Penname: slave4ever [Contact] Real name: David R
Member Since: March 20 2011
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Unlucky Events by This is It Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Roland Keys gets thrown into a world of the shrunken as his sister's friend, Katarina, shrinks and captures him for use as an erotic slave with severe consequences for infractions of behavior.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Feet, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4005 Read Count: 32390
[Report This] Published: April 08 2011 Updated: April 09 2011
Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 10 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Good story

Death by Booty by BootyPatrol Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 76]
Summary:

This is a series of short stories involving primarily butt stuff. There will be toilet stuff, so beware.


Categories: Butt, Crush, Instant Size Change, Toilet, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59862 Read Count: 543887
[Report This] Published: April 19 2011 Updated: January 25 2023
Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: May 23 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Plumbing Problems

The stories are a little too short for me. To me they are over before I really have a chance to get in to them.



Author's Response:

That would be why the description says they're short. But thank for the input.

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed half-star
Date: June 01 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Plumbing Problems

These stories suck. they are extremly boring. Make them longer and put more thought into them please



Author's Response:

I appreciate bluntness to some extent, but please use a little more finess. If you don't like them, you say so nicely and explain why.



Author's Response:

I appreciate bluntness to some extent, but please use a little more finess. If you don't like them, you say so nicely and explain why.

I can't help but notice that you left this review on the first story. You'll note that they increase in length as you go down the line. The latest one is over 5000 words.



Author's Response:

I appreciate bluntness to some extent, but please use a little more finess. If you don't like them, you say so nicely and explain why.

I can't help but notice that you left this review on the first story. You'll note that they increase in length as you go down the line. The latest one is over 5000 words. 

Ok, since I can't figure out how to edit these, here's a third one; I just noticed that you reviewed this already and gave it a low rating (which is fine), but don't you think it's a little think it's a tad in excess to review the same story and give it an even lower score?

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed
Date: June 01 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Plumbing Problems

Sorry that last review was somone else on my computer. True these stories aren't my thing. But I'm not as blunt as that last review was

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstar
Date: November 28 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Surviving a Stalker (part 2)

I reaaly liked that one. But then again I really am a butt guy. Its my favorite thing to look at on a woman.

Dave

Stella's New Pet by Kai Leingod Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Stella a young girl who loves excitement and making men into lapdogs, can't help but give an amazing opportunity to a rebellious kid in class.

Was a request I got from DA. Seeing as I didn't have much time and I still have a few other requests I wasn't able to make this a very long drawn out chapter. Will come back someday to get a more satisfying conclusion out there. Stella is acharacter who doesn't belong to me, she belongs to Believerofthesight on DA.

Thanks for the kind words on my last story upload.
Categories: Age of Characters, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2184 Read Count: 12271
[Report This] Published: April 20 2011 Updated: April 20 2011
Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 21 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story. Ireally hope there is more.



Author's Response: One day, but alas today not be that day.

The Black Forest by nancyarcher Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Inspired by the Hansel and Gretle story.  Jakob and Marta are siblings who decided to run away as a way of helping their poor parents out.  Find out what happens when they stray from the path and into The Black Forest...


Categories: Transformation, Giantess, Gentle, Giant
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 36578 Read Count: 119998
[Report This] Published: April 24 2011 Updated: September 03 2011
Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 05 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

This is a change of pace fpr this site and I am really liking it quite a bit. You are a very talented writer. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!  I like to think outside the box and write fantasy.  This story has been a lot of fun to write because it's so different.  Thank you again for the nice review and stars!!!

Easter at my Family's Feet by Ryshen121 Rated: R Round robin starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

First story! 

You shrink down Easter morning and spend the day with the women in your family's huge feet.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Butt, Body Exploration, Feet, Humiliation, Incest, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1122 Read Count: 33371
[Report This] Published: April 24 2011 Updated: May 12 2011
Reviewer: slave4ever Signed
Date: May 14 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great story more pleasw. I wish I was this guy. Especially for the ass worship part.

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 14 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great story. I love it. I wish I was this guy. Especially for the ass worship part.

Dave

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 14 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great story. I love it. I wish I was this guy. Especially for the ass worship part.

Dave

I Was Eaten By Hannah Montana by chugme Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

A mouthplay/vore story told from Hannah's brother, Jackson's perspective.


Categories: Vore, Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Incest, Mouth Play, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1453 Read Count: 11786
[Report This] Published: May 01 2011 Updated: May 01 2011
Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 02 2011 Title: Chapter 1: I Was Eaten By Hannah Montana

Great story. I wish it was longer.

Close by Gheed Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 38]
Summary:

A young man and his stepmom get to know more about each other after an unfortunate accident.


Categories: Mouth Play, Giantess, Butt, Feet, Gentle, Maternal, Slow Size Change, Incest
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29827 Read Count: 353236
[Report This] Published: May 08 2011 Updated: May 25 2011
Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 15 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This was a great chapter. I cant wait to see what happens. You are a very good writer.

Dave

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 14 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great story, I'm loving it. Are you planning any ass worship? That's my kink, I would love to be made to do that at Eric's size.

David



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

That category was mistakenly put in there by me when I set up the story (was getting used to the site controls). Someone else had mentioned this also, so I am working a little bit of that into the story. Seeing how popular it is, I will probably end up writing another story completely devoted to ass worship in the future.

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh I loved this chapter. Eric being at Sandy' s mercy was fantastic. I loved how she tortured him with her ass. More of that if you can please. 

A eight year old's play thing. by johnnyfive22 Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

Mark was in love with his best friend Rachel a freshman in his high school. Little did he know that her little sister who was eight also had a crush on him. And she will use her mind powers to get him. No matter if he likes it or lot.


Categories: Violent, Teenager (13-19), Entrapment, Body Exploration, Feet, Insertion, Mouth Play, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5058 Read Count: 248723
[Report This] Published: May 10 2011 Updated: July 03 2011
Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 10 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Background information on the family. Mark get's a BJ, Well sort of.

This was a very good chapter.

A Little Blackmail by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 28]
Summary:

A brother finally gets the upper hand against his bratty younger sister with a bit of blackmail.  Unfortunately, a chemical mishap causes him to shrink down to a few inches tall, and his sibling is not in a forgiving mood. 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Incest, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Little Blackmail
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30024 Read Count: 516371
[Report This] Published: May 12 2011 Updated: May 14 2011
Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 16 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: A Bowl of Brother for Breakfast

I did read the whole thing and I loved every chapter. I'm glad you left it open ended. This is one of the best stories on here. I would love a sequel.

Dave



Author's Response:

hey, cool, there's 3; ive been thinking about it and im honestly really starting to think "yes" on the sequel at some point

The ladies toilet by amanda Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Lol a  short tale to tease you all..


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Entrapment, Maternal, Toilet, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 880 Read Count: 19301
[Report This] Published: May 14 2011 Updated: May 14 2011
Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 16 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was strangely erotic to me. Thankyou Amanda.

Dave



Author's Response:

Haaaaa thank you it turned me on toooo lol xx.

 

Amanda xx

A Little Blackmail 2: Carly's Pet Brother by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 37]
Summary:

A brother, shrunken to a few inches tall, is held captive by his gigantic younger sister and forced to endure further challenges as she takes revenge for his blackmailing plot.


Categories: Odor, Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Incest, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Little Blackmail
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59553 Read Count: 448480
[Report This] Published: May 19 2011 Updated: May 25 2011
Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 23 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Sole Survivor

Another fantastic chapter. Thank you for writing them so quickly. Im always looking forward to a new chapter.

Dave

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 21 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Inconvenient Surrealism

Wow what a chapter. I loved it. The double teaming in the dream was awesome.



Author's Response:

I just couldn't resist bringing Jenny back for one last visit

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 21 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Tongue Twister

I love how jack is humiliated but feels good in Carly's mouth. It must really be messing with his mind. This was a great chapter.

Dave



Author's Response:

hehe, thanks.  my basic, unspoken goal of each chapter seems to be, "how can i screw with jack's mind even more this time?"

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