Penname: asukafan2001 [Contact] Real name:
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Summary: A man takes the opportunity to experience his ultimate fantasy--being shrunk in the presence of a giantess who's unaware he's there. Of course, "unaware" can mean many different things. A "Transforming World" Story.
Categories: Instant Size Change, Body Exploration, Couples , Gentle, Insertion, Unaware, Age of Characters, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Scenes from a Transforming World
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6158 Read Count: 54136
[Report This] Published: March 02 2006 Updated: March 02 2006
Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 15 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was written beautifully, and it has just the right mix of detail, and left bits and pieces to the imagination as well. I love how you held us by the hand and guided us through yet left places where we could explore on our own.

Your talent is seemingly never ending.

Summary: A Transforming World story. Revenge is a dish best served small.
Categories: Age of Characters, Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Humiliation, New World Order, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: Scenes from a Transforming World
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1755 Read Count: 27245
[Report This] Published: March 30 2006 Updated: March 30 2006
Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 01 2006 Title: Chapter 1: A Confession of Pain

wow, that was really dark for you DX. Still a great read,

Author's Response: I do tend to be sunnier--but I\'m in a bit of a dark phase right now. Glad you enjoyed it.

One Fine Day... by peter Rated: R starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Jed, a hapless college student, thinks the time is right to approach Kate, a rather nice looking chick who he's had his eye on. Then, he hatches another less, uh, legal plan, and I have a feeling he might end up regretting it!
Categories: Transformation, Object, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2156 Read Count: 74368
[Report This] Published: April 09 2006 Updated: April 10 2006
Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 09 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This story is turning out different then what i had first thought it was going to be like which is always an awesome surprise.

I am interested in where you are going to be taking this next.

Author's Response: More later today hopefully!

Mary by someguy1900 Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Jim awakes microscopic and tries to survive with hundreds of others in Mary's house.
Categories: Crush, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5707 Read Count: 20843
[Report This] Published: April 21 2006 Updated: April 21 2006
Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 23 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great job, enjoyed the whole thing from start to finish.Truly a classic.

Summary: A money hungry, buisness savaay 18 yr. old named Joey shrinks himself and four of his closest friends during his latest money making scheme. Plenty of action and adventure while the group of 1 inch boys explore Joey's 20 yr. old sister's bedroom. Joey daydreams throughout the story of his sister becoming a 200ft. rampaging giantess.
Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Crush, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19099 Read Count: 18388
[Report This] Published: April 25 2006 Updated: April 25 2006
Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story, I liked how natural everything felt. Nothing felt like it was forced, it was like reading a actual story. I especially liked the ending, it was fitting. It was nice to see some of the people die as it left you guessing what would happen, but everyone didn't die so it didn't feel cheesy. I can't wait to see what you cook up next. 10 out of 10 on this one rip!

Author's Response: Asukafan, Thank you so much for the comments. I have been a big fan of your writing ever since I discovered GTS on the internet. Your sites are always top notch. I had fun writing \"Joey\'s Clubhouse\". I look forward to posting more stories on your great site.

Summary: Ben, a desperate man who has lost his job, turns to crime to feed his impoverished family. But the new penalties for this sort of crime are...unpleasant.
Categories: New World Order, Vore, Object, Transformation, Teenager (13-19)
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: The Justice Chronicles
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1566 Read Count: 120873
[Report This] Published: April 26 2006 Updated: May 01 2006
Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 30 2006 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Good idea for a story, It has alot of possible routes too, you could even turn it into a series around a similar premise. Good Job

Author's Response: Thanks. I might to that.

Summary:

When a lovable park ranger his female teacher friend are shrunk to one inch by an ancient potion, they are rescued and taken home by beautiful 18 year old Stephanie. The tiny ranger and teacher learn about life and love on the tiny side at Stephanie's precious feet.  Joe takes Stephanie and Sarah the teacher on a wild adventure in his quest to return to normal size.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Feet, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24757 Read Count: 33430
[Report This] Published: May 07 2006 Updated: March 07 2012
Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 09 2006 Title: Chapter 1: The Voodoo Cheeseburger

Wow, great story. I really like how you spent the early part of the story developing everyone and then slowly unleashed the story.


I was going to comment on the lack of paragraphing but i see you fixed that. It really makes a huge difference.


The character development is pretty good, but a little bit more would have helped solidify stephanie and sarah.



Overall though great story and I am looking forward to more.

Author's Response: I am honored by your kind words and appreciate your input, Asukafan2001. Today I used a grammer check feature and discovered much sloppyness which I will try to avoid in the future. I upload the corrected file. I do plan a chapter 2 within a month, and possibly a final chapter 3 dealing with the big trip to New Orleans in search of salvation. Thanks.

QUANTUM FLUX by Ace Corona Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Three men and two women volunteer to get shrunk to 2 and a quarter inches tall to infiltrate the island of doctor Nebulous, a scientist creating a nuclear bomb that fits in a suitcase for the Al Qaeda!


Categories: Teenager (13-19)
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4408 Read Count: 7570
[Report This] Published: May 12 2006 Updated: May 12 2006
Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 12 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great start to what looks like should be a good series. I like the characters and it should be interesting.

Summary: In this story, Alex, age 22, thinks he can get away with cheating on his girlfriend. The date doesn't go quite as planned.
Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2602 Read Count: 5935
[Report This] Published: August 17 2006 Updated: August 17 2006
Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 17 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

interesting start, i really like what you have started here. You have alot of possible routes to take with this.

Author's Response: Thanks for the comments, I might add to this this story. Later

Nothing but a flea by Vord Rated: PG starstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Mike Ritehook was always the giant around his school, with being popular, athletic, and having a line of girls hoping he would ask one of them on a date, but he would always break their heart. But now his problem comes face to face as one girl wants vengeance for what he did to those broken hearted girls he went out with.
Categories: Giantess, Feet, Slave, Teenager (13-19)
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1578 Read Count: 12363
[Report This] Published: August 24 2006 Updated: August 24 2006
Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 24 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i liked the set up for this alot but it seemed like the ending was a bit forced. A little more expanding woudl have been great, but nonetheless entertaining read!

Author's Response: I really appreciate your comment, Asuka. Your like one of the best writers in this site..., I was really working hard when making this story. But as I commented in my Author\'s notes, if you wish you and other writers are free to write up a following sequel to my story. All I want is just my username under Based on Characters based by...Thank you again.

Summary: Two friends get shrunk at their friends house and try to alert her of their presence before its too late.
Categories: Giantess, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3138 Read Count: 22941
[Report This] Published: August 27 2006 Updated: November 08 2006
Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 27 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Madisons Revenge

wow this is your first story? excellent job. Your first attempt is alot better then mine was.

Good Job

Author's Response: Thanks a heap :P

Summary: Hank Acryl, was so exicted about tonight....His parents were going away for the evening, and it would be him, his 2 year old babysister, and a very attractive babysitter in the house...But after an accident with a shampoo, Hank is shrunk down and have to reach the babysitter before it's too late, while also trying to fight off his dirty side of what he sees in the babysitter.
Categories: Feet, Giantess, Teenager (13-19)
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2176 Read Count: 41382
[Report This] Published: September 16 2006 Updated: September 22 2006
Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: September 17 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Flashback

Looks like your off to a good start, excellent job on the set up. I eagerly await to see how you do with the meat and potatoes.

Foiled! by Yggdrasil Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary: A romantic rival tries to get revenge on a fellow college student. He fails, instead giving his intended victim everything he could've wanted - for one whole day.
Categories: Instant Size Change, Adventure, Feet, Gentle, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6140 Read Count: 41560
[Report This] Published: October 06 2006 Updated: October 13 2006
Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 06 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

really good start so far, i like where you are talking this. you even managed to give the characters some definition in a small amount of space.

Good Job.

Peek-a-Boo by DX Machina Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: A man awakes in a grocery store, three inches tall, his memory gone. He stows away with a giantess and goes back to his home, where he plots his next move. Soon, the next move becomes an all-out assault on the League--and a lot of danger.  Transitioning World Story
Categories: Instant Size Change, Adult 30-39, Adventure, Gentle, New World Order, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: Scenes from a Transforming World
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14700 Read Count: 25611
[Report This] Published: October 21 2006 Updated: January 19 2007
Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 15 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This story demonstrates best why you are the best of the best. You do such a good job weaving in plot with entertainment. 

You do perhaps the best job of writing good stories first and foremost. Which in this community is a rarity. So often we see stories that lean so heavily towards the fetish side of things you can hardly find a plot. 

I definately am looking forward to seeing the rest this story and the conclusion to the scenes from a transforming world. I was also happy that scott chelgren made an appearance.



Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words.  There are other good writers out there, though, who actually know from plot.  NFalc springs to mind, of course, and you're not so bad a writer yourself.  ;)

Pink by d-5 Rated: X starstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: A man finds out how deveasting life can be as a foot.
Categories: Transformation, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6105 Read Count: 12491
[Report This] Published: December 10 2006 Updated: December 10 2006
Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed
Date: December 10 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have just ported over 150 stories, and i have to individually link each story to the author and miss typed your author ID number. 

 Also in the future email me directly with technical problems. This section is for reviews only.

Summary:

On June 7, 2008, the Forest Lake High School of San Pequeno, CA disappeared without a trace.  A four-year investigation proved inconclusive.  Of the estimated three hundred students and faculty present that day, none were found.

This is their story.


Categories: Crush, Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Adventure, Gentle, Violent, Vore, Unaware, Mouth Play, Feet, Insertion, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45340 Read Count: 213714
[Report This] Published: January 19 2007 Updated: June 24 2009
Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed
Date: February 11 2007 Title: Chapter 4: 8:30

this is a very clever and creative story. I am enjoyign the diverse characters and how everyone is a difference size. You have alot of good things going and i look forward to see how you are going to progress this.

Author's Response: Thanks very much, Asukafan. 

Summary:

A college junior is reunited with her brother, years later. However, the older brother in his misguided attempts to protect his family is now a very different man and finds himself in need of his younger sister. How will the Siblings learn to adjust to the changes that come from their new relationship?


Categories: Gentle, Giantess, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6058 Read Count: 61310
[Report This] Published: February 01 2007 Updated: March 14 2009
Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed
Date: February 02 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Arrival at Jenn's Room

Great job, I love how you conveyed the relationship of how he treated her before this all happened. It really brought everything you worked on together. 

I wish i could expand on my thoughts but I spent all my time getting the next chapter out in my story.  I love what you are doing here, and can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind comments asukafan. I think your great story is inspiring me. I would love to talk to you more though on AIM. I do appreciate the time constraints though. I dont want to tell you how long it took me to write the 2nd chapter! Good news is I have been thinking hard on chapter 3 and I have some great ideas!

Cant wait for more of the first born. i loved the newest part and will coment on it in your story reviews. Al is a little brat isnt she!! Haha. Love that. And wait till jenni finds him! :)

Summary:

Your friend shows you an odd device that she brought from a tech lab.  What is it?  You'll have to find out as you go.

In the tradition of the "choose your own adventure" books.


Categories: Adventure, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Incest, Insertion, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9306 Read Count: 154270
[Report This] Published: February 06 2007 Updated: December 03 2007
Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstar
Date: February 07 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Ch. 1: The Finding

this was pretty unique and a great idea. I am curious to see how you expand on this. Lots of potential here.

Author's Response: Thank you!  The game plan is at about 34-35 chapters eventually, but that could easily change with this style of writing. 

Father's Daughter by Vord Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: After his wife died, a father learns more struggles he will have to face as he begins to shrink. And only his 17 year old daughter can be the one to help him out, if she lets him.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Gentle, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15977 Read Count: 195254
[Report This] Published: February 11 2007 Updated: March 13 2007
Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed
Date: February 14 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Linda's thoughts

This could shape up to be an awesome story. Slow shrink stories seem to be coming back in vogue as of late. I really am enjoying the pacing you put forth, it seems rather gradual and laid out. 

I am however, interested to see what linda starts to think as her dad get shorter and shorter, and it seems like you are making him get younger and younger. So it will be like she is gaining a little brother and losing a father. 

It could be quite emotional for her. 

Undaunted by VenusR Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: A man presents his wife with a shrinking potion, wanting her to use it on him. He expresses to her his fetish for giant women. In a fit of confusion and disgust, his wife leaves the house indefinitely. Determined to put his potion to get use and to find a way to express his fetish, the man turns to the only other woman around--his teenage daughter. This story is quite the reverse of other GTS/SM stories you may encounter. (The title is subject to change.)
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Feet, Entrapment, Incest, Insertion, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1918 Read Count: 43545
[Report This] Published: March 30 2007 Updated: March 30 2007
Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed
Date: March 30 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Mark gets his wish.

interesting start, your writing is excellent. I am curious to see how you take this.