Penname: b123 [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: December 16 2011
Membership status: Member
Bio:
Been reading stories on this website and I've decided to give writing a shot. So far been writing at writing.com but eventually plan to post a story here.

https://www.writing.com/main/portfolio/view/dj1234

Feel free to check out my profile, Any feedback is greatly appreciated. I'm not the greatest writer out there but I give it my best shot.
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Witness Transformation Program by mg2sio4 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Tony Capucilli is a low-level employee of the notorious criminal empire known as the Bianchi Family. Power, money, women, he has it all - all he has to do is take care of importing the illegal items the family requests. The only problem is that he's been betrayed. The entire operation is crashing on his shoulders and he needs an out.

Enter witness protection. The updated program ensures complete anonymity for the duration of your natural life, but at a cost. Tony will be forced to choose between being transformed into everything (from his nemesis' daughters' panties to a shrunken servant marketed as the newest premium luxury pampering service) and being hunted down by the most powerful crime lord in the area.

Can Tony last until the Bianchi family is taken down for good?


Categories: Feet, Adventure, Object, Unaware, Butt, Body Exploration, Breasts
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12744 Read Count: 35049
[Report This] Published: May 22 2018 Updated: May 28 2018
Reviewer: b123 Signed
Date: May 23 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Keep Your Friends Close and Your Enemies' Daughters Closer

Amazing story so far. Love the direction it's going. Can't wait to see where it goes next!

I also agree with what others have mentioned, there isn't a lot of transformation stories out there but you're doing a phenomenal job!

It would be pretty awesome to see if Tony ends up somehow with Hawthorne and maybe even with Diane.

One idea also that I think would be pretty funny if he spends some time as some sort of doll but it would almost look exactly like him and could be owned by Mrs. Bianchis and we could get a good view of what's unfolding with them and how they're looking for Tony.

Keep up the great work!

Author's Response:

Thank for reading and the review! I'm trying to balance out the whole situation of randomly transforming into things with the overarching story so the Bianchis, Blaines, Hawthorne, etc are definitely going to be prominent. At the same time, I'm going to write some filler that I find interesting/funny. Hope you enjoy the future chapters!

Where's Your Brother? by daftpunk Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 70]
Summary:

NEW: 31 Aug CHAPTER 9!

A sick, shrinking boy is taken care of by his over-protective but klutzy mother. His sister, jealous of the attention, plans revenge!

An Unaware Giantess focused story.

 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Unaware, Body Exploration, Feet, Gentle, Incest, Maternal, Mouth Play, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14102 Read Count: 172111
[Report This] Published: August 26 2018 Updated: November 01 2019
Reviewer: b123 Signed
Date: August 29 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Shrink Cycle

Hey! Definitely love the direction of where the story is going so far! You got a pretty interesting idea going on with not being able to move. Definitely can see a situation where the mother accidentally sits on him but mistakes him for a pillow and maybe if he gets smaller as a toy by her or other family/friends!

I definitely enjoy unaware situations where the character gets sat on or mistaken for something else.

Can't wait for the second chapter!! Keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response:

yeah thanks for the review and the ideas, i will definitely use them! And im the same, i prefer unaware situations where the character is mistaken for something else so i'm all for writing that. I have a couple of mistaken objects in mind already but i'm keen to hear more from reviewers.

Reviewer: b123 Signed
Date: September 14 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Total Exsemination

Woah... I am just speechless right now!

First I got to say I love how you added extra details and extended the first chapter, it definitely changed the setting/tone of the story. Don't get me wrong, I thought the original one was pretty good but you took it to a whole other level and it shows that you've put in a lot of work to setting up the whole story and the interactions with Jeremy and his family.

This second chapter just continues the awesome flow from the previous one that I got so immerse in it that next thing I know the chapter is over. Simply amazing!

Love the whole scene between the mother and Jeremy and how she is completely obviously of what she is actually doing to him.

Really excited to see where this goes from here. Keep up the amazing writing!

Author's Response:

Thank you! hope you enjoy the rest! 

Reviewer: b123 Signed
Date: April 13 2019 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - A Milking

Morrreee. Lol but this is an amazing story. I’m constantly checking for updates. Really can’t wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: b123 Signed
Date: August 23 2019 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - A Milking

Just an amazing story you have going. Hopefully you still plan to continue it! Hope all is well with you 👍

Winning Ticket by Saturn Knight Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Big Love Studios, home of tall six to seven foot women is also home to the tallest and biggest. "Big Love" herself who stands at a little over six-hundred feet. Unfortunately it costs tens of thousands, even millions of dollars to use her "services"

When a loner named Guy picks up a raffle ticket that costs hundreds of dollars he may get the chance to see her in person.

But is she someone he used to know? Someone he cared for and loved back before she was a gargantuan titan?


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Butt, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Sci-Fi
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14068 Read Count: 35744
[Report This] Published: October 14 2019 Updated: October 14 2019
Reviewer: b123 Signed
Date: October 15 2019 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Departure

This was an absolutely amazing story! I usually don’t go for stories with the woman being hundreds of feet tall but you did an amazing job with this that I was instantly hooked. I really do hope there would be a continuation of Zaya POV and hopefully she finds someone that likes her for who she is. I look forward to your future work!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Glad you liked it.

Yes, Headmistress by bbbs Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

The headmistress at Byron's new school is massive, vuluptuous woman who towers feet above even her tallest students and staff. As if this wasn't enough to make Byron nervous, when she looks at him, he notices something in her expression that makes the hair stand up on the back of his neck. It's too bad he's required to spend so much one on one time with her this year...


Categories: Giantess, BBW, Breast Enlargement, Butt, Crush, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20369 Read Count: 48792
[Report This] Published: November 05 2019 Updated: August 06 2022
Reviewer: b123 Signed
Date: June 25 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Decided to reread this again and it’s so amazing. Hopefully all is well with you and hope you haven’t given up on this story.

As I was reading this, idk why but headmistress does remind me of a character similar to her in littlemacs story.

Reviewer: b123 Signed
Date: November 05 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Absolutely hooked on this story! It’s so good! Really look forward to more interactions with the headmistress. Can’t wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like it. The next couple of chapters will move away from the headmistress for a moment but she'll always be the center of the story.

How to Train Your Brother by Jessajess99 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1287]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After a recent development disorder leaves him much shorter than he used to be, Reese has become academically demotivated, and worries he won't receive his diploma in his final few weeks of high school. But his sister, a recent college graduate who's twice as tall as him, moves back home. Her arrival sparks a change in Reese's attitude to start treating his family - and particularly his amazon of a sister - a lot nicer than anyone would reasonably expect. Eventually his sister realizes she might be able to save him from failing his senior year, and Reese does his best to more than thank her in return.

There was some kind of spam attack on the website which is why it says I have over a thousand reviews. The moderators deleted the fakes but I guess the site still says I have a bunch. The real number is like 250ish or something. 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Muscle, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m, FM/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: How to Train Someone in 23 Days or Less
Chapters: 73 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 222990 Read Count: 1103363
[Report This] Published: November 15 2019 Updated: July 12 2023
Reviewer: b123 Signed
Date: June 22 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Day 4

This is a really great story! Absolutely like These type of interaction with Reese and Olivia and how Reese notices the small details that others don’t such as he’s always being hugged to her chest. Would be really cool if there was a unaware scene with Reese and Olivia or Tracey while he isn’t noticed due to his short height. Keep up the great work and can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I have a few minor "unaware" moments planned like what happened in the latest chapter. But if I ever get far enough along to write the alternate version of the story (where he's a lot shorter) then that'll definitely come into play

Reviewer: b123 Signed
Date: June 23 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Day 6

This was an amazing chapter! Really hard not to notice her butt now. Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

finally expanding the story beyond him just making coffee look at me go

Raising Amazons by felicity Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Peter is your ordinary guy in a not so ordinary family. When his step parents died, he was left with the charge of raising their two amazonian girls. To make things more complicated he now lives in the amazon realm, a world where females are the head of society and males are their supportive lovers.

This is a story of how Peter raises amazons.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Gentle, Humiliation, Maternal, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3949 Read Count: 13347
[Report This] Published: April 08 2020 Updated: April 08 2020
Reviewer: b123 Signed
Date: April 09 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Work Trouble

This is a interesting world you set up. It’s unique compared to other stories here. Really looking forward where you take this! Can’t wait for the next chapter

itty bitty epidemic by ittybittyman Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 37]
Summary:

 

 

Inspired by many of my favorite stories, and by current events. 

A virus is spreading across the globe, one that shrinks men, and makes womens breasts grow. 

This story follows a young man living with his mother and sister during these times. 

After amount of requests I got, I decided to make a kofi, and I will prioritize writing based on donations. However, I will continue writing regardless if I go donations or not and eventually write spin offs in the same universe following other people.

https://ko-fi.com/ittybitty926


Categories: Breasts, Breast Enlargement, Feet, Gentle, Incest, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24980 Read Count: 160495
[Report This] Published: June 12 2020 Updated: June 16 2021
Reviewer: b123 Signed
Date: June 14 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really great start. I’m hooked already! Can’t wait when the mom comes back. Also wonder where his new home would be set up. I can definitely see him forced to stay in his mom’s room to keep an eye on him. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I put the house in the moms room after reading your comment, hope you enjoyed it. 

Reviewer: b123 Signed
Date: June 14 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Another great chapter! Really can see some situations where his mom will take him everywhere maybe in a breast pocket and oblivious to how squished he is in it while she out and about or even unaware situations since he is pretty hard to see now. Look forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: b123 Signed
Date: June 30 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Another great Chapter! Writers block happens to the best of us but really love the directions you have taken with this story. Really love how he’s pretty much ignored while the family talks over him and now is treated kind of like a doll/pet. I think it would be interesting if John has some one on one time with the grandmother, maybe she has to do some errands and while out possibly starts giving too much information of About how lonely she is and things that her late husband use to do.

Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Mommy's Quarantine by Tiny_Significance Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

A young man is living under quarantine with his mother, and decides it’s been too long since he’s seen his girlfriend. His overprotective mother doesn’t quite agree with this when she catches him trying to sneak out. When he insists on his freedom, the maternal instinct to keep him safe kicks in, and she decides to put her foot down… literally. 


Categories: Giantess, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Maternal, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19840 Read Count: 102841
[Report This] Published: June 20 2020 Updated: February 08 2021
Reviewer: b123 Signed
Date: June 21 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Best Laid Plans...

This is a really great start! Really like how you set It up. I can definitely imagine scenes where she is holding him close to her chest and not noticing the his surprised reaction to being close to her breasts. Hopefully there would be some unaware scenes. Keep up the great work and can’t wait for the next chapter!

Moore's Curse (Love, hate & family) by covetous Rated: X starstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

A handsome young man tries to ward off the affection of his mother and the ire of his sister..  sometimes, anyway.

 

A pandemic inspired, taboo shrinking story.


Categories: Breasts, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Odor, Slow Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1878 Read Count: 10637
[Report This] Published: July 09 2020 Updated: July 09 2020
Reviewer: b123 Signed
Date: July 09 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

You're off to an amazing start! Really like how you're setting up the scene and the relationships Alex has with his family. It's totally fine that it's a slow burn, just makes it much more worth it. Really looking forward to more time with the mother. I wonder if she even realizes the affect she has on him. Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the words of encouragement :)

The Wrangham Women by icedragonmo3 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: The BBW Amazon mother and daughter from next door have designs on short, skinny Eric. He doesn't mind all that much.
Categories: Young Adult 20-29, BBW, Gentle, Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49)
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11447 Read Count: 7158
[Report This] Published: September 07 2020 Updated: September 07 2020
Reviewer: b123 Signed
Date: September 11 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is an absolutely amazing story! Loved the interaction between the characters and the details you used for each scene and also how you highlighted the height differences with the characters. Hopefully you continue writing because I can't wait to read what you come up with next! 



Author's Response: Thanks so much! I was once told that I had a talent for putting emotion into the most bizarre of circumstances. This might qualify, lol.

Portal Protection by Jac92 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 32]
Summary:

James is eager and excited to learn about his new promotion! But when he goes to learn what it is, something goes awry leading to quite an adventure to place far far from home. Thankfully a new friend he meets is there to help him get back home and protect him along the way. 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Fantasy, Gentle, Giant, Insertion, Maternal, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48002 Read Count: 87764
[Report This] Published: September 23 2020 Updated: October 05 2022
Reviewer: b123 Signed
Date: September 29 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Accidents Happen

Just came across this story and its absolutely fantastic! Really can't believe that this is your first story. Really love the direction this is going and the interactions between James and Madison feel so genuine. Really can't wait for the next chapter!

Lovely Escapades with James by Lovethetall Rated: X [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

James is a university student who happens to meet some of the most amazing girls. Can one guy really be so lucky?


Categories: Muscle, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Breast Enlargement, Butt, Couples, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Growing Woman, Instant Size Change, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m, FM/f, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4245 Read Count: 8485
[Report This] Published: July 11 2021 Updated: July 18 2021
Reviewer: b123 Signed
Date: July 13 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Dates and Dreams

This is a great start so far! Would be interesting to see how James and Alena interact when James is a lot shorter. Look forward to your next chapter!

From Over the Sea by Greenanon Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

A giantess from a militaristic culture takes a perilous journey over the polar ice caps to find humans to conquer. Meanwhile a young farm boy dreams of a life greater than herding sheep. As her ship crashes upon the rocks near his farm their destinies are intertwined.

A oneshot about a viking/shieldmaiden inspired giantess


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Destruction, Fantasy, Gentle, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: Untitled Greenanon Monstergirl Setting
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13588 Read Count: 6588
[Report This] Published: February 10 2022 Updated: February 10 2022
Reviewer: b123 Signed
Date: February 12 2022 Title: Chapter 1: From Over the Sea

Absolutely amazing story! Just loved the whole interaction between the two

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.