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The Diminutive Situation. by Mara Rated: X Round robin starstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

A reclusive honor student named Claire McLane wakes up one day to find herself ant-sized in an all girl's High School with no recollection of how she ended up this way. Claire is forced to fight for her life to survive in a world hundreds of times her own size while trying to figure out how to get back to normal. Will she be able to find out how to get back to normal? Can she avoid the wrath of the Giants around her? Surviving High School has never been this hard... 


Categories: Violent, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Maternal, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: The Amozo Virus Tales
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8407 Read Count: 88500
[Report This] Published: March 21 2012 Updated: May 02 2012
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 01 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Giant Women: Arousing or Nauseating.

Yes, your writing appears to be improving as the story progresses.

I look forward to the next part...



Author's Response:

I'll try my best to make it the best you've or anyone else for that matter has read SafetyPin. I'm very glad your rating on my story has changed as well. :)

THE THIN LINE by Carycomic Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 92]
Summary: "In this world, there is what most people deem reality. And, what they wishfully think of as pure fantasy! We are all that stand between them. We are...the thin line."
---Sir Anthony Banfield
Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Entrapment, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: Female Self-Gigantism Through The Ages, The Knights of Melion
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28509 Read Count: 209682
[Report This] Published: April 06 2012 Updated: September 02 2013
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstar
Date: May 21 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Interesting story.

Well written.

But the chapters are too short.



Author's Response: Shortness is in the eye of the beholder. With exceptions so rare as to be virtually non-existent, everytime I've posted a chapter that exceeded a thousand words, my computer has timed out on me. Forcing me to rewrite and repost the entire chapter in a much briefer fashion. And, it usually takes me an hour or two, alone, to meet the mandatory minimum! So, I can only hope you were able to be consoled by reading all 28 current chapters in one sitting (on the edge of your seat). ;-)

by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: Transformation, Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Action/Adventure (Series), Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, Micro Man, “Adventure is out there!” (Series), “Adventure is out there!” (Series), Movie Theme, Movie Theme, Worldwide (Series), Crosscountry (Series), The Adventures of PA McFalls: the Master Adventurer ~ Series #1, The Adventures of PA McFalls: the Master Adventurer ~ Series #1, Season Premiere, Season Premiere, Adventure Archipelago , Silent Dance, The cougar and the student, A year of misery, The unaware witch, The new secret boyfriend of Jennifer Lawrence, The night I became a giant, Buy Abortion Pill Online, Hunting, Hunting, spying husband, Trilogy Of Teachers, Trilogy Of Teachers, Rough Drafts/ Nate’s Shrunken adventures, Omniworld, Tomoko Kuroki's Planet Interactions, Joseanthony@123, Not just a simple superhero cosplay costume, Mr., Sarah's adventures, Alpha-Beta , Untitled Greenanon Monstergirl Setting, Reduction and Relocation, The adventures of Ares , The adventures of Ares , Karen’s Christmas Gifts To Frosty And Santa
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: January 01 1970 Updated: January 01 1970
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstar
Date: June 17 2012 Title: None

Too much focus on toes, feet, and footwear.
This story would be better if it were broadened into other sexy parts.

 



Author's Response: It's not finished. Try having some patience.

Teachers Pet (Preview Chapters) by EhSteve Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

Johnathon goes in for some chemistry help from Mrs. MacDonald. But gets a lesson in anatomy instead. An excerpt from the Ebook "Shrunken Student Part 1: Teachers Pet"


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Gentle, Giant, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2960 Read Count: 127709
[Report This] Published: June 15 2012 Updated: June 21 2015
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 17 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Orientation

Great story.

Don't leave us hanging.

Please conyinue.



Author's Response:

Will do

Shrinking on the Job by Kickyou Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

You babysit a friends sister while thier parents our out of town when you shink.  It doesn't help that the sister hates you. 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Butt, Feet, Instant Size Change, Toilet, Violent, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6291 Read Count: 135791
[Report This] Published: June 23 2012 Updated: July 01 2012
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 02 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

More! More!

Pretty please...

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 27 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Thanks, Kickyou.

Very good story.

Rather than dropping "bowls" on the floor, it would be even better if Rachel were to release her bowels in the bathroom. :)

 

continuation of survival mom by Darkm Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

A continuation of survival mom

Story is long and really should be in as three separate chapters. Credit goes to the original author. His premise just added to by myself.
Categories: Giantess, Butt, Incest, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11424 Read Count: 54427
[Report This] Published: June 30 2012 Updated: October 24 2012
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: October 25 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Thank you, Darkm.

Good stroke story!

If you cleaned up the grammar and spelling, your stories could be great ones.

 

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed
Date: October 29 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

BTW, who was the original author of "Survival Mom"?

Where can I find this story?

 

Party Time by Kickyou Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Your girlfriend is having a sleep over with two of her girlfriends.  You aren’t invited but your friends convince you to crash it.  What could go wrong?


Categories: Butt, Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Insertion, Mouth Play, Toilet, Violent, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9906 Read Count: 122894
[Report This] Published: July 02 2012 Updated: July 11 2012
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 03 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yes! Party! Party!
Looking forward to the 3rd part. 

BTW, the word is "self-conscious", not "self-concise".

 

Grafted by closetslave1 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

A rapist is shrunk and then incorporated into a woman's vagina as a punishment for his crime...


Categories: Couples , Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11910 Read Count: 56720
[Report This] Published: July 04 2012 Updated: October 25 2019
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 04 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is one of my favourite scenarios - revenge for sexual wrongdoing - giving the offender his "just deserts".

A great story; well written.

Thank you! Thank you!

 

Project Re-Growth by tinyman91 Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 28]
Summary:

The year is 2,300 and life for the male species has evolved them to the point that they're now the "weaker sex".


Hey! Come check out our discord!

https://discord.gg/2H8BRd8rmN


Categories: Adventure, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Slave, Slow Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14396 Read Count: 159424
[Report This] Published: July 22 2012 Updated: September 22 2015
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 24 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Back to school

Pretty good story. Thanks for continuing it.

To make it better, you should give it some direction and add more action. It's beginning to meander a little.

 



Author's Response:

I've got the direction set, as for the action gotta build up to it even if it takes awhile to get there. I'm sorry if it's not smutty enough for you, but that's not my writing style.

Twin trouble by Kickyou Rated: X starstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

While waiting for your girlfriend to get ready, you shrink.  The only person that knows about you shrinking is her twin sister, but she doesn't like you very much.


Categories: Scat, Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Entrapment, Incest, Insertion, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5589 Read Count: 58924
[Report This] Published: August 24 2012 Updated: August 30 2012
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed star
Date: August 25 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So far...too much dialogue, not enough action.

I hope that it gets better. 

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 27 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yes, following the set-up in the first chapter, this chapter has the action I was seeking.

Thank you , Kickyou.

I'm really looking forward to its continuation.

 

MILF by Cheezo Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 32]
Summary:

A story about a boy and his relationship with his best friends' mother.

I will be adding tags to the story as I write it, so if at this stage you don't see the tags you want, stay tuned, I might write about them later on.


Categories: Toilet, Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Couples , Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9172 Read Count: 152715
[Report This] Published: August 29 2012 Updated: September 29 2013
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 21 2012 Title: Chapter 5: A rough night.

Great story, Chezo!

Looking forward to its continuation.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks. Hopefully the wait for the next chapter won't be too long.

Sweat & Tears by kyary Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 56]
Summary:

Joe gets a new roommate, amazonesque basketball player Alex. But it's not all roses when the pheromones released in her sweat seem to have a strange effect on him. The sweet girl might not be so nice forever when her trauma and desires comingle with the state of her dwindling roommate.


Categories: Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Muscle, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14086 Read Count: 142149
[Report This] Published: September 18 2012 Updated: October 23 2012
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: September 19 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great start.

Very good set-up for what's to come.

I love slow shrinking with the femdom element.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, there will be more action from here on out.

Bored Mistress and the shrink spring. by tylby Rated: G starstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

A bored girl finds a bunch of tiny toys to play with.


Categories: Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4091 Read Count: 12194
[Report This] Published: October 12 2012 Updated: October 12 2012
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar
Date: October 12 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Needs a little clean-up on spelling and grammar. Nonetheless, this is a very good story.

I would suggest, however, that it should be rated X.

 

Chemical Imbalance by DragonflyX Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

The city's water supply becomes containimated, read an account of just one of the many scenarios happening all across town.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2051 Read Count: 36114
[Report This] Published: October 21 2012 Updated: October 21 2012
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 21 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great story!

I only wish that the chapters were longer.

 



Author's Response:

i only wanted to do this as a short story, but now i'm going to be doing stories set in the same city and situation.  chapters will be longer for the other stories, and thanks for the review :)

STORIES I'VE TRIED TO DELETE #15 by timescribe Rated: G starstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

malfunctioning software won't let me delete this story

 


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Slow Size Change, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: STAR TREK
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8 Read Count: 23995
[Report This] Published: October 24 2012 Updated: October 31 2012
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed star
Date: October 29 2012 Title: STORIES I'VE TRIED TO DELETE #15

A most confusing story. :(

 



Author's Response:

Yes, it sure is. You have to be quite a heavy fan of both Star Trek and Boston Legal to get the gags.

Denny Crane (Boston Legal character) and Captain Kirk (Star Trek) are both played by William Shatner. I built the nonsense around that.

Reg Barkley (Next Generation Star Trek character) had a history of fantasizing on the holodeck, and hence my desire to use him for a giantess vore fantasy about Dr Beverly Crusher. To bring in the size change elements, I pulled in gts material from animated Star Trek episodes "The Terratin Incident", "The Lorelei Signal" and the original series 1960s Star Trek episode "Shore Leave".

The Kirk scenes though, are set just after the first (1979) movie "Star Trek The Motion Picture"

And then, to keep fans of ever version happy, I've thrown in bits of Voyager, Deep Space Nine, Enterprise too.

I agree it's a most confusing story, but if I write simple vore fantasies, I get people complaining that they want something more complex.

I guess you can't please everyone all the time.

The Big Proposal by Kickyou Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Charlie wanted to propose to his long time girlfriend, so he headed to her job at school.  Will everything go as planned...?


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Butt, Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Entrapment, Insertion, Toilet, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11098 Read Count: 73389
[Report This] Published: November 19 2012 Updated: December 22 2012
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 21 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great ending to this story.
Please continue to write more like it.

A Drawn Together Contest by zaneofbane Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

This story revolves around a common mailman who is shrunk and dragged into a Drawn Together challenge unwillingly. This is a girls only challenge in which Princess Clara, Foxxy Love, and Toot Braunstein must force the unfortunate protagonist to declare a winner. However, should the protagonist declare a winner he must face a special, unknown punishment. Thankfully, the shrinking process has rendered him immune to most sources of damage. How will our hero fair in the newest Drawn Together challenge?

If you haven't seen the show, Foxxy's a black stereotype, Clara's a bigot, and Toot's a fat stereotype. I'll play to their character's, so some people might find them offensive.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15556 Read Count: 110280
[Report This] Published: November 19 2012 Updated: June 19 2013
Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 24 2013 Title: Chapter 7: The Black Box

Wonderful story - full of intense decriptions from both perspectives.

Well done!

Looking foward to futue chapters...

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