Penname: mrcool [Contact] Real name: billy butler
Member Since: June 27 2009
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Summary: A scene, formed of a day dream I had about a tiny man stuck to the flipflop of his mistress and forced to be at mercy at her feet.
Categories: Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Feet, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1101 Read Count: 24722
[Report This] Published: September 23 2007 Updated: September 23 2007
Reviewer: mrcool Signed
Date: June 28 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Quick Fix: The French, The Foot, and The Flipflop

one of the best short stories i've ever read

Summary:

Ever been to those tiny, Asian massage parlors? Ever wondered what happens if you don't pay? Find out!


Categories: Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7548 Read Count: 58052
[Report This] Published: March 29 2009 Updated: September 06 2009
Reviewer: mrcool Signed
Date: September 11 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This is already one of my favorite stories. There can't be anything better than suffering at the foot of an asian woman. I really hope you continue it!

Reviewer: mrcool Signed
Date: September 02 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really don't think it can get much better than this. Shrunken down by a middle aged Asian woman that works in a massgae parlor, absolutley brilliant!! I absolutely love this story. I hope our victim keeps on suffering at the feet of this Asian woman. I hope she gets more descriptive in the ways she degrades him...keep up the wonderful work!!

Summary: A paranoid girl thinks her boyfriend is cheating on her, and does a 'little' something to keep an eye on him. It doesn't work out quite the way she planned.
Categories: Instant Size Change, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples , Feet, Giant, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6937 Read Count: 241396
[Report This] Published: May 05 2009 Updated: September 23 2012
Reviewer: mrcool Signed
Date: July 15 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

this is a really great story. I hope Anne eventually finds melanie and likes the idea of just keeping her as a pet and a foot slave. I really hope you continue it

Reviewer: mrcool Signed
Date: September 02 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I really like where this story is going. I hope that Melanie finallyg gets Ann's attention and Ann just uses her as a footslave and steals her boyfriend. Anyway thanks for continuing it. Great work!

 

Reviewer: mrcool Signed
Date: September 24 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Glad your sticking with the story, I always check back to see if you've update. I personally really enjoy the feet parts. It'd be great to see a scenerio where Anne finds melanie and decides to humiliate her, keep her as a pet etc... at her feet. Anyway just some suggestions, keep up the good work

Reviewer: mrcool Signed
Date: November 26 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Thanks a lot for continuing.  I def didn't even realize until just now that you had added another chapter since it had been long. I that's the same situation for others.  I do really like this story.  I hope you def continue with some more foot content especially.  Thanks

Reviewer: mrcool Signed
Date: April 20 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This story is fantastic, I know it's been a LONG time, however, I do hope you do eventually continue it.  Would love to see some more foot parts as well.  Keep up the great work. 

Summary: Nobody ever really thought Haley was a mean girl.
Categories: Odor, Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Feet, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4381 Read Count: 161156
[Report This] Published: September 25 2009 Updated: November 03 2012
Reviewer: mrcool Signed
Date: July 13 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I really like this story. I really hope you continue it. I also absolutely love your other story "A Matter of Trust." I hope you continue that one too! Keep writing, you're a great author.

Summary: A rich man suddenly finds himself shrunk and in a trailer park full of poor, dirty women.
Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Body Exploration
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3875 Read Count: 20767
[Report This] Published: December 06 2009 Updated: December 07 2009
Reviewer: mrcool Signed
Date: December 07 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like the idea of being us and abused my trailer park trash women like you wrote. I loved the feet parts, however I could have done without the part with the extremely younger girls. Anyway, great story, hope you continue !

Summary:

A rebellious girl ends up with the upper hand when her parents end up shrunk.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Couples , Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25141 Read Count: 574581
[Report This] Published: June 07 2010 Updated: August 23 2012
Reviewer: mrcool Signed
Date: November 23 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Awesome story!! please continue



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  I try to do chapters as often as i can.

Reviewer: mrcool Signed
Date: October 01 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

This story is absolutely phenomenal!!  Thanks so much for sharing.  I can't get enough of the torture of the mother at the feet of her daughter and her friend!! Amazing



Author's Response:

Thanks Mr. Cool, the foot scenes are some of my favorites too.

Summary:

First story done, it was done within a time limit of less than an hour to see if I could mainly.

It's just a short story about a couple girls in high school and a bit of surreal sizechanging is involved.

Critique and constructive criticism is strongly appreciated.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Feet, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1040 Read Count: 10897
[Report This] Published: July 31 2010 Updated: July 31 2010
Reviewer: mrcool Signed
Date: August 03 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story! I really liked it. Female dominating female stories are the best. I wish there was more of them in the giantess community. I hope you write another story! Thanks!

Author's Response: I enjoy them as well, and lately have been on more of an SW kick but not much has come of it. Thanks for comment.

Summary: Tenchu fanfic featuring Ayame on a typical mission, making use of some new tools.
Categories: Vore, Crush, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1391 Read Count: 7791
[Report This] Published: August 05 2010 Updated: August 05 2010
Reviewer: mrcool Signed
Date: August 10 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Divine Punishment

I loved this story. I liked the f/f aspect. Great job...

Reviewer: mrcool Signed
Date: August 10 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Divine Punishment

I loved this story. I liked the f/f aspect. Great job...

Author's Response: I agree that there needs to be more f/f material out there, so I try to put it in when it doesn't feel out of place. Thank you!

Summary:

A mother and daughter find themselves in a uniquely beneficial situation when their snobby and selfish extended family shrinks down to a few inches tall.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Family Reunion
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67655 Read Count: 270285
[Report This] Published: June 30 2011 Updated: August 14 2011
Reviewer: mrcool Signed
Date: November 27 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Financial Woes

One of the BEST stories I have ever read.  Thank you so much.  This was a fantastic read.  Truly appreciate the time and effort you put it.  I'd have to say I think my favorite part was when the small female victim had to clean with her tongue the giant dirty, dingy, flithy white flip flop of her new owner.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. I always enjoy hearing thoughts on my older stories. Glad the flip flop cleaning was as fun to read as it was to write. ;)

Summary:

As the world slowly starts to change, we take a look at a slowly evolving world through a single family's perspective. (Step Family. No actual incest.)


Categories: Butt, Feet, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38469 Read Count: 308500
[Report This] Published: December 17 2011 Updated: September 15 2012
Reviewer: mrcool Signed
Date: February 06 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Two Wrongs

Hey I like your story a lot.  Thanks for contributing.  I especially like the foot related parts!

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[Report This] Published: January 01 1970 Updated: January 01 1970
Reviewer: mrcool Signed
Date: December 27 2012 Title: None

Great, I can't wait to read the next part.  I do hope Samantha and Tabatha shrink some more people and make them suffer at their smelly feet.  Thanks for sharing.



Author's Response: I don't think you'll be disappointed.

Summary:

My Ex Girlfriend shrinks me down and turns me into her helpless slave to serve her stinky, grimy feet.  Lot of off foot action, humiliation, slavery, domination, dirty feet, stinky feet, toejam. Can be very cruel at times.


Categories: Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Object, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Instant Size Change, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3297 Read Count: 32095
[Report This] Published: December 18 2012 Updated: December 18 2012
Reviewer: mrcool Signed
Date: December 19 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 (My New Life)

Hey guys, thank for your the positive feedback.  I'm glad you liked the story.  I will absolutely take your comments into consideration as I continue the story.  Everyone is different and has different opinions so I'll do my best.  Also, I literally had a thought, sat down and wrote this on a whim.  So this was the result lol.  I do have an idea to have her very evil Aunt included into the next chapter.  

Snapped by MrSirk Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

A peek into the life of a shrunken slave girl. 


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Lesbians, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6340 Read Count: 33194
[Report This] Published: August 03 2013 Updated: January 12 2014
Reviewer: mrcool Signed
Date: August 08 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Bubble Baths and Bruises

I love where this story is going. I do hope you incorporate the little slave girl suffering at the feet of her mistresses. 



Author's Response:

Feet is a definite possibility but I like this story more for a chance at interesting character dynamics but don't worry the standard stuff will be in here in some fashion.