I'm a guy sometimes writes macro fiction. I draw but I don't do anything fetish related.
I like both male and female giants, as well as human and furry in any combination. Giants are obviously not nearly as popular here as giantess so I read any that I can.
I also like giants/giantesses who are very cruel and violent so expect that to show up a bit in my work. Fear is also very fun.
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Dead Story
You could do a better job of describing what Era looks like. Right now all I know is that she is black, has teeth, and has bird like attributes.
Sometimes it's good to leave a bit to the imagination but with Era there isn't much to work off of. Is she shaped closer to a true bird than a humanoid? Does she have a beak? If so, how are her teeth arranged? I think you should try answering these questions and more in editing your writing or the next chapter.
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Thank you for the response. I'll do my best in either the next chapter, or in editing of the first chapter to improve in that category. Thanks once again for the response, I truly appreciate it, and hopefully I'll be able to improve that aspect of the story.
Garret and four other men find themselves shrunken and on the bedroom floor belonging to the beautiful blond woman who seduced them. Normally, she would take to crushing them all herself, but not this time. This time, she will sit back and watch as her fiancé does the dirty deed himself...
This is one of my favorite stories on the site because of your ability to capture the terror in the shrunken victims and the sadistic pleasure of the macros so very well. This is probably the best male giant stories i've read on this site so far because of it. Even though Luke had features that I do not find initially attractive (stubble) your writng of him got me hooked on his predatory nature.
The only real issue I have with the story is that the continuation of the seemingly ubiquitousness of flip-flops and sandals. I myself find the footwear apealing for stories focused on feet but after seeing them in so many of your stories it leaves me wanting to see something different. It's a petty complaint and it by no means detracts from the very raw emotions you write (Lloyd's especially) but it's something I wanted to get off my chest.
Keep up the good work. I hope to see you continue to write cruel giants like Luke in the Future!
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed this story. And I'm sorry for the late response, as I don't seem to be getting email notifications from this site at the moment. I don't know what's up with that.
Anyway, capturing the terror of the shrunken victims is very important to me in the crush stories that I write, since otherwise the scenario would be rather shallow. If I could draw, I'd definitely make some of these and future scenarios into comics, but for now I have to work with what I have.
As for the sandal/flip-flop thing, as you can probably tell, I love using them in stories, but I can see how some may get tired of seeing them all the time. Though I use them as much as I do because I feel that they are not used enough in crushing scenarios; it's usually barefoot or some enclosed shoe (sneakers, pumps, boots, etc.). That said, I may try use other shoes as a focus in the future, particularly ballet flats.
And you'll definitely be seeing more cruel giants soon! :)
When the GiantessWorld community attends one school together where your size reflects your current grade percentage in whatever classroom you're in, naturally things wind up being one big festival of fetish fun between classes . . . especially considering the existence of the little black cards, known as "death cards", that act essentially as extra lives.
This is a community story- You guys can add yourselves, suggest chapter material, or simply request something you think I should write. Here's a few basic ground rules for how this works, should you want something to happen:
1. I won't accept suggestions unless you offer yourself as a student. Name, appearance, personality, and anything you are/aren't up for, in case I need background extras in other people's requests. You don't have to be honest about your appearance, and honestly I expect a fake name- just give me a real person's name and we're all good XD
2. You're normal size outside classrooms/the gym, and you will shrink (or sometimes grow, if you're a special little extra credit student) to reflect your grade percentage. For example, if you have 10 points in the class out of 100, you'll be a tenth your normal size, etc.
3. Black "death cards" shrink/grow with their holder, and getting killed burns up the card and teleports you to the front office. The office will give extra cards to students they feel would want/need them, and sometimes teachers distribute them if they want to kill as punishment. Dying without a card is permanent, but let's not discuss that for now.
4. Class of Giantess is a very weird private college. We're all adults here, unless you specifically request to not be.
5. Class of Giantess gives no fucks. The teachers can flunk you into the ground if you don't do the work or particularly suck at it.
I'd like to take the opportunity to write a story in Professor Evan's classroom sometime (a lesson on gastric acid, anyone?) but I should probably finish the story i'm already working on first.
The avatar i'm puting out is probably a devisive one considering my main insperation behind it was orientation play, so I wont exactly be heart broken if you don't want him in the story. I was just wondering how a gay guy would fair in a school with a lot of giant women where consent was secondary.
Jeremy Whistler
Male, 20
5’ 10”, Lightly tanned
Slim, can never quite get that tone he wants due to PE being hell.
Light brown hair with shaved sides, rimless glasses, a tad boyish.
Grades: History 50% biology 5% English 90% Mathmatics 85% Chemistry 100% PE 20% (slip-up led to falling grades).
Being openly gay has not prevented the occasional giantess bully to take advantage of Jeremy. These events are particularly frustrating to Jeremy, believing he is singled out for his orientation. Thus Jeremy takes his frustration out on shrunken classmates. Jeremey has feelings for Professor Evans and works hard to keep in his good graces. He pushes hard to succeed (fail as he may) and is weary of many classmates but can be a stalwart friend, given enough time.
I'd be a damned hypocrite if I refused a character for being gay (lesbian, myself), so here's what I'll do: Jeremy will be added to the roster, but I don't think I'll be using him, myself. However, anyone on the roster is fair game for anyone to use in their own CoG shorts, so long as they keep to the kinds of people these characters are.
Took a break from writting my other story and just started on a short for CoG. Hopefully it's smutty enough for people to have fun with while also giving a glance at Jeremy's character. I'm planning on doing stories where he's taking a lot of abuse as well as ones where he's dishing it out.
As for suggestions for a story in CoG, ever thought about an arc where someone got access to the grading database for the school? If a student had that kind of control they'd be able to turn the tables on some people, maybe even find a way to give a teacher a bad grade? It's a rather broad concept that has a lot of different possibilites that you might like, or not.
Either way, have fun with your giant lesbians.
Hehe. Glad to hear it! This is a big toybox to play in, and everyone can mess around .
Ooh, someone playing with the grading computer sounds fun. Wouldn't be able to shrink teachers, but they could grow themselves up to 300%. Fun regardless!
That I will! :D
An elf efortlessly destroys a city
I'd like to see where this goes. You should continue to contrast Cyllis' indifference towards the citizens with the panic and resistance of the citizens. The amount of characterization given two the three heroes was sufficient for their brief role in the story.
I think the paragraph starting with "Alicia knelt down" should be two paragraphs.
Overall I think this story is off to a good start. I'll give a more complete review once you finish it. Good luck!
So, I'll occasionally be posting little one-offs (Perhaps some with a few chapters if I feel like it) relating to the Class of Giantess series created by Silent One which can be found here: http://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=6186
Summary: Gina Evans happens to be a student who attends a college where students heights are altered by their grades. Not the most dominate woman in the dorms, yet, hell hath no fury like Ms. Evans scorned.
I might sound like a broken record but the second chapter is a major improvement from the first. Did a good job characterizing George as a nervous clutz and Gina as a woman with barely a hair of patience.
I'm looking forward to seeing more of Gina in future shorts. Be cool to learn more about her as a character as well how far she takes payback until she sees it as "even".
Good to know that improvement was made (I do feel that the first chapter was a bit rushed). As for seeing Gina in future shorts, she will most certainly be around. Sorry for the late reply, forgot to check reviews for a while.
I'd say that this one is even better than the last one. Very solid writing here. I spotted a few tense and syntax errors that you might want to skim through but otherwise this is a fantastic short.
I especially liked the introduction of sweatplay. It isn't really something you see done very well in stories but I think you pulled it off. It's also nice to see you took inspiration form the character bios to create the scenario (Jen's love of her sweaty body and eating her classmates alive, I guess she doesn't mind the taste of her own sweat lol).
It's interesting how Gina can go from seemingly friendly and ordinary to cruel to quivering victim. I'm surprised that this is only the second time we've seen Jen in a story. If there's someone to turn a usual dominant into a frightened bug she's the one to do it.
Once again, great work!
Many thanks, I was hoping that it would be better than the last one. I need to go back and edit a few things. Also, as for integrating stuff from the bios, that's generally what I end up doing for things. As for Jen being used more, I am also a little surprised she hasn't been used more, since she's most certainly the most cruel of the bunch. Once more, many thanks for the review and the five stars.
A son helps his mother, a reluctant and conservative woman, become the goddess he always knew and felt she was.
So this is the commission I posted earlier on my actually commission's collection, but I realized that there's going to be a few chapters, so why not make it its own story? Might be easier.
Anyhow, here it is again. This was made for Lockboxes.
I've been enjoying the story so far. You have a good grip on pacing which is good because having Sarah instantly going from sweet mother to ramaging villan would have resulted in a significant drop in quality (people don't exactly become murders the moment they're given the chance). I guess with Clare you give the idea that's she's rebellious to begin with, which I guess would explain why she's so willing to kill after becoming a giantess. I'm not quite certain that Sarah will be completely on board after chapter 5 but having her defend Jason was a good way to get it started. I expecting her idea of "acceptable" victims will become more and more generalized as the story goes on (or not, depending on how you spin it).
I've got a few things I'm hoping will happen (Sarah and/or Clare interacting with Jason's teenage peers comes to mind. Other than that I'm greatly anticipating what comes next.
You might what to comb back through a few of your chapters because I found a few errors (e.g. using "she" when Jason was talking).
well, tbh, im just kind of going along at a pace that keeps in interestng. if i did a realistic pace on how someone would actually go from soft and cuddly to murdery murderface, it would take too long, imo. Thanks for the suggestion/review!
Class of Giantess can be a petrifying experience for those who are ill-equipped to enter the semester. For those who struggle in their studies, they'll soon find themselves in a struggle for their life.
This is my first story, and I'll be storing my Class of Giantess shorts here! I'll mostly focus on females with the occasional male victim, and my core characters are Lily (narcissism is a fun thing), Michelle and possibly Madeline, she interests me~ Though I'm totally up for experimenting with the rest of the cast too.
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This is really good for a first. Kept it interesting and fresh throughout and it never felt like things got stale. Short, sweet and gave us good glimpses at the characters. The use of dialogue throught helps a lot and good creative humilation. I don't have anything bad to say about this one. I'm excited to see what you write next!
Also, almost finished up with part 2 of my short. Your very own Michelle plays a very big role in it just like in part 1 so i'd like to see what you think of how I wrote her when I put it up.
Keep up the good work!
You add multiple size roles by holding the "command" key as you select them. That's how it works on my computer, at least.
Also, about Michelle using her body in creative ways. I was thinking of doing a short where during freetime, Michelle captures Jeremy and uses him as part of a demonstration for Lily. Using her cocky, sadistic, and teasing personality, she'd be showing off to Lily how great of a giantess she is by toying with Jeremy while Lily watches. Lily will be wishing she was in Jeremy's place (probably) while Jeremy is wishing he was literally anywhere else. That, or she'd be trying to bully his english homework out of him.
Do either of those seem characteristic of Michelle or would something else work better?
Anyways, enjoy your Holidays!
I love it! A huge thank you for bringing Jeremy into the story. He didn't at all out of character and the fact that Lily has ultierior motives for keeping friendly with him gives a great devious twist to her character.
Lily's actions were creative too. I don't think I know too many macro stories where someone drowns before being swallowed or snuffed by an armpit. Leaves me wondering what'll come of Jeremy if his number comes up.
Great work overall, there were a few typos here and there. Not quite so sure what the pun was supposed to be at the beggining of the story.
Also, Jeremy's going to get a bit of revenge on Michelle in a future update of my shorts. I'll do my best to try to keep her in character.
Oh yeah, and happy New Year!
Another great short. Further hammers in the fact that Jen is essentially the school's resident psychopath.
As for which Professor to write about next, I fairly partial to Professor Chase but on the other hand i'd like to see what someone does with Professor Masters since I havent actually seen anyone do anything with her yet.
Sequel to "Dreams of Distant Spheres."
First of all, I loved the story to previous to this one and this one is a fuffilling sequel.
The world you've crafted feels very complete and without major superflous details. Sometimes stories make the mistake of blowing all of their exposition all at once but you gave it in gradual doses in such a way that even newcomers to the series would understand.
Gideon is such a devious character he's almost supernatural in his cruelty. His ations have the right amount of detail. I'm glad you had it end the way it did because given Gideon's obsession it didn't seem like he was the kind of person to have his revenge end so quickly.
I suppose that the fact that they are failing to breed Alphas more and more is a bit of an inevitable justice? That' humanity will go extinct in a generation because they decided to prolonge their violent caste system rather than find a cure or a way to adapt?
Overall, great story. A fantastic addition to our rather small pool of male giant stories.
I’m glad that you liked this story and “Dreams of Distant Spheres.” There’s a much smaller audience for M/f fiction, and so I’m grateful whenever I receive feedback about my M/f stories.
Gideon is certainly one of my more devious and cruel characters (and that’s saying a lot, since most of my giants and giantesses tend to be completely merciless). Dystopian worlds have always fascinated me, and there is a certain cosmic justice that the normal-sized oppressors are slowly dying out in this world.
Thank you for your thoughtful comments. It means a lot :)
A Korean boy decides to enjoy some videogames with his best friends. Too bad he didn't check the software before he loaded it. Now that his little sister is back, he'll have a lot more to think about than a dead console.
Should be a good one for you if you like Asian little sisters (we love you too). First time writing from a Boy's POV though!
Glad to see you got back on the writing saddle!
Anyways, I think this is a pretty great story, unabashedly smutty and short and sweet. You do a good job with describing things to keep it all exciting without it being heavy handed or repetitive. It shows you have a very clear understanding of "less is more" in this story.
You also did a good job of packing in different ways for Julie to torment the little ones while keeping the chapters brief. I appreciate that you wrote it so the characters recognized the very real threat on their lives and the raw fear it's bundled with. They're all rather one dimensional as far as characters go but given this is a short and sweet, smut-n-snuff that isn't really a problem.
I often find it a bit silly when macros mistake the tinies for bugs (bugs aren't bipedal) but I think it fits with Julie here because she seems characterized as rather nearsighted, both literally and figuratively in that she so wrapped up in her own desires to notice small but glaring details.
Overall, great story! Good to have you back.
The first year of college can be a blur, and not every encounter is worthy of a full story. Some can only be vignettes, bite-sized tales that only take a few minutes.
This is pretty good so far. The way the guy at the gym was crushed by the sheer tightness of Fulda's squats was fairly creative. I'm also kind of biased towards macros taking lives at a whim so that sort of attitude that's been prevelant so far has also made me enjoyed this. I think the transition between the focus on Fulda to the victim could be a bit more streamlined or at least some sort of marker to indicate it that transition would be fine.
I noticed that although Fulda is described as "outwardly a bully", so far she has not been the initiator of conflict. All of her shrinking interactions have been retalitory on her part against people violating her physical space or putting their hands on her. Macros having some kind of justification (however tenuous) is a good detail that I think is skipped over in a lot of macro stories though if Fulda is a bully I think it would make sense that somewhere down the line she would shrink or otherwised torment someone who the reader would be inclined to feel a bit more sympathetic towards. Perhaps her assigned partner in a class project couldn't pull their weight despite an earnest attempt or maybe she shrinks some bystander simply because she wants something to take her frustration out on.
That being said, I'm looking forward to reading more of this collection. I'm interested to see how Helen plays out once she appears.
I could make it more clear when a transition is happening. A hard break doesn't make sense for a story that's just a few pages, but a few words specifying a change in perspective is doable, and I'll keep that in mind for future entries.
That's a pretty good idea! She's just having a bad day, and wants to feel better about herself. For the first few stories the people she encounters have been more aggressive to firmly establish the themes I'm trying to cover, while later ones are going to be more subtle and social transgressions like guys who pop out of nowhere with a "well, actually," or try to mansplain. I'll think about how best to include something like that, since while the girls included in this are far from being good people they're not villains, either.
When a new transfer student transfers to Edgecombe Academy, all eyes are on her, from her stunning looks to her mysterious motives. Little do they know of her true mischievious nature.
Bowsette inspired character toys with people. Accepting character submissions to be toyed with~
Sure! I'll give you a gal to destroy.
Name: Susan Goddard
Gender: Female
Description: 5'7" Tight and toned athletic build with small breasts. Short brown hair. Ear and nose piercings. Essentially punk meets crossfit.
Personality: A member of the cross-country team, Susan performs rather averagely academically. She is friendly and sociable but she can be a bit rough around the edges. Her circle of friends tend to be other athletes. She is competitive and confident, not taking shit from anyone.
(I'm not too hung on the orientation. She can be gay, bi, or straight if you want to do orientation play or it can just be ambigious.)
Preference: Anything with plenty of fear and torment. Suprise me! Maybe a test to see how long Sara's athletic ability can help her survive? I dunno.
Might submit a second person later on. Maybe a brother? Either way, I'm interested to see what you do with her. :)