Reviewer: Theodous Signed
Date: May 27 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue
You know, I've read a great many giantess themed stories over the years. Heck more than I'd care to tell... But stories of this caliber are truely a rare thing. And dispite there being little to no mention of size play in the first two chapters I was hooked right from the start. Because unlike alot of authors. You took the time to lay a foundation for the relationship between your characters. And slowly build from that, in a way that made it very easy to believe everything that happened.
Which in turn made the road to self discovery between Eric and Vanessa that much more enjoyable.. Every chapter it seemed, was and adventure in itself. And always ended on a note that left me dying to see more. *Chuckles* Which admitedly kind of goes for the ending of the story too. But then, after having read the extra chapter, I've come to realize that there simply wasn't a way to end this story. Because like alot of people, I'm sure, I would have loved to have seen their whole lives played out. :) But in the end, I was very happy with the way the two came to utterly depend on one another. Even if Vanessa's secret was a little out of character for her. :)
Having said that, I'll be the first to admit that I absolutely loved the more intimate aspects of the story. Starting with the foot play. Which has always been one of my bigger kinks. And I'll be damned if you didn't do an amazing job at describing everything from both characters perspectives. Including things like the smells and sweating and such. Which many authors seem to just completely forget about. And then of course the brief encounter with Sandy. Reaalllly would have loved to have seen her go a little furether with things. Or maybe for Eric and Vanessa to explore some anal play. But then, I guess it just didn't really fit the characters. :)
And lastely, as far as suggestions for future stories. Hmmm well, I'd love to see you tackle something in the way of love story.. Like say, a shy, bookish gal has fallen for a popular guy at school. But is far to shy to make her feelings known. And in an act of desperation shrinks him down and whisks him away, in hopes of making herself heard. Just one of those ideas I've always wanted to see put to paper. ^.^