Penname: bartek21 [Contact] Real name: tom
Member Since: January 19 2011
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Summary:

Like any good Master, Fujimaru Ritsuka takes care of his Servants and tries to do what's best for them, even if some of the actions he takes in that pursuit can be... ill-advised.


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Growing Woman, Insertion, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Fate Timeline #577,394,168
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18713 Read Count: 12464
[Report This] Published: December 12 2019 Updated: December 12 2019
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: December 12 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW !!

Great story!
Please more!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you enjoyed it.

I am seriously considering writing more stories like this, but this one took me a while to complete lol

Summary:

Daniel and his friends make a deal with their genious friend Rachel.

If they helped her to make some test experiments with her new invention, they can go with her on a trip to the other side of the world...

It's gonna be easy and nothing out of the ordinary right? right?!

 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Sci-Fi
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13503 Read Count: 56149
[Report This] Published: December 30 2019 Updated: January 21 2020
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: December 31 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

wow!
interesting story!
please continue !



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I will!

Summary:

When Vincent goes to a small party for his birthday and gets blackout drunk, he awakens to find that his best friend's older sister, Julia, may have a little crush on him.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Gentle, Legwear, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6560 Read Count: 7341
[Report This] Published: January 15 2020 Updated: January 15 2020
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: January 15 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

interesting story
please continue
please more



Author's Response:

Thank you! Chapter 2 is almost done so expect it in a day or two!

Roommate Wanted by 5952 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Paying rent in college can be hard, but Kelly aims to change that. Follow her on her quest to find a new roommate.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8545 Read Count: 54748
[Report This] Published: March 27 2020 Updated: April 11 2020
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: March 28 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

interesting story.
please more.



Author's Response: There's still a few chapters left, thank you for reading!

The Descent by Tidal Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Detailed description of anatomy, digestion, fear and domination. A descent into the human body, with or without escape, how deep will you go until the end? 

You slip into the lyrical identity (the "I"-Person) named Sam. All you wanted was a nice day with a nice woman you came very close to. The idea of leaving your comfort zone into your first diving adventure turns out even more unusual as an sudden flash strikes you. To make matters worse the woman you're dating plays an obscure role you do not understand. Does she help you?                          As always, enjoy reading alone or in company, Cheers.


Major Categories:  Vore, Giantess, Aware, Couples, Mouth Play, Endo, Humiliation, Unwilling, Digestion, Stomach, Intestine, Violent

Minor Categories: Watersports (indirectly), near Crush


**It pays off to read the Chapters again as I already added more details since the publishment. These updates were definitly necessary to pull out the best of the moments. Some detail is also added to follow the story better.


UPCOMING UPADTES ... I finished writing the story! I am currently in a overreading phase and add more details.

Additional and revised content in Old Chapters including: Deeper Charakters, Jana has now the name Rona, Background hints to the anomaly,

+ 5 New Chapters! roughly 20.000 new words!


Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 

In addition to that, Edgar Allan Poe was a major inspiration and some of his phrases and lines from The Pit and the Pendulum were taken, edited or built in, especially from the Chapter IX.


LAST MAJOR UPDATE 23rd OF JUNE


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Couples, Crush, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17625 Read Count: 51317
[Report This] Published: May 01 2020 Updated: June 22 2020
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: May 12 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Anomaly

great story.
please continue.
I like the details in the story.
I'm sorry, my english is bad.



Author's Response:

thank you! move on reading, this is the best opportunity for you to learn more words and the language in general.
It pays off to read the chapters again as the story is not complete, yet, I will update it and add more of your loved details :*

Summary: Past Featured Story

(Paramouth's First Annual "Nommies" Nominee for Best Story: runner up!)

A Hungry vampire and a humble borrower seem like an unlikely pair of friends, but when times are tough and they're both down on their luck, maybe they can find what they need in each other. 

Edit: 8/12/2021 Back with a MASSIVE chapter. Obligatory "a bit late for 8/8." Hope you all enjoy! (Also, wow! almost a year since I began this! That's wild!) 

The tags listed are all included in the story so far. I'll add more tags as I go.

For the record, the violent, tag does not apply to how the main characters interact, but there is violence in the story. The primary G/t relationships in this story are all gentle/non-fatal.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Fantasy, Gentle, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 90622 Read Count: 108230
[Report This] Published: August 18 2020 Updated: August 12 2021
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: August 13 2021 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: A Day Worth Naming

WOW! I really like this chapter. I am very curious what will happen next.
I missed your writing a lot.
Hehe, I guess I'm addicted to this story. ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot, Bartek. As always, I appreciate your enthusiastic feedback both her and on other platforms. <3

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: April 30 2021 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: A Brief Review

Welcome back.I'm glad you're writing again.

I liked this chapter very much.

Please continue this amazing story.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Bartek! Good to be back! And a welcome back to you as well! It's always a pleasure getting feedback from you. I'm glad you liked the chapter. I'm already working on the next one slowly but surely!

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: September 09 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Unlikely Friends

amazing chapters. I am a little jealous of leo because of "getting to know vela very closely :)".
  hehe leo and vela are Jackie's parents;)?
I can't wait for the next chapters. more please.



Author's Response:

Thank you! And I'm quite jealous of Leo, too! I'm letting him live out a lot of my favorite fantasies. He's a lucky guy! 

And Leo and Jackie are more like... Jackie's support groups. Lol.

and it's gonna take me a bit on the next chapter. I want it to be good. Thank you for all of your consistent reviews! 

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: September 07 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Unlikely Friends

Incredible chapter. Great idea. I liked it very much. Please continue. I look forward to continuing.



Author's Response:

Thank you! And the fun isn't over yet, you won't have to wait long! 

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: September 05 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Unlikely Friends

I see you have great talent. I can't wait for the next chapters.
 (reading the next chapters I feel like a child who got a dream gift for a Christmas tree, for his birthday ;)  )



Author's Response:

Ah! Thank you very much! And I'm so glad you get so excited just to see me posting more content. Then I'm happy to tell you that I just posted another chapter! Very productive weekend. I hope you enjoy it! And thank you again for your consistent feedback and enthusiasm!

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: August 30 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Unlikely Friends

These are amazing chapters. Please continue writing. I like the detailed description.
I can imagine it all what you write.
just WOW!

 My english improve thanks to you? :) ;)



Author's Response:

This review made me smile and then actually laugh out loud. Thank you so much for your continued attention and feedback! And I just love the idea that my pastime is potentially serving you as both a source of entertainment and English practice. 

I'll keep trying to keep my writing as enjoyable and descriptive for you as I have been! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: August 27 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Unlikely Friends

super written chapter.
I look forward to the next adventures.
please continue this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Bartek21! I really appreciate your second review to let me know you're keeping up with the story! I'm working on the next chapter as we speak, so don't you worry! You know, just when I'm not busy with life and work. But it shouldn't be too long! 

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: August 18 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Unlikely Friends

great story.
I'm curious about Leo Vel's further adventures.
more please.
I like such stories non-fatal .
you describe it great.

I'm sorry, my english is bad.



Author's Response:

You certainly don't have to apologize for any level of English skill, I'm just glad you left a review! So, thank you! 

I also really enjoy non-fatal vore, and I wrote this story just to do that. This is the most reviews I have ever received and the story has been posted less than a day, so maybe I will have to make more of it. 

Thank you for your kind words!

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: September 02 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Unlikely Friends

I am more and more curious what will happen next.
I like the idea of adding a werewolf to the vela and leo adventures.
please continue.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad that I've still managed to maintain your interest and curiosity this long! And I thought that the story would benefit from the addition of another lonely straggler/outcast being tossed into the mix. It allows for different dynamics. I'm already working on the next chapter! Thanks for all of your feedback!

Summary:

James is eager and excited to learn about his new promotion! But when he goes to learn what it is, something goes awry leading to quite an adventure to place far far from home. Thankfully a new friend he meets is there to help him get back home and protect him along the way. 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Fantasy, Gentle, Giant, Insertion, Maternal, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48002 Read Count: 108499
[Report This] Published: September 23 2020 Updated: October 05 2022
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: September 23 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Promotion

Interesting story start. Please continue.
Sorry my English is terrible.



Author's Response:

Planning on it! No worries either.

Summary:

A couple of close friends, Emeline and Stephan, spend some quality time together to unwind over a movie after taking their finals for the semester at the University of Augural Sciences. What begins as a casual evening takes a turn for the fantastic, however, when some of the content in the movie inspires a particular reaction in Stephan that leads Emeline down an interesting line of questioning. 

 

This was done as my half of an art trade with Gershwin! My first story of that sort. 

Disclaimer: this story is for entertainment purposes only, it was based on a brief prompt, and any resemblances to persons in real life or in other intellectual property is coincidental. 


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Fantasy, Gentle, Growing Woman, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7471 Read Count: 7517
[Report This] Published: September 30 2020 Updated: September 30 2020
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: October 01 2020 Title: Chapter 1: A Cause for Celebration

WOW! This I can only say WOW! . Amazing story. Amazing description (almost felt like a part of it.)
I have the impression that there will be more chapters of this story ?



Author's Response:

Hey, Bartek! Good to see you in the reviews here! And may I just say, I think your English has gotten better with each one! 

Thank you so much for your kind words! I am glad that you were able to feel immersed in the experience! 

 

At the moment, I have no real plans of continuing this story because it was part of a trade, and I want to get back to writing "Borrowing a Bite," but if I ever need another change of pace, I'm happy that I left this one open ended. 

Summary:

One sudden day, my friend know for all life Laura came to my place and asked me to do something out of the uncommon, how will this turn out?

 

 

A short story just for enjoyment.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Body Exploration, Gentle, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3804 Read Count: 9530
[Report This] Published: January 23 2021 Updated: January 23 2021
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: January 23 2021 Title: Chapter 1: A friend request

I really like this story. :)
I like the details you describe. :)
Is short :(
Sorry my English is terrible. :(



Author's Response:

Oh, don´t worry about that! You write it all good!

And I have to say myself that English is not my native language either, its spanish! :D

Summary:

Me and my girlfiend already had some stag/vixen experiences, but this time we decided that she would be completely on her own for her to enjoy the experience, and I would be there all the time without the second guy ever noticing.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Fantasy, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15205 Read Count: 44134
[Report This] Published: March 20 2021 Updated: September 17 2021
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: March 22 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Introduction

I really enjoyed the chapters.
I like the description of what heroism feels like.(I really like how you describe the details).

Luckily, the cervix wasn't hungry and ate it (And he didn't end up in her womb.) :)
Please continue .

I'm sorry, my English is bad. :(



Author's Response:

Not into womb thingies either (as I said in another review), sorry! but I will continue, that's for sure. Thank you for your review

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: March 20 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Introduction

Interesting start. Please continue.



Author's Response:

Will do for sure! Just give me time as I work full time and this may take some weeks to finish. 

I also like positive criticism: any orthographic mistake, any way to express things better, just tell me so I improve me & the story!

Summary:

 

Ryan lives a normal life for a tiny: he works online, he keeps in shape at the local gym, he games online with friends he never meets, and he tries his best to avoid getting stepped on. Of course it was just his luck that the apartment he lived in got foreclosed on and now he’s been evicted.

Thankfully one of his online friends, Lena, offers to let him crash with her. Of course, having never met, Ryan doesn’t know she’s a bit bigger than he thinks.

 

 

Note: There will be no deaths in this story.

 


Categories: Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 67589 Read Count: 124187
[Report This] Published: April 08 2021 Updated: August 20 2022
Reviewer: bartek21 Signed
Date: April 10 2021 Title: Chapter 1: CH1. Evicted

A very interesting start. Please continue. I can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm currently working on the second chapter, hope to have it out before the end of the weekend!