Penname: Mad57Ms [Contact] Real name: Carlos
Member Since: December 11 2013
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Summary:

Zack never intended to utterly humilate Julia in front of the entire school. But that's exactly what happened, and when Julia finds a good way to get her revenge, Zack faces more than being humilated. He may never get back to normal again. Or even survive!

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27775 Read Count: 247805
[Report This] Published: December 29 2014 Updated: March 30 2016
Reviewer: Mad57Ms Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 27 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - The Incident

Glad to see you are back. I can't wait to read more of this great story. Keep it up!



Author's Response: Thank you so much! Reviews like yours are what inspire me to keep on writing!

Reviewer: Mad57Ms Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 28 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12- A Restless Night's Sleep

I love the parts when he is flattened and gets sticked to their bodies like a tattoo. My favourite scenes with any doubt. Very good chapter! Also, I think it's amazing that you can write a whole chapter per day. And not a small one but a big one. Congratulations for that too!

Reviewer: Mad57Ms Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 31 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Afterword

Good ending! I was expecting a sad ending where he stuck at this small size but I changed my mind after reading that you are going to do a sequel. I enjoy myself a lot with this story and I'm sure that the sequel will be great too. Being shrunken in a party surrounded by beautiful unaware teenage girls sounds cool. I woud like to see interactions with Samatha after knowing about her oblivious nature.



Author's Response:

It would have been pretty cool to end the story on a sad note, but the potential for more stories and more sexy situations was much too great for me to resist! I'm happy that you liked the story though, and that you're looking forward to Samantha. I'm also looking forward to write about her, as she's going to be our protagonist's newest nightmare. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Mad57Ms Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - The Incident

I have been reading stories from this site for a long time and I have never written a review but this time I had to write one. Your story is absolutely great! It has all the elements I like, unaware, flattened body, fused to a part of her body... I can´t wait to read more. I have also read your additions in writing.com and sincerely all of them are amazing too. Thanks for this story and I really hope you can continue like this:)



Author's Response: Wow! Seriously this means a lot to me, thanks a lot! I'm really glad that you like my writings so much! I hope you stick around for all my future works! Thanks again!

Micronauts by minuss Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 93]
Summary:

In the not so distant future humanity conquers the speed of light, but at a cost. Anyone wanting to travel in hyperspace must shrink to nearly microscopic proportions. A deep space flight program is created and the new Micronauts are humanity's most extreme explorers. This story follows one Micornaut's journey to the stars.


Categories: Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Sci-Fi
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 184302 Read Count: 376512
[Report This] Published: May 26 2016 Updated: August 11 2021
Reviewer: Mad57Ms Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 26 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - Dream Job

Wonderful work and marvellous chapter! Although I would have loved to see an unaware episode. Like, going  to the spa and being lost, and the, someone finding the necklace and wearing it like a normal one.

Kimberly by Happy Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 126]
Summary:

A happily married man catches the shrinking disease, and falls for the feminine wiles of his daughter's best friend.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Gentle, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93154 Read Count: 470136
[Report This] Published: August 16 2016 Updated: November 09 2016
Reviewer: Mad57Ms Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 17 2016 Title: Chapter 3: 2 feet, 6 inches (House Guest)

Wonderful story so far! I can´t wait to read more chapters. Like someone has already said, it would be perfect to see some unaware scenes and Andy being mistaken for another object. 

Summary:

When Scott finds himself at the mercy of his girlfriend and her daughter, he does the only thing he can do... he learns to keep his giantess captives happy.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Butt, Fantasy, Feet, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3541 Read Count: 36253
[Report This] Published: September 03 2016 Updated: September 04 2016
Reviewer: Mad57Ms Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 03 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good start! Waiting to read more soon! Congratulations

Summary:

Having successfully invented inanimate transformation, you decide to surprise your girlfriend by turning into a thong she'll wear. Things don't go to plan.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Object, Unaware, Butt, Entrapment, Odor, Scat, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2772 Read Count: 73580
[Report This] Published: March 29 2018 Updated: May 08 2020
Reviewer: Mad57Ms Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 30 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Laid Out On Your Girlfriend's Bed

Great start. Transformations stories are my favourite ones. Looking forward to see how it continues.

Summary:

Tony Capucilli is a low-level employee of the notorious criminal empire known as the Bianchi Family. Power, money, women, he has it all - all he has to do is take care of importing the illegal items the family requests. The only problem is that he's been betrayed. The entire operation is crashing on his shoulders and he needs an out.

Enter witness protection. The updated program ensures complete anonymity for the duration of your natural life, but at a cost. Tony will be forced to choose between being transformed into everything (from his nemesis' daughters' panties to a shrunken servant marketed as the newest premium luxury pampering service) and being hunted down by the most powerful crime lord in the area.

Can Tony last until the Bianchi family is taken down for good?


Categories: Feet, Adventure, Object, Unaware, Butt, Body Exploration, Breasts
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12744 Read Count: 35054
[Report This] Published: May 22 2018 Updated: May 28 2018
Reviewer: Mad57Ms Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 23 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Keep Your Friends Close and Your Enemies' Daughters Closer

Good start! There aren't many transformations stories so it's good to see someone creating one. I like the plot, interesting and refreshing. Although, I would love if you could make the transformations  a bit more descriptive. How he feels, etc. Keep the good job! Hopefully he will become a bra in one of his transformations:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I can definitely work on descriptions and I could see that in his future lol

Summary:

A man's wife calls him home to offer him an extra-special anniversary gift - something he's always fantasized about. Two sexy women, a secret fantasy for being small and powerless and a magic potion - what could possibly go wrong?


Categories: Giantess, Object, Humiliation, Lesbians, Slave, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9307 Read Count: 41976
[Report This] Published: November 20 2018 Updated: November 20 2018
Reviewer: Mad57Ms Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 21 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow! For being your first story, it is one of the best I have ever read. I personally enjoy the transformation into panties. Sadly there aren't a lot of stories with this. Congratulations! Can't wait to read more from you!

Summary:

Kyle applies for a job that turns out to be not what he expected.


Categories: Humiliation, Object, Unaware, Butt, Couples, Insertion, Odor, Scat, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25799 Read Count: 71492
[Report This] Published: December 23 2018 Updated: May 14 2019
Reviewer: Mad57Ms Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 24 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonderful story! Transformation stories are my favourites. And this one is very descriptive. I hope you continue it.

 

Summary: Deleted
Categories: Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1 Read Count: 47273
[Report This] Published: December 28 2018 Updated: January 02 2019
Reviewer: Mad57Ms Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28 2018 Title: AP Chemistry Final Project

Very good story! I am not very fond of foot fetish but I really enjoy the tattoo and absorption theme . Excellent work.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Body part transformation and stuff like becoming a living tattoo is an aspect of this fetish that I really enjoy, yet there are so few stories of it. I intend to write more in the future.

Summary:

In case the title didn't warn you, this isn't talking about the kinds of periods like 'class periods.' We're talkng menstruation, blood, women's icky time. It's not most people's cup of tea. There will be a tad of other content but if you don't like that (and object transformation) you will want to be avoid this story.

 

But the fact there aren't any real decent menstruation stories on here seems like an injustice, so this one's for you, you lovable freaks. If you don't like it, just don't read it fam. If it's a legit criticism feel free to post so though.

 

 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Object, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Odor, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8287 Read Count: 22203
[Report This] Published: January 19 2019 Updated: January 19 2019
Reviewer: Mad57Ms Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 20 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Soccer Practice and Unwilling Choices...

Very good story! I really love transformation stories. And this was magnificent. 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I was afraid people would be scared off by the topic~

Summary:

A guy is just tryin' to have a nap.  Her sister has other plans.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19)
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6632 Read Count: 38748
[Report This] Published: April 13 2019 Updated: September 28 2019
Reviewer: Mad57Ms Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 28 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

What a story! And with the images is just superb! Althouh I wish he would have fallen inside Stacy's cleavage.



Author's Response:

Haha, hold up, I didn't upload all the photos yet, there's a 'bonus photo' at the end (Elle, not Stacy tho)

Summary:

A boy lives the fantasies of his childhood friend once she realizes her inheritance.


Categories: Animal, Humiliation, Breasts, Object, Butt, Footwear, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5829 Read Count: 23187
[Report This] Published: June 13 2019 Updated: June 17 2019
Reviewer: Mad57Ms Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 15 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's very good. I'd love to read more

Summary: Ben Miller, an employee at Amazcorp, is chosen at random to test out a new drug for the company. This news sends him on a journey of discovery, where he learns about the intimate ties that big buisness has with the government. Can he muster the courage to warn people about Madam Executive plan's before it's too late?
 
This slow-shrink novel is being written as a commission for a user named IronWaffle (you may find him at Giantesss City). It is being released two chapters in arrears - that is to say that I will always have two completed chapters in storage when I release a new chapter here. If you would like to commission a story of your own, please visit this link:
https://www.deviantart.com/stubbornstain/art/Stubbornstain-s-Commission-Document-And-FAQ-809392188
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Breast Enlargement, Butt, Couples, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Lesbians, Muscle, New World Order, Sci-Fi, Slave, Slow Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6268 Read Count: 11979
[Report This] Published: September 09 2019 Updated: September 14 2019
Reviewer: Mad57Ms Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 10 2019 Title: Chapter 1: 1: Lucky Winner

Good start. I'm looking forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words Carlos. I hope to get the next chapter out by 13/09/2019. Oh look, Friday 13th. Better hope nothing bad happens to me. ;)

The holiday by redeyes98 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

This is a story about Jones a teenager who somehow shrinks down to 1 cm tall Jones isnt the only one who shrinks several humans across the world are suffering from the same thing. Jones, his mother and big sister are currently in Spain. Will the teen survive the two weeks or will he perish?


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Incest, Maternal, Mouth Play, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: The holiday
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10431 Read Count: 67725
[Report This] Published: October 26 2019 Updated: July 09 2021
Reviewer: Mad57Ms Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 27 2019 Title: Chapter 4: The nightmare

It's quite good. I'm looking forward to reading more. Also, I'm from Spain and I like you choose my country as the scenery for your story.



Author's Response:

I've visited Spain a few times and had tonnes of fun. So i thought it was the best place to do my story.

Summary:

189 years ago the world was ravaged by the Shrining Virus. 99.5% of humanity was shrunk within a matter of days. Since then, the world has adapted to the existence of Big and Small people. While some Smalls are free others are owned.

However, the Bigs are not safe, because the shrinking virus still lingers in the blood of all humans. One out of every 15 Bigs will shrink during their lives.

Paul is the son of a powerful woman: a Senator who fights for the rights of Smalls. However, when Paul shrinks, will he be treated fairly by the women in his life or will he learn that all those lofty ideals are just for show?


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Butt, Feet, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, New World Order, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55686 Read Count: 219012
[Report This] Published: December 23 2019 Updated: June 25 2020
Reviewer: Mad57Ms Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 24 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Hannah

Very nice story. I can't wait to see what will happen when he shrinks.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Summary:

In a certain high school in Japan, every male second year student has to go through the compulsory Reduction Week. One boy experiences this program with the company of his childhood friend. Observe a sizeable slice of life of shrinking scales.

 This is the original posted story. A finalized version with a cover image and illustrations for scale for each chapter is now available on gumroad: https://jellytea819.gumroad.com/l/reductionweek


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Gentle, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166951 Read Count: 189805
[Report This] Published: January 05 2020 Updated: July 13 2021
Reviewer: Mad57Ms Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 05 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Day 2 (112cm-100cm)

Good work! I like the story. I can't wait to see more interaction with the girls when he becomes much smaller. 

Reviewer: Mad57Ms Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 24 2020 Title: Chapter 26: Day 5 (0.09cm-180cm) [END]

Now it has ended it's official for me. One of the best stories in all history of this site. The plot, the progression of the story, the kinky situations and the descriptions are superb. Someone said it was like reading a light novel, I completely agree. Congratulations and thanks for all the effort you put into it.

I'm also happy to know there will be a sequel. Just take your time and rest well.



Author's Response:

Thank you for enjoying the light novel style. This was my first full out push for a long series so thank you for sticking all this way.