what you wish for" tale, Cameron's fate is supremely convincing in its depiction of both the sensory delights and discontents and how he has learned to embrace them all.  The attention to detail is superb while avoiding the pitfall (heh) of over-reliance on distractingly pedantic anatomical vocabulary.

I was particularly moved by Cameron's pilgrimage towards some kind of validation in his role, how he can take pride in his fecal duties and even recognize the privilege he is accorded by being admitted to her anus.  A giantess's ass isn't all peaches and cream, but it is still the sanctum santorum, and even the most unpleasant anointment can be borne as an honor.

Cameron never consciously sought to be transformed into an ass-slave, and if presented with a choice he probably would prefer to be restored to full-size, but he has made a thoughtful appreciation of his new life with Carlotta, and all he needs is a little reciprocal appreciation.

And this is where the story fails for me.  I fully buy Carlotta's character during the first three chapters as someone who has encountered something inexplicable (she thought he needed to be taught a lesson, and he magically shrunk) and just accepted it as cosmic justice.  Her centering of her own gratification is neither histrionic nor sadistic, and her seeming indifference to Cameron's plight is less sociopathic than simply selfish.

I appreciate the world-building you're attempting with "Blood Magic," but I thought precipitating the confrontation between Carlotta and Cameron via the woman in the next room was ill-considered.  Introducing the fact that these two women share the otherwise unheard-of experience of magically shrinking a man and then just glossing over the rest of the encounter was dissatisfying.  And Carlotta just "sensing" that a rapport could be established by exposing the tiny man dangling from her ass felt really forced.

This is really Cameron's and Carlotta's story, and the woman next door is an unwelcome distraction.  I would like to work this through more, but if you really needed to get the woman next door involved, I think it would have made it more urgent if Cameron escaped, talked to the woman next door and learned her story, then Carlotta comes over and convinces the woman to hand Cameron over by explaining what he means to her.  Then their spelunktastic reunion would be more convincing.

Bottom (heh) line:  this is an excellent appreciation of what it would be like to live and work in a giantess's nether regions that can appeal to both veteran macrophiles and the gi-curious alike.  Cameron's motives are easier to understand than Carlotta's, but I'm biased.  She wouldn't have to tell me anything twice.

This was a good retrofit for Fairview.  Neither Tana nor anyone else is shocked or mystified by the fact that she has a four-inch-tall co-worker, and the notion of Normie-Anthropole relations doesn't seem unheard of.  He should have learned by now to keep an extra set of clothes or two at work, however.

There is a clear delineation between the older chapters and your recent work, but not discordantly so.  In fact, the immersive and imminent descriptions of the beginning continue through the last chapter, but they are a bit more economical if no less prurient.

Looking forward to the performance review by Ms. Reynolds.

Survival or not, Roger (and the readers) got the trip of a lifetime. That was supremely gratifying.  The size-change tradeoff is a very erotic scenario, and you've clearly mastered the nuances. Thanks for writing! 

SO glad this is back.  I love that Linsey is still shorter than Holly.  For someone who is getting her tuition waived, Danielle ought to be taking her guardianship much more seriously. Oh well, it's all educational, right?

That was very tasty.  I never would have thought of that method of rescuing Holly, but it worked beautifully.  I almost feel sorry for Diane.

Hayley is definitely the most devious person on campus; I'm sure if she ever came across Susan's webcam channel, she'd get some nasty ideas.

I'm finding this story incredibly hot.  I'm still uncertain how Holly can survive more than a few minutes without air in someone's stomach, but I'm also uncertain whether it matters.  The fact that Holly enjoys being swallowed (by people she trusts, at least) makes her a girl after my own heart.

My favorite bit was the quiet and muffled scream when Susan swallowed in her sleep.  Too bad the camera died just before that.  If Susan knows her audience, she can edit it in during post.