Reviewer: sporadicx Signed
Date: February 07 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Please choose to continue writing! I have read most of your stories posted on this site and I am a huge fan of your work, writing, perspectives, etc.!!!
I think you should continue with the way the plot is going, except there should be some factor of decay in the story. For example, the vortex constantly makes them larger so that they end up destroying the world. That way the story can actually come to an end, and the same writing can progress and continue to be enjoyed. More scenarios involving their sex life!
Also, I specifically love of your story, Field Trip to Hell. Hope one day you may decide to add a little to it! Hope you can find the interest/time to add on to some of you stories.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! If I were to continue any of my old stories, Field Trip To Hell would be a very strong candidate for that because it seems to be very popular with a lot of people for some reason. Not entirely sure why... but for that same reason I'm a little afraid to continue it because I don't want to take it in a direction where people would no longer like it, so if I get around to continue it I need to figure out a way to do it that everyone would like... do you have any ideas?