Reviewer: JustForTribute Signed
Date: December 02 2018
Title: Chapter 1: Ultraxia's New Sky & Festive Tributes
Kosmita, A favourite author of mine for Brobdingnag holidays, left this review & I somehow managed to delete it. So here it is with my reply:
Reviewer: Kosmita Signed
Date: December 02 2018 Title: None
I feel really bad for not saying something sooner. I've been hooked to this story when I originally discovered it a couple of months ago. This story is quite unique and exhilarating. The ultimate power the Charlotte holds over the universe gets me worked up everytime I think about it. There was one chapter in which you described other beings ascending to godhood, only for Charlotte to obliterate them with minimal effort -- holy shit, that stands out vividly and is so hot in my opinion.
I love that you are continuing the story. Every chapter is gold. I have a suggestion that might seem unpopular. Given how arrogant and unmerciful Charlotte is, I wonder why she tolerates the girls that she picked up along the way. I don’t see Sarah going anywhere, but the other girls like Alyssa seem rather cheeky. It’s fun to see her grant a mortal a chance to experience power, but that doesn’t really seem like something she would continue to do. Given how she stole power from all gods to consume it all -- I see her being really selfish and giving an iota of power to someone else doesn’t seem to align with her personality. Or maybe I’m overthinking this. Maybe it’s a change of heart she has.
I love vore and hope to see more. I hope to see more of the story in general. Thanks for the awesome read. Cheers!
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My Reply:
Many thanks for the review, I greatly appreciate it.
Charlotte does not share power, The Maids power is only ever loaned, I touch on this a little in Origins although i do try and preface any occasion where the maids show divine ability as "Granted by their goddess". They have no power themselves.
Cassi's tinkering is using Divine Tech granted by Charlotte, the same for Sarah's cooking chemicals. I tried to flesh teh concept out when discussing the temple and how it is run. Use of Size machines more than divine power.
I think Charlotte keeps them around for company more than anything, She is happy to mass dominate the population while at the same time likes to have consistency with people she can talk to and flaunt her power.