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Summary: A young high school love triangle changes when a young girl accidentally destroys her crush. An unaware story with disasterous consequences of loving a girl in a committed relationship.
Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Couples , Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3704 Read Count: 68922
[Report This] Published: October 16 2010 Updated: February 13 2011
Reviewer: fated11 Signed
Date: October 17 2010 Title: Chapter 3: She Came from Above

great start. i love stories where someone ends up trapped in condom

Reviewer: fated11 Signed
Date: September 15 2011 Title: Chapter 4: If A Tower Could Fuck A City

next chapter? whis as a great story

Summary: Mike is eaten by his unaware girlfriend...
Categories: Unaware, Teenager (13-19), Giantess, Crush, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 597 Read Count: 17783
[Report This] Published: December 16 2010 Updated: December 16 2010
Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 18 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

good concept. love the cruel plus food vore.

Summary: Whilst waiting for a new car to be delivered Jenny snuffs out two human lives. What is in store for the family dlivering the new car?
Categories: Giantess, Crush, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6032 Read Count: 28091
[Report This] Published: December 17 2010 Updated: March 19 2011
Reviewer: fated11 Signed
Date: January 09 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

good second chap. i like where this is going

Pet Rival by Silhouette Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Max has been shrunk at college
He has to find help, and soon
Categories: Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2664 Read Count: 12755
[Report This] Published: December 20 2010 Updated: December 20 2010
Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this is a good story. keep up the good work

Author's Response: Why thank you :)

Summary:

Mike's company have a new resolution to the overcrowding problem in hotels and resorts, and mike tried to capitalize on it while he could


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Violent, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7494 Read Count: 29672
[Report This] Published: January 02 2011 Updated: May 30 2012
Reviewer: fated11 Signed
Date: January 02 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Getting the Girl

good start

Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 02 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Im always a fan of sandwich/food vore. Loved it



Author's Response:

Yeah, i've noticed quite a fanbase involving food-vore, thats why i chose the scenario :)  Glad you liked it!

Summary: Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.April goes to great lengths to live out her fantasy with David.
Categories: Butt, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2000 Read Count: 9256
[Report This] Published: January 13 2011 Updated: January 13 2011
Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 14 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Obsession

good start. please continue

A-a-appetizing by chugme Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Four High School jocks crash a quiet girls night. Out of nowhere they are are shrunken down, and little do they know, they will provide the snacks.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Entrapment, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2207 Read Count: 32640
[Report This] Published: February 20 2011 Updated: February 20 2011
Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 21 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

sexy story. Good cruel story

Summary:

9 years later - I decided to write part 2. Forgive the short delay, but I was busy :)


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Insertion, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1801 Read Count: 7672
[Report This] Published: March 08 2011 Updated: March 08 2011
Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 08 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 2

love the images this story brings to life. great work

Summary:

This is a series of short stories involving primarily butt stuff. There will be toilet stuff, so beware.


Categories: Butt, Crush, Instant Size Change, Toilet, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59862 Read Count: 542832
[Report This] Published: April 19 2011 Updated: January 25 2023
Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 23 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Massively Annoying

You are getting this writing style down. Good ideas and you somehow manage to make every chapter entertaining



Author's Response:

Thank you, very much. I try to relate the characters to people I know in real life. That works both in my favor and against me, since it helps me with description but also causes me to assume people understand more about the characters than they should. But with that in mind, I also like to try to leave a little to the imagination so you could replace names with people of your liking, insert you own characteristics, etc.

Reviewer: fated11 Signed
Date: November 29 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Surviving a Stalker (part 2)

good to see more of ur writing. its always a pleasure to read

Miniature by Dudicus Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

A brother and sister hash out their differences on a modelling table for miniatures. M/f


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Instant Size Change, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3547 Read Count: 9378
[Report This] Published: May 06 2011 Updated: May 06 2011
Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 09 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great use of details. kept me fixed for the whole story. hope to see the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Glad you enjoyed it.

Summary:

Built on my story "Forbidden Dish," this story will include various guys and girls who enter the resteraunt that advertises live Vore of humans; " The Forbidden Dish."  There is vore in every chapter.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: giantess
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 51917 Read Count: 144026
[Report This] Published: June 02 2011 Updated: December 21 2012
Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 26 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Overseas

I always love when they change their mind and Lindsay shrinks them anyway. Also loved how the German mind changed his mind and she simply said one way trip and matrabated. Good addition to a wonderful story



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for the review and the rating.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for the review and the rating.

Summary:

I will put stories here based in girlfood's Forbidden Dish restaurant, used with original author's permission


Categories: Giantess, Entrapment, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: giantess
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35902 Read Count: 141312
[Report This] Published: July 14 2011 Updated: October 28 2011
Reviewer: fated11 Signed
Date: October 05 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Meanwhile...

not a big fan of willing vore but I love all of chapter 4. especially the bachorette party. great job suprising the men



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm not much of a fan of willing vore either. Mostly because no matter how much some of us may think we want it, in the end we would fight for our lives if it really happened.

Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 29 2011 Title: Chapter 7: A Good Man is Hard to Find

wow this chapter is a new personal best for u. love the way u had the waitress step in at the perfect time to distract the wife.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. I wanted there to be a few near misses and glimmers of hope.

Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 15 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Wing Man

Wow great story. Love the addition of Lindsay who helps the girls lol



Author's Response:

Yeah man, she's the staple character. I had to at least give her a cameo.

Reviewer: fated11 Signed
Date: September 08 2011 Title: Chapter 3: The Gift

I liked the chapter and I liked the twist of giving him away. If only he was a little less willing



Author's Response:

Thank you for your comment. He was very unwilling, but considering how little thye reguarded his complaints and how he was still confused it didn't do him much good.

Summary:

A divorcing couple must work together to survive after they are shrunken and kidnapped by a woman determined to save their marriage by any means necessary.


Categories: Butt, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23148 Read Count: 77517
[Report This] Published: July 17 2011 Updated: August 13 2011
Reviewer: fated11 Signed
Date: August 07 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Accidentally Unfaithful

this is really good. I really wanna know how its gonna end



Author's Response:

thanks for the compliment; this will be a shorter tale, so you'll find out soon

The Shell Game by oishi1 Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Lucy has a little surprise in store for Sheldon. Shrinking, transformation, vore, oysters.


Categories: Vore, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2827 Read Count: 9853
[Report This] Published: July 26 2011 Updated: July 26 2011
Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 26 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Shell Game

good story. love how she swallows them regardless



Author's Response:

In the shell game (also called 3 card monty or the ball and cup game depending on what is used) they player never wins. The whole thing is rigged from the beginning. I wanted a sense of that for Sheldon in the story.