Built on my story "Forbidden Dish," this story will include various guys and girls who enter the resteraunt that advertises live Vore of humans; " The Forbidden Dish." There is vore in every chapter.
It was great to get more perspective on the employees. I like the fact that they are starting to shape up as believable people with different preferences and feelings about what goes on in the restaurant.
I enjoyed the use of Vera and the dramatic tension from the card game. I enjoyed the cruelness of the character.
I enjoyed Lindsay's statement that she was supposed to tell Justin it was his last chance to back out, but since there was nothing he could do about it she wanted to eat him and that's that. I also really enjoyed the story following the character that changed his mind. Even when the character started out wanting to go I believe apprehension and last minute mind changing is more believable. I don't like the character to be too willing.
This brings us back to the subject of how any of us willing prey might actually react if we found ourselves in a situation where a predator is willing/ able to actually consume us. One would most likely have second thoughts and as a result I try to occasionally work that into stories.
Thanks for the review and the rating. Your feedback (no pun intended) is very gratifying as well as helpful for me when I write the next chapter. I hope you continue to enjoy this series.
A depressed young man seeks psychological treatment, but ends up getting more than he bargained for when he shrinks in the office of Dr. Sandra Adams, who has a very unusual appetite.
Quickie? I wonder what you consider a long story. I was drawn in from the beginning. The characters were convincing, and your sensory descriptions are very strong. This helps the reader "be there". If this is what you just "pop out" for fun i would love to read what you've actually put work into.
Author's Response: thanks for the comment. long, to me, is something like 100,000 words or so; this was the shortest thing I've written so far
This is my first story on this website. This story came from my other account on Deviantart other my user name wario-bros.
When two college students look for work and found an unusual job that they hate.
The overall plot is very good. You created characters that are believable in their own right. There are many grammar issues that make it difficult to follow sometimes. I hope you continue writing. I look forward to reading more from you.
A story about a world where giantesses are an accepted part of society. Giantesses may legally swallow people. The story follows two friends; a normal sized man and a giantess.
I enjoy what you've done with the characters so far. Your descriptions followed the eye very well. If you know where you're going with it I think it could be really good.
I don't have a good idea of where I want to take it but but have a general direction. I'll probably add another chapter eventually. Thanks for your input.
I can't help but be curious as to how this will play out. It is strange and interesting, and I enjoy the dynamic between Carla and Malcolm.
See my Timescrybe2 account, as I am going to ask the admins to terminate this one as soon as I've finished moving the stories to the new account. This old timescribe account has been malfunctioning since Jan 2019, causing hassles for both me and the readers. I plan to get rid of it ASAP.
nice touch writing Carroll into the story. I also enjoy the puns in the chapter titles.
Thanks for saying so.
I thought his Charles Dodgson identity doesn't otherwise get enough notice, and he was a great instrument for me to put some christian message into it.
What happens when a celebrity visits the Forbidden Dish? Find out here.
It is fun to work things from each other's stories into the next story. The continuity brings the world to life in a way. I really had fun with this and the previous crossover.
Ian sits down and connects to virtual reality to live out his giantess fantasies, but gets a little more than he expected.
even if he ever does escape his brain will be fried from all of that. I enjoyed the story.
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A freshly out-of-school ambassador partakes on a journey to establish peaceful contact with the humans surrounding his beloved town.
I enjoyed this story. If you continue to write I would be glad to continue to read.
Thank you ! With comments like this I will continue gladly :D
would one use the respective tense when saying "you first" to someone that told them to go to Hell? I enjoyed the story.
A secretary goes into her office one day to find that everyone is missing...but, of course, they're not REALLY missing....
I think Loretta and Mr. Franchise were the most developed characters in the story. It was enjoyable to watch the buildup knowing that she would end up (unkowingly) confronting him. I was glad that the confrontation was a vore scene (personal preference).
A physics student travells to a parallel universe full of beautiful giant women. They have a different idea about what food is.
the first sentence had me laughing! I like where this is going. It's good to see you writing again.
Yeah, I pretty much just repeated the title didn't I? Good getting a review from you man. I have been enjoying your stories too!
Mud should be dressed in blue. yes, navy blue from head to toe, rather drab exept for his patent leather shoes.
I like where this story is going. Wouldn't the clothes the tinies are wearing cause the giantesses to ask questions or are the men at the "farm" clothed?
nice twist. Must keep reading.
the stilts would've only been plausible if she wasn't proportional anyways. good stuff. good stuff.
I'm sure that's not the way Ace Corona would prefer to go out. It's good to see that the woman could take care of herself.
sap is still used, but mostly in tabletop rpgs. blackjacks are illegal, but pretty easy to construct. Did you know if you buy brass knuckles they have to be labled as a "paper weight"?
It's always the feminists.
is the red crescent that old?
"This unquestionably rude comment was uttered by the nearer of the two men who had barged into the dressing room. And, the tommy guns they were toting prevented any kind of immediate rejoinder!" yeah, they'll do that. If you don't button your lip, they'll give you plenty of button holes to choose from.
