I find writing provides me a release to understand this unusual fascination I posses and allows me to express my thoughts and stories in a forum of likeminded people.
A girl awakens in her best friend's room, reduced to a small size.
I very much enjoy how you assemble your words and thoughts to tell this story. I am in favor of strong development of both characters and environment and your pace is well executed. Just an FYI Chapter 3 about a third of the way down fell is mispelled.
Again I must compliment you on your writing. I continue to find it and the story engaging and evocative. Please continue
Cyan is the son of famous real estate mogul, Sage Steel, but he hasn't been living up to his father's expectations. Forced to work for the family business or risk facing excommunication, Cyan is forced to evict an entire block for his father's new development project. Of course, not everyone is pleased about this, especially not the girl at the end of the block.
It is excellent to see you have posted a story here. A fan of well developed characters, I like how you are setting the foundation for this tale. Cyan is a great name. Looking forward to seeing this story as it unfolds.
Good to see you, Duggernaut. I've already went back and fixed a few mistakes with gramamr and misplaced words, and added a few more details. I'll certainly try my best. Hope it continues to garner views and interest.
Nice addition I like the way you are setting the stage and developing the story. Amidst your hectic schedule please continue
Glad to see you again, Duggernaut. I had a quick lull which I used to finish this. Started the chapter a few days after posting the last.
I definitely have a number of things in mind in where to head. Will always gleefully consider suggestions though.
Several tiny people are captured by a ruthless exterminator.
Interesting notion and story development. I think I concur with JDO's idea of being charming enough to survive in the clutches of a malevolent giantess though it may be more of a curse in the long run. Melissa is the embodiment of savagery with a misdirected moral compass. I also like your writing style. Overall a good read thus far. :)
Thanks for reading! Melissa certainly is a misguided individual, someone who tries to justify their sadism. Wyatt is just lucky to be alive…for now.
When Quint's new neighbor invites him over so they can get to know each other, he doesn't realize quite how much he's about to find out.
I am enjoying this story and the manner in which you tell it. I am curious to see where you take this. :)
:D
Lol I just envisioned Jim and Stiffler from American Pie at the lesbians house...
It's been way too long since I've seen that. But as a lesbian, I guess I kinda have to now. :P
An organization set up to protect humanity from Smoothers who use their abilities for evil has captured a dangerous sociopath and is trying to reform her. One of the leaders, however, finds her and her stories rather intriguing...
I really like your take on this and am enjoying your spin on it. Looking forward to reading more.
Thanks for taking the time to read and I'm glad you enjoyed. If I can be half as productive as you are with this one that'd make me happy.
Madness I say! Madness!
Set after the events of The Escape Redux, Jessica Chen is no longer living on the island she called home for ten years but with her rich billionaire friend Jack who agreed to house the giantess for the time being. She doesn't expect it to be trouble but when you throw a two hundred foot giantess into the mix, trouble is the least to expect.
As if things could not get any worse, Jessica must contend with Jack's girlfriend Caitlin, a woman who cannot stand the sight of Jessica and believes the latter has an ulterior motive. Which is false, Jessica wouldn't have anything up her sleeve? Or does she?
Tune in to find out how our beloved sassy giantess gets out of this one!
Also, I had help from both vgiv who helped me with the outline and general idea of where the story and series as would go. Finally, a big thank you to versusterminus7 for providing a second opinion on the story itself!
I like it, good job.
Why thanks, so great to see a review from you!
Darcy and her best friend Andrew are roommates, things couldn't be going better- but when Andrew shrinks down to the size of her thumb, things change. Big decisions have to be made, hidden secrets are brought out to the open, and the two inseparable friends may part ways. Can Andrew and Darcy stay close during the curveballs that life throws their way?
FULL DISCLAIMER:
So, this story will start out slow. This was more a writting exercise a bit of 'barbaric yawp' for me, so it starts out sparse on the GTS content in the first half, but I promise that it will pick up in the second. The story is mostly written, so please, I hope you can stick with me and enjoy this story for what it is. Thanks, guys and gals. -vt
I very much enjoy the way you've constructed the story thus far. Nicely done
Dude, that means so much coming from you. Thank you so much.
Bad language and rude customers make for jaded customer service. The one who can't conceal her anger is the one you want serving you the least.
The begging and pleading for oblivion, then denial, brutal.
A psychopath is defined as a person with a profound lack of empathy, someone who can ignore the emotions of others because those feelings cannot reach them.
A narcissist is defined as an egomaniac supreme, someone who believes themselves more beautiful, more intelligent, more important than everyone around them.
A serial killer, typically, is a narcissistic psychopath.
I very much enjoyed the concept as well as the structure of the story particularly the nice little twist at the end. Nice job! :)
Many thanks! I had the idea a while back, and I honestly almost didn't upload this because I thought it'd suck, so hearing that you liked it is awesome.
As Shyamalan would say: "What a twist!"
This story follows Allie as she enters the Tiny Adult Film industry. Along the way she is forced to make some diffcult moral decisions.
Very engaging and nicley written.
Wow Duggernaut, thank you so much for the review! I'm so jazzed that you read my first chapter as you are my favorite author on this site, and your stories really inspired me to write. I am definitely looking to improve as a writer so feel free to add any constructive criticism!
Nothing is the same after Toni & Paul's big day.
I really enjoy your writing style. Great story thus far.
Thanks a lot! I'm afraid this story is already over, but there's some longer ones on here...
Newlyweds Derek and Amber, honeymooning in the Teton Range, encounter a strange object that affects only men. Can their young marriage survive this early test?
I really enjoy your writing style and attention to detail. Great job thus far
Thank you. I'll pick up where I left off when I wrap up 'Kimberly', which will be next week.
Still very much enjoying your story! :)
Thanks! I'm very unintentionally stealing your chapter style. Good work on your end as well!
The story of a man named Sirus who was in the wrong place at the wrong time and just a little too nice for his own good.
Also Canadian, enjoyed seeing Eri wrestle with the moral implications of shrinking Sirus for selfish reasons and the dialogue between the two. :)
First and foremost, high-five Canadian pride!
Secondly, HOLY CRAP DUGGERNAUT! My first reply I had just woken up so I didn't register the name but holy crap I love your work! I've read Anna's Awakening, Botched and Tom's Story, all great, all insperations for my own stuff. Thank you for all you do.
Hi NRawkGTS I extremely pleased you took an opportunity to check out some of my work and that something in my meandering narrative encouraged you to share your voice with us. Consider me a fan :)
Thanks! You feel like a big part of this community so it feels really good to list you amoung my fans :)
