Reviewer: christiawi9 Signed 
Date: March 22 2014
Title: None
Since I've been writing lately I won't be able to give you a full review since my brain is like "Argh, stop readin. Just sit down and zone out for a week". However, I can easily tell that you have a good writing strategy making it easy and fun to read your stories.
You asked which direction I was hoping for. Reading your decription of the story it says that "the inhabitants greet their visitors" and "begin changing them." This implies to me that there are more than just one "visitor" and that the amazons do something to them to change them.
The direction I initially thought the story was going to go was that the female survivors slowy get transformed into amazons just like the inhabitants of the island while the males remain the same. I'm not saying you need to go in that direction but it was the one I was initially thinking.
Author's Response: By change, I meant personality wise in Scott, Jeff, and a few more I have not yet introduced to the story. As for female survivors, I was not going to do that originally, but I am open for changes. Also, I wanna say that the Amazon's, aren't the only ones on the island...
