This is a great story, the detail is great! I wish you would make more

It's great to see you writing again. Unaware vore is great, and I enjoy it a lot, although I prefer aware. None the less your writing is great, you should keep making storie

Author's Response: i like aware too. i will try to write when i can, which is not very often. but i will write if i keep getting good reviews :)

This story has a lot of potential. Here is some constructive critisicm - The story moved along rather fast and she didn't seem too shocked to see a small man in her pantry, although it showed a little.

I really like how he was afraid of her at first and how she is gentle with him. I think you can be a really good writer. I will wait for your next story!

I really like this concept! It's great to see another story from you and I really can't wait to see what happens next. I wonder what will happen to tuppy? Will liam be able to convince the girls hes from a different universe? 

Guess I'll wait and see. When do you think you will have the next chapter up?

Awesome story. Like girlfood said I love it when the pred is someone the prey used or still knows and I lie the idea of people being sold as food too.

When can we expect more?

If you have apprehensions about going for something as dark as rape it's totally understandable. I've certainly got a humble suggestion that could help avoid it in a reasonable but engaging fashion that still fits the darkness of this world.

Marisa could continue to be resistant, which would cause Galea to essentially order Richard to do the deed. Marisa's owners may also reluctantly agree to this method albeit not being very threatening to Marisa as they are more inclined to pamper her due to their noble background.

Richard could continue to refuse despite increasingly intimidating threats by Galea, who could mention she could easily sell him off as livestock to be consumed or eat him herself along with other detailed threats. Tell him how close he was to being served as a dish before she *bought* him from a kitchen and essentially saved his life. He belongs to her and he shouldn't forget that. She could also highlight how good he has at and remind him about what usually happens to humans in this world and their place on the food-chain should nature take it's course.

It would be a good opportunity to show heroic traits in Richard. Even though he has submitted to Galea in many ways, there are still lines he would never cross even if it meant  a slow agonizing death in some hungry elf's belly, even Galea's herself. Perhaps this display of morality and courage could win over Marisa who would genuinely admire him for his bravery in a world where most humans are completely broken and will do anything to survive and not get eaten. This could be her reason give consent.

Everyone gets what they want and perhaps Galea gains a little more respect for Richard. She would certainly still view him as an inferior being and her property, but maybe have a little more interest in his personality and not just his value as a product as well as a bit more affection for him.

Of course it's just an open suggestion and I would be interested in whatever you choose to do. Hope I'm not being too intrusive on your story with my suggestion. I'd like to know what you think? Aside from that this has been a very enjoyable story. I'm generally interested in soft vore and soft vore related teasing / threats so that would probably be my biggest bias for or against things as a reviewer / fan.