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[Report This] Published: January 01 1970 Updated: January 01 1970
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Date: June 01 2016 Title: None

All throughout Amber's first encounter with Eliot, while Jeanne is losing her composure and trying to control the narrative, I kept screaming at Amber in my head, "Speak up!  He'll never see you as a person until you get into a verbal exchange with him."  So that's sort of taken care of now.

It's also slightly demoralizing (if predictable) that Eliot is only visibly put off by the idea of being attracted to the six-inch-tall topless girl when he realizes she's all but his step-daughter.  Not that he stops being attracted, he just now feels ashamed of it.  Neither Eliot nor Amber will be able to plausibly deny that.  Oh, Jeanne's gonna twist that knife when they get back.

So, what exactly is supposed to be accomplished by calling the cops, other than Amber ending up in a specimen bottle at Area 51?  I'm sure exposition regarding any possible reversibility of Amber's shrinking will likely wait until the climax of the story, but Amber seems to think it's possible (although she thinks a lot of things that don't make sense).  I'll have to go back and re-read the passages with Jeanne, but I'm surprised none of Amber's captors have threatened her with "You'll just end up as a lab rat if I turn you in."



Author's Response:

In Eliot's defense, he offers her the tissue a moment before discovering their relation. Doesn't mean it didn't take him a little bit to get there.

Also, the whole Area 51 thing has been brought up briefly, in Amber's thoughts. She thinks it over in "Sarah." She's convinced herself that life would be better as a lab specimen than as a sex toy, and who's to say if she's wrong? Even if she's able to unshrink, which, yes, she does seem to think is possible, it seems unlikely that "The Big Guys" will be willing to let her stroll back so easily into public life, though, considering the whole project is still being kept secret.

As for Eliot not bringing it up: I think Eliot is looking at turning Amber in as more of the "right" thing to do. You see a crime; you bring it to the police. It's the easiest solution to morally deconstruct as being the god thing to do, at least when it comes to Amber's fate. How he feels about what it will do to him and Jeanne is a secondary, selfish thought, even if it happens to be the reason he hasn't done it yet.

And Amber doesn't exactly talk openly with Jeanne or Megan about being turned in to the police too much these days. I'm sure if she did, she'd probably receive a healthy dose of Area 51-ing.

Reviewer: Olo Signed
Date: June 01 2016 Title: None

Yeah,  and Amber's better about keep her dick covered in front of Eliot than her tits.

I just re-read the "better a lab rat than a sex toy" colloquy in Amber's head, but I'm trying to track her objective evaluation of her captors' motives. Surely Jeanne doesn't think being a lab rat could be preferable. Amber's gotten very good at spotting others' self-interest buried inside professed motives when it comes to her own survival, but now she needs to leverage it for escape.

Stopping short of revealing the Jeanne-Megan tag-team to Eliot was extremely wise of Amber, and highlights her maturity. If Amber has the time, letting Eliot reflect on his own desires for a doll-sized girl at his mercy ought to lead him to an accurate estimation of how Megan treated Amber without having to throw Jeanne's complicity in his face. But she might not have the time, if Eliot either calls the cops or goes back to Jeanne to let her work him over.

 

Reviewer: Olo Signed
Date: June 01 2016 Title: None

I wish someone had sent this chapter to me back when I was a high school D&D-playing nerd as a kind of PSA:  "It Gets Better."



Author's Response:

"Blessed are the meek: for they shall inherit the earth" and all that. ;)

Reviewer: Olo Signed
Date: June 01 2016 Title: None

More like, Blessed are the geek, for you shall marry a half-elf ranger who can polish your knob like a gelatinous cube.



Author's Response:

I was thinking of making a similar pun... "Blessed are the geeks, for they shall inherit the girth."

Reviewer: Olo Signed
Date: June 02 2016 Title: None

Amber is a therapist who you don't have to pay and who you can jerk off around (or, if you like, with).

That's a sweet deal.

Reviewer: Olo Signed
Date: June 05 2016 Title: None

That's the thing about social animals evolved to establish dominance; everyone instantly knows who's the low monkey on the pole.  Amber has known for months exactly where Eliot rates, and she couldn't keep pretending otherwise.

She hobbled herself, however, by claiming to have lied about Jeanne.  Eliot was ready to believe every word Amber said, and now she's given him an opening to doubt her whenever it suits his needs.  Just like any other under-represented minority, Amber has to be twice as lucid and reasonable as people who are neither trans nor five inches tall in order to be accorded the same respect.

But I'm sure it feels good in the short-run.



Author's Response:

Yeah. Amber shot herself in the foot there. Guilt and adrenaline is a hell of a drug combination. Of course, she waited until after discovering that he was not, in fact, calling the police.

She forgot to remember her powerlessness and became impatient.  A better Plan D might have been to bide her time. She needs to start going to MA meetings again.

Reviewer: Olo Signed
Date: June 05 2016 Title: None

It's clear that Amber has decided that calling the cops is (still) her most realistic plan for escape, but I don't think she's decided that she her best possible deliverance isn't a return to Cathy.  It's a longshot, sure, but it holds out the possibility of reversing the shrinking without having to visit Area 51.  But what if Cathy no longer has access to the antidote?  Is being stuck tiny with Cathy worse than trying to manipulate Jeanne/Eliot or going to the cops?  I'm quite sure I'm confused about this because Amber is confused.



Author's Response:

Yeah. Cathy is... Cathy. Amber feels a lot of things for and about her, often in different directions. Cathy is her biggest hope, and simultaneously (for reasons that aren't too hard to figure out) a towering source of resentment. She tends to go in phases in how she prioritizes her choices for escape.

Reviewer: Olo Signed
Date: June 11 2016 Title: None

I think this is the second time that we've seen full-sized Amber ruminating about Megan.  Did they meet before she became small, or are we to understand this as some sort of flashback-fusion, TinyAmber reflecting on her historical fecklessness as a contrast to her current predicament?

It seems to me that the primary cost of parental molestation/abuse is the violation of trust, and it's obvious that Amber's trust in her mother has been shattered somehow.  I don't know if Ashley has a plan to address this, but if she does it's oblique to the point of bordering on gaslighting.



Author's Response:

It's a flashback fusion thing. Amber also referenced Jeanne while she was staying at Cathy's.

Ashley is difficult to write, because she's a character defined by herself and even Amber for her objectivity, while very clearly acting on her own opinions. She holds a main role in Act II without ever really being a character in the full sense.

Reviewer: Olo Signed
Date: June 11 2016 Title: None

Okay, now that we're talking about malevolent (or at least non-benevolent) therapists, I have to ask:  Have you seen (any of) the television series Hannibal?



Author's Response:

No. I'm guessing I should?

Reviewer: Olo Signed
Date: June 11 2016 Title: None

Yes, but not until you're finished.



Author's Response:

This has only piqued my interest.

Reviewer: Olo Signed
Date: June 24 2016 Title: None

It's like when you've been stressing out over finals and your immune system is barely holding it together, and then finals are over and that's when you finally get sick.  Amber is in the care of two giants who nominally agree that making her feel safe is a priority, and she's had some hints that she might be able to successfully herd them towards some avenue of escape, so of course she drifts off into a waking (and wanking) fantasy of her entire world being devoured by the Vulva of Willendorf.

Amber's had a rather thorough tour of Megan, but I'm pretty sure's she's never seen the inside of her stomach.  And yet Amber included (lovely hot gullet cruel) vore in her fantasy.  I guess watching Jeanne work on chicken wings* helped with the fetish creep.

Nice urban renewal, BTW.  I think every city planner should have to publicly answer the question, "What local eyesore do you hate so much that you would be willing to die in a giantess's cunt in return for her destroying it?"  Then offer death inside her rectum and see what else they want removed.

Do I think Eliot is dumb enough to tell Jeanne that Amber screamed at him to jerk off on her and get it over with?  Yes.  Yes I do.

* I think I've got Amber's five-inch-tall camgirl business model worked out now.



Author's Response:

Nah. As much as people on this site love to toss tinies into tummies and then miraculously save them via vomit, I don't think survival would really be an option in real life. Not without excessive burns anyways, and, despite everything, Megan did a pretty good job of not leaving any signs of abuse on Amber up until the very end.

Truthfully, Megan's rearranging of Philadelphia had more to do with her desire to be the tallest than aesthetic. I like Reading Terminal too much to want it flooded by giantess cum. Comcast Center can go to hell though.

And explain this business model because Amber's curious. Sexy kitchen time? Shakin' and bakin'?

 

Reviewer: Olo Signed
Date: June 24 2016 Title: None

Actually, I stole it. The author hasn't really explained it, but the tinies in this universe seem to have miraculous powers of breath-holding and acid-resistance:

http://giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=3993&textsize=0&chapter=9



Author's Response:

Ah yeah. That story's a classic. Shame it was never finished.

Reviewer: Olo Signed
Date: February 03 2017 Title: None

I miss this story so much....



Author's Response:

lmao I was just about to work on a chapter.

Reviewer: Olo Signed
Date: February 06 2017 Title: None

"And then...and then we can both go down on you or something?" Jaysus. You can smell the Pornhub from here.

Amber never gets to learn anything the easy way, does she?  Pimps are terrible people, and the best you can expect from them is sound long-term business sense.  Amber isn't preared to demand that from Tammy & Ryan, and so another of her safe spaces shrivels up.

So very glad to see you still at it.



Author's Response:

I was feeling ready to get back at it. :)

I'm probably not going to be updating with nearly as much frequency as I was in the past. Just going to write a chapter when I feel like it. I think my writing is better when I have time to breathe.

Glad you enjoyed.

 

Assistant by Nyx Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

The story of Ambrose, assistant to a cruel and powerful ruler.


Categories: Giantess, Crush, Destruction, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Insertion, New World Order, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19324 Read Count: 42863
[Report This] Published: April 09 2015 Updated: April 09 2015
Reviewer: Olo Signed
Date: April 09 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Merciless and delectable, as always. I wonder if Ambrose isn't the first such Assistant to receive the honor of the Tyrant's special attention. If she ever goes through with the notion of granting him the power of increasing his size, I quite imagine Sophia will be featured in his initiation. 



Author's Response:

I don't think that I'm capable of writing about merciful giants/giantesses, I'm afraid. Ambrose probably isn't the first Assistant to capture the Tyrant's attention...she's fond of messing with people. I suppose that when one is immortal and has godlike powers, he/she needs to keep themselves entertained somehow. It would be interesting to see what Ambrose would do, given similar abilities. Perhaps he'd keep his humanity and refuse to play her games. Or perhaps he'd be as bad as the Tyrant.

Queen Bee by Xxana Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Kira decides that the Delta-Phi sorority could use new leadership, and deposing the current queen bee proves to be even more fun than she could have imagined.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Odor, Scat, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17473 Read Count: 67864
[Report This] Published: May 07 2015 Updated: May 09 2015
Reviewer: Olo Signed
Date: May 08 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Shelved

I hope this festival of cruelty is just getting started.  Love the "shortcake."

Apple of Her Eye by Xxana Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 44]
Summary:

Anna finally agrees to let her boyfriend be shrunk.  She is hesitant, but hopes to grow into the role of his dominating giantess.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Odor, Scat, Slave, Unaware, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45692 Read Count: 395247
[Report This] Published: May 10 2015 Updated: June 03 2015
Reviewer: Olo Signed
Date: May 10 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Please?

As a dude who hasn't had a lot of luck getting his female partners into size fantasy, I'm extremely envious of Kal.  I'm sure it'll be everything he's hoping for and no one will have any regrets.



Author's Response:

From personal experience, I can say that it only takes a little bit of work and understanding.  Luckily, I have found success in finding partners in life who enjoy the fantasy.  One delves into the reversal of traditional roles, with the powerful woman and helpless man.  I hope to show the full spectrum of what that relationship entails.

Reviewer: Olo Signed
Date: May 13 2015 Title: Chapter 11: I Hate Mushrooms

I have to admit, I've been refraining from posting any more reviews of this story because I was afraid I would jinx it.  My initial review was rather sarcastic; based on your other stories, I had expected Anna to very rapidly escalate from "You asked for this!" to "Now you're my butt plug--sucks to be you!"  Not that I have a problem with that; I wouldn't have read your other stuff if I did.  But I could not be more pleased that the pace and direction you have taken with the story has defied my expectations.

I love the slow "awakening" of desires and possibilities in Anna, and while it's great that Kal has given his enthusiastic consent (for everything so far), I'm glad that his voice and opinions are (literally) muted.  This is Anna's journey, and the liberation of desire is (for me) the whole point of being a giantess.  Rachel is clearly farther along the spectrum towards dominance, and Candy has a profit motive for encouraging Anna to regard Kal as property, but I like that Anna is taking things step by step and deciding what she really wants.  Once Anna has pushed her own boundaries futher, it would be interesting to hear what she might say to another "gi-curious" customer wandering the aisles, wondering just how gentle she would be with a tiny dude.

I was also very gratified by the "Knight's Quest" chapter, which I expect will have high replay value.  Not only was it a rare example of mutually-consensual vaginal insertion from a female perspective, the action and the imagery and the dialogue were all fresh and compelling.  I know how tough it is to work over the same familiar anatomy and try to find a new take that gets the juices flowing, and I admire how you've brought out the details of Anna's sensations and emotions.  I particularly cherish her attempt to describe to Rachel what it felt like to have Kal in her pussy.  I'm looking forward to board game night.  I wonder if Rachel has a boyfriend whom she might like Kal to "convert."

One part of my first review was sincere: I am insanely jealous of Kal, even if Anna eventually decides to rent him out to Rachel and friends for use as toilet paper.



Author's Response:

I have to admit, this review must have taken some serious forethought.  I appreciate such detailed and intellectual feedback.  Indeed, this is uncharted territory for me, but it's quite refreshing.  Not every giantess must be cruel, in fact most are probably not.  One dimensional characters and intense imagery are gratifying, but not sine qua non.  I fully intend to slowly immerse Anna in more colorful characters and circumstance, but something so new to her will take time to share, especially in open fashion. 

Reviewer: Olo Signed
Date: May 15 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Bubbles on the Brain

Loving it, of course.  Anna's really pushing herself.  But what happens when Kal says no to one of her proposals?  That's where the silicon meets the membrane, so to speak.

Reviewer: Olo Signed
Date: May 17 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Cloud Nine

That exchange between Anna and Ivy was very nice.  It's one thing to share your desires with the person you hope will fulfill them, and it's another to share them with someone who will at best give you advice and at worst judge you for them.  Add in the surreal novelty of shrinking people, and the conversation becomes much more fraught.  I'm genuinely apprehensive to discover what Ivy has come up with.

On a much more banal note, it seems that Ch. 19 'Awaken' and Ch. 20 'Head in the Clouds' are identical.  I do hope you didn't mistakenly overwrite a chapter.



Author's Response:

Indeed a small oversight, and I appreciate you pointing it out.  Naturally, more is always on the way.  The story may have some twists and turns yet.