Membership status: Member
Bio:
Categories: Instant Size Change, Body Exploration, Couples , Gentle, Insertion, Unaware, Age of Characters, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Scenes from a Transforming World
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6158 Read Count: 56451





Date: June 15 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This was written beautifully, and it has just the right mix of detail, and left bits and pieces to the imagination as well. I love how you held us by the hand and guided us through yet left places where we could explore on our own.
Your talent is seemingly never ending.
Categories: Age of Characters, Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Humiliation, New World Order, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: Scenes from a Transforming World
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1755 Read Count: 28133





Date: April 01 2006 Title: Chapter 1: A Confession of Pain
wow, that was really dark for you DX. Still a great read,
Author's Response: I do tend to be sunnier--but I\'m in a bit of a dark phase right now. Glad you enjoyed it.
Categories: Transformation, Object, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2156 Read Count: 84282




Date: April 09 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
This story is turning out different then what i had first thought it was going to be like which is always an awesome surprise.
I am interested in where you are going to be taking this next.
Author's Response: More later today hopefully!
Categories: Crush, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5707 Read Count: 23387





Date: May 23 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
great job, enjoyed the whole thing from start to finish.Truly a classic.
Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Crush, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19099 Read Count: 19475





Date: April 27 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Great story, I liked how natural everything felt. Nothing felt like it was forced, it was like reading a actual story. I especially liked the ending, it was fitting. It was nice to see some of the people die as it left you guessing what would happen, but everyone didn't die so it didn't feel cheesy. I can't wait to see what you cook up next. 10 out of 10 on this one rip!
Author's Response: Asukafan, Thank you so much for the comments. I have been a big fan of your writing ever since I discovered GTS on the internet. Your sites are always top notch. I had fun writing \"Joey\'s Clubhouse\". I look forward to posting more stories on your great site.
Categories: New World Order, Vore, Object, Transformation, Teenager (13-19)
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: The Justice Chronicles
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1566 Read Count: 138142




Date: April 30 2006 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Good idea for a story, It has alot of possible routes too, you could even turn it into a series around a similar premise. Good Job
Author's Response: Thanks. I might to that.
When a lovable park ranger his female teacher friend are shrunk to one inch by an ancient potion, they are rescued and taken home by beautiful 18 year old Stephanie. The tiny ranger and teacher learn about life and love on the tiny side at Stephanie's precious feet. Joe takes Stephanie and Sarah the teacher on a wild adventure in his quest to return to normal size.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Feet, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24757 Read Count: 38628




Date: May 09 2006 Title: Chapter 1: The Voodoo Cheeseburger
Wow, great story. I really like how you spent the early part of the story developing everyone and then slowly unleashed the story.
I was going to comment on the lack of paragraphing but i see you fixed that. It really makes a huge difference.
The character development is pretty good, but a little bit more would have helped solidify stephanie and sarah.
Overall though great story and I am looking forward to more.
Author's Response: I am honored by your kind words and appreciate your input, Asukafan2001. Today I used a grammer check feature and discovered much sloppyness which I will try to avoid in the future. I upload the corrected file. I do plan a chapter 2 within a month, and possibly a final chapter 3 dealing with the big trip to New Orleans in search of salvation. Thanks.
Three men and two women volunteer to get shrunk to 2 and a quarter inches tall to infiltrate the island of doctor Nebulous, a scientist creating a nuclear bomb that fits in a suitcase for the Al Qaeda!
Categories: Teenager (13-19)
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4408 Read Count: 9353





Date: May 12 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
great start to what looks like should be a good series. I like the characters and it should be interesting.
Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2602 Read Count: 6345




Date: August 17 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
interesting start, i really like what you have started here. You have alot of possible routes to take with this.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comments, I might add to this this story. Later
Categories: Giantess, Feet, Slave, Teenager (13-19)
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1578 Read Count: 13515




Date: August 24 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
i liked the set up for this alot but it seemed like the ending was a bit forced. A little more expanding woudl have been great, but nonetheless entertaining read!
Author's Response: I really appreciate your comment, Asuka. Your like one of the best writers in this site..., I was really working hard when making this story. But as I commented in my Author\'s notes, if you wish you and other writers are free to write up a following sequel to my story. All I want is just my username under Based on Characters based by...Thank you again.
Categories: Giantess, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3138 Read Count: 24212





Date: August 27 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Madisons Revenge
wow this is your first story? excellent job. Your first attempt is alot better then mine was.
Good Job
Author's Response: Thanks a heap :P
Categories: Feet, Giantess, Teenager (13-19)
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2176 Read Count: 45808




Date: September 17 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Flashback
Looks like your off to a good start, excellent job on the set up. I eagerly await to see how you do with the meat and potatoes.
Categories: Instant Size Change, Adventure, Feet, Gentle, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6140 Read Count: 44966





Date: October 06 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
really good start so far, i like where you are talking this. you even managed to give the characters some definition in a small amount of space.
Good Job.
Categories: Instant Size Change, Adult 30-39, Adventure, Gentle, New World Order, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: Scenes from a Transforming World
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14700 Read Count: 27760





Date: January 15 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
This story demonstrates best why you are the best of the best. You do such a good job weaving in plot with entertainment.
You do perhaps the best job of writing good stories first and foremost. Which in this community is a rarity. So often we see stories that lean so heavily towards the fetish side of things you can hardly find a plot.
I definately am looking forward to seeing the rest this story and the conclusion to the scenes from a transforming world. I was also happy that scott chelgren made an appearance.
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. There are other good writers out there, though, who actually know from plot. NFalc springs to mind, of course, and you're not so bad a writer yourself. ;)
Categories: Transformation, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6105 Read Count: 13540
Date: December 10 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I have just ported over 150 stories, and i have to individually link each story to the author and miss typed your author ID number.
Also in the future email me directly with technical problems. This section is for reviews only.
On June 7, 2008, the Forest Lake High School of San Pequeno, CA disappeared without a trace. A four-year investigation proved inconclusive. Of the estimated three hundred students and faculty present that day, none were found.
This is their story.
Categories: Crush, Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Adventure, Gentle, Violent, Vore, Unaware, Mouth Play, Feet, Insertion, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45340 Read Count: 257235
Date: February 11 2007 Title: Chapter 4: 8:30
this is a very clever and creative story. I am enjoyign the diverse characters and how everyone is a difference size. You have alot of good things going and i look forward to see how you are going to progress this.
Author's Response: Thanks very much, Asukafan.
A college junior is reunited with her brother, years later. However, the older brother in his misguided attempts to protect his family is now a very different man and finds himself in need of his younger sister. How will the Siblings learn to adjust to the changes that come from their new relationship?
Categories: Gentle, Giantess, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6058 Read Count: 64756
Date: February 02 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Arrival at Jenn's Room
Great job, I love how you conveyed the relationship of how he treated her before this all happened. It really brought everything you worked on together.
I wish i could expand on my thoughts but I spent all my time getting the next chapter out in my story. I love what you are doing here, and can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind comments asukafan. I think your great story is inspiring me. I would love to talk to you more though on AIM. I do appreciate the time constraints though. I dont want to tell you how long it took me to write the 2nd chapter! Good news is I have been thinking hard on chapter 3 and I have some great ideas!
Cant wait for more of the first born. i loved the newest part and will coment on it in your story reviews. Al is a little brat isnt she!! Haha. Love that. And wait till jenni finds him! :)
Your friend shows you an odd device that she brought from a tech lab. What is it? You'll have to find out as you go.
In the tradition of the "choose your own adventure" books.
Categories: Adventure, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Incest, Insertion, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9306 Read Count: 193899



Date: February 07 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Ch. 1: The Finding
this was pretty unique and a great idea. I am curious to see how you expand on this. Lots of potential here.
Author's Response: Thank you! The game plan is at about 34-35 chapters eventually, but that could easily change with this style of writing.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Gentle, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15977 Read Count: 232348
Date: February 14 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Linda's thoughts
This could shape up to be an awesome story. Slow shrink stories seem to be coming back in vogue as of late. I really am enjoying the pacing you put forth, it seems rather gradual and laid out.
I am however, interested to see what linda starts to think as her dad get shorter and shorter, and it seems like you are making him get younger and younger. So it will be like she is gaining a little brother and losing a father.
It could be quite emotional for her.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Feet, Entrapment, Incest, Insertion, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1918 Read Count: 45683
Date: March 30 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Mark gets his wish.
interesting start, your writing is excellent. I am curious to see how you take this.