A Shrinking story. Your suggestions will be used in the next chapter. Just review what you'd like to see happen to tiny Dan, but, nothing too crazy.....
Suggestion: take him home to mother - a widowed woman in need of a little sexual companionship. : )
Well-written story, Thom.
I love how you describe what the characters are thinking, how they are feeling, and what they are experiencing.
Looking forward to the next chapter...
thanks so much, safetypin. i'm glad you liked it! check back soon for future chapters, i think you'll like them
Very good story.
Good descriptions of the action
I also very much appreciate the inclusion of the characters' feelings and thought processes.
thanks a lot, safetypin. A lot of the story relies on the thoughts and feelings, so I really hoped I could include them appropriately. Thanks a lot my friend, and check back soon for more
Each of these stories describe my interactions with my personal giantess. They are not in any particular order, but I thought I would document them here for your reading enjoyment.
Very good, short story.
Could have used a little more description of both action and feelings.
But overall, it's well done.
In an effort to permanently escape from his real life, Gage performs a dangerous hack that enhances his power far beyond the Level 100 Cap found in the hyper-realistic video game, Perfect Dimension. In exchange, he happily sacrifices his ability to return to the real world... but just past the 100+ threshold, there lies dangers that Gage hadn't bargained for.
I'm very much enjoying this story.
You have a good imagination - describing the scenes very well.
It would be helpful, though, if you included a brief desciption with each chapter.
Thanks for the review, SafetyPin. I'll definitely start throwing up some chapter notes, and maybe I'll go back and add some to previous chapters later. If nothing else, I'll avoid being a hypocrite (I love chapter notes in other stories, but can't be bothered to put them in mine, apparently).
This story is about half feet, half toilet. Really aggressively written toilet. After a very obvious point, it becomes incredibly toilet-heavy, so do not proceed if that isn't your thing. You've been warned.
Other notes: this story has almost no plot, but was nonetheless directly inspired by a collage made by the excellent darty. You can find the collage in question here: http://www.giantesscity.com/forum/download/file.php?id=302807&mode=view
And here's a link to his full thread: http://www.giantesscity.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=53&t=101748
One last thing: I did not bother to proofread this piece... I apologize for any typos, weak language, etc.
Good story line with lots of potential.
Told in a simple, crude manner.
I'm glad you liked the story line. Unfortunately, the "potential" will go unfulfilled. This one is just a one-shot.
Point taken on the "simple, crude manner," and I appreciate your honesty. I find that my writing is utilitarian at best, but in my defense I had sort of aimed for this piece to be pure porn in nature. For that reason, I just went straight to the point with the graphic fetish material and didn't bother with such "unimportant" things as characterization, plots, metaphors, etc. Please let me know your thoughts on my long-term piece, "Perfect Dimension" a little while down the road. I intend for that to piece to be more erotica than straight porn, and I also hope for it to be quite lengthy as well, so there will hopefully be plenty of time to fill it out.
In a hidden world of magic that lies beyond our sight, Malcom will fight, run, and search for his master.
Malcom is about 450 years old, British, and a man who serves a witch named Alice. After being cursed to sleep for nealy 430 years, he has now awoken in modern times. With Alice missing, he sets out on an adventure to find his missing master. Given he has only one magical power, the ability to turn annyone he touches into panties, a power left to him by his master. With this as his only defense, will he be able to find her? Can Malcom be cured of his cursed panty touch? And how will Malcom fair in a future world he knows nothing about?
The story contains transformation as a main theme, and witchcraft spells being used in various ways.
Did they even have panties 430 years ago?
Bloomers? Pantaloons?
Considering the Witch Alice was thousands of years old, and panties were first crated by the ancient greece. http://beaverland.web.fc2.com/eroshist/panty_en.html The fact that she was not limited by humans current technolgy, as she had magic, imagining she had panties is not too far fetched a concept. But you are quite right, given the times, and the fact cotton wasn't around etc. But as Alice is yet again a Witch, it can still be plausible. Besides this is a work of fiction. Thanks for the reveiw!
By the way everyone, I really hate writing in old english, how long do you guys think it should take before Malcom becomes more fluent in the American language? Or should I slowly just allow him to start ussing contractions, etc?
Amanda and Jordan are in love with each other, but don't think so about each other. What will happen when Jordan calls on "supernatural forces" to find out if Amanda really loves him?
Short story with a disappointing ending (just seemed to run out of creative steam).
And the begining had so much potential...
This is the story of a young man who hates his current situation in life but finds a way to turn it around and live a life of adventure and new beginnings. All characters in this story are completely original and any likeness to anyone living or dead is merely coincidental.
OK, this sounds interesting.
I like your writing style.
Looking forward to see where this leads.
Note: there's no need for any running comentary to the reader.
Simple descriptions of each chapter will suffice.
I can't apologize for the commentary. I myself enjoy to see what the reader says when reading stories and enjoy getting a word in before and after the chapter. I'm glad you are at least intrigued but may I suggest if you don't want to read the commentary, simply don't. Thanks for reading and I hope you continue to do so.
No. No. You've got it wrong.
It should more about sex! The character development is fine as it is. ; )
Great story. Many good original ideas.
Please continue - the messier and more sinister, the better.
Haha, well as you are seeing, I wasn't able to stay away from the sex stuff. The next chapter will be primarily about this new woman and Ethan. Who's to say how it will go.
Thanks for the compliment and comment. Hope you keep reading
A short tale lol xxxxxxxx
Terrible grammar and poor spelling.
But I liked the story, and I love this theme (dirty panties, toilet sex, shrinking, and vore).
With improved writing, more details, and a longer story, your works could be great.
LOL XXXX
What happens when a girl makes the same birthday wish every year? AND she doesn't tell anyone?
Why, it comes true, of course!
I wish a wish tonight...
Good story. Yes, I recognize the genre.
As you indicated in your introduction, you have an opportunity to put a new twist on this common story line.
Please continue...
I definitely will. Thanks for your kind words.
Yes!
Good chapter.
Jack's best friend calls him over for a day. He stays alot longer than that. She's got a secret to show him, one that he'll surely NEVER forget.
Great chapter!
I'm hoping for more abuse.
Oh it's ok, Jack really can't shut his mouth so look forward to it.
Sam and her childhood friend Nick are trapped in a world where there are small people who are treated as bugs for the amusement of others.
"the sadistic children"
"as the brown mass slowly enveloped him and silenced him forever…"
I love this story. Well told and described!
Great story!
I think that you've got way more than 400 readers interested.
Lol! That was supposed to mean 400 reads per chapter before I post a new one. I guess I need to fix that. There's still more and it looks like I'll be writing even more on it. More plot has been consuming my thoughts all day.
Thanks for reading!
Dee
Three men crash into a deserted island and discover that it's not what it appears to be.
Great chapter!
More, more sexy abuse!
Thanks , more is boiling away just beneith the surface. '''''''''':)
Home of all my chapter long stories. Each story is given a series of ratings, warnings, and tags in the chapter notes in the beginning of each story so that you know what your getting into. If a story is requested enough times it may get a sequal or its own fully fleged story.
Good descriptions of the predicament that led up to the shrinking and then the crushing ending.
But you glossed over all the middle part that had so much potential for detailed description of many acts of dehumanizing cruelty.
"The next few weeks for him were hell....beatings, humiliating and dehumanizing games, and having his entire body stuffed into the Indian girl's snatch every time she felt in the mood."
There could have been so much more to make this story great. : (
I agree. Looking back I really should have stretched out the middle more, but I had planned this to be a short story and I didn't want to leave with a cliffhanger or a really long block of text.
I could potentually write an expantion, and perhaps elaborate on the many things they did to him.
This was originally posted as my first GTS tale. After meticulously editing, and some drastic rework, I added some detailed concepts that will hopefully improve the overall story.
The main character "Violet', a beautiful female scientist will ultimately succeed in shrinking the entire world-wide 'male'-population..... Enjoy...
This is a great story - so realistic sounding.
The only detractions are minor spelling errors and some poor grammar.
Note: no need to include an apostrophe in plural words.
Please continue...
Well-written story. Full of detail and intrigue.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter...