A story from different perspectives about an Unaware Mom and Daughter/GF after they come home from shopping.
Good story. Could of used a bit more various ways of dying. Also you used Hamilton in the story and that's my surname!
I get into a fight with my sister and my mum prevents me going on the holiday the following day. I end up going but not the way I would of hoped....
Sorry hertinypal when I read your review I thought you were talking to me and I got confused.
Curse you and your fucking cliff hangers!!!!!!
A story about a girl named Paige and the people in her life shrinking .
I was wondering when you will continue this because I like this build up.
The story of a high school student who finds out that he may have more in common with a girl than he thought.
I did notice some grammatical mistakes in there. Nah fuck those critical reviews this story is awesome so far. Please continue with maybe more than feet and possibly his other female friends as well.
What happens when you mix a horny young man with a horny young woman? You get a very steamy night of lovemaking......and well you know......disaster.
That was........ Unexpected but still pretty good
shrunken at your best friends house with him and his 3 hot sisters.
(some giant male content)
When I read there would be his 3 hot sisters I hoped that would be it. Please use giant men briefly in the rest of the story and more of his sisters.
Author's Response:
Dont worry about the female content, i have ALOT of that coming, the male content is limited but is integral to the story. Just bear with it for now because i have plenty of plans for Matt and Joes sisters.
An Arsenal fan is in the clutches of two Sp*rs fans during a North London Derby.
I don't like Spurs or Arsenal because Crystal Palace is where true football is played!!!!!!
A bus full of high schoolers shrinks
I'm really enjoying the story at the moment and I think it's great. Would like a bit more than feet but that's just my opinion.
Christina has to find a way to pass her exam and her friend offers her a unique solution.
That still sounds like a really good first story. My first was a mess too. It's called My evil sister shrinks me and I admit it's terrible! :(
This is quite an interesting and unique story here. Especially as it's your first one! I've recently come to enjoy foot stories like this and I'm loving where this is going.
What I can see happening is the guy gives Christina the wrong answers so she punishes him with her feet. Would also like to see maybe some other stuff like butt and breasts but that's all up to you.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the read. I didn't originally envision this as a foot story, more of a butt one. Same concept, except for feet, it would've been in her rear. I'm hoping to include some in here, and a bit of breastplay. So you have that to look forward too!
Highschool
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Giantess, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Incest
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 335 Read Count: 43087
Dude what happened to this story? It looks really good and I want it to continue please! I think other people would want this story to continue. Please finish this.
You inspired me to open this up again :)
You want to know what we all think...... I love it!
I've only just read your response to me pleading you to continue with this and you saying how I inspired you. That feels great. Also many other people love it too ass you've got 9000 views with only 2 chapters. I'm lucky to get 1000! To all those people who also wanted this story to continue, your welcome.
Author's Response:
Adding another chapter this weekend.
Hes was a bit rude to the wrong person, and now he will forever pay the price
This is a promising story and I like how he was almost stitched into the thong. Although desslok is right. There were dozens of spelling errors in there that MUST be edited. However being new isn't easy. Trust me my first story's were pretty bed too. Improve spelling and this story will be decent.
A load of shorts stories about people annoying or being rude to random people or friends, family and getting shrunk and tortured by that person, or someone else. Enjoy!
@Wildcat, this is probably not true but do you have a YouTube account called I am Wildcat?
Another commission about Renee and Cora, in which Cora manages to earn her housemate's ire, and discovers what it's like living with an irritated giantess.
This is the first story I've read in this series and if the others are like this then I'm going to enjoy this series
Author's Response:
Hehe, they're all unique in their own way :P - exploring different aspects of the character's lives.
Follow-up story of my earlier story Locker Room Chaos,except this time the roles will be reversed. If you're a fan of giant ladies and tiny guys you'll enjoy this story a little better.
Ten College football players venture into the cheerleader's locker room attemting to pull a prank on the girls. What happens next is the biggest trick of all......
Breasts and butt action. HEEELLLLL YYEEEAAAAAHHHHHHHHH
After my ex-girlfriend shrinks me to a mere one inch tall, I search for help. Many of my hot classmates get in the way, however.
@peterparker: no shit Sherlock. You persuaded me dozens of times to have a whole chapter at the end of Holiday about the guys unaware mum crushing him with her butt and farting on him. :)
This serves as the expostion for numerous short stories I intend to write in the near future. Please read this before you read any of those stories.
Wow this look GOOD! One suggestion is that maybe one girl that Trevor looks at puts the locator devise thing with her hot and unaware teacher. Make her the new history teacher who is young and hot. Trevor doesn't like him nor her for him so maybe IF she finds him then maybe she thinks that he was spying on her and she punishes him like that??????
Hope you like that suggestion. If not, then it's ok :)
Author's Response:
That's actually a pretty good idea. I never would've thought of that. Thanks.