A toy meets a woman who sees him for what he is, and asks him where he came from.
Brilliant stuff as always.
*golf clap*
Good stuff!
Author's Response: thanks! =)
Sorry about the poor rating, but too many typos, bad grammer left right and center and non-existant punctation. While I dont claim to be perfect, you should at least use a basic spell check once.
Two college girls suddenly find themselves miles tall. At first unaware of their predicament, they soon grow to accept and even enjoy it. This is not good for us.
Wicked good stuff, man. Nicely paced, well writen - great job all around.
So what are the odds of getting a chapter or two from the tiny human's point of view. What's the military response, scientists working to reverse things or just the adventures of a group of people trapped somewhere out of their control.
As a warrior giantess decimates the land, a man goes in search of one who can defeat her.
Brilliant stuff! I only hope for more, perhaps a relationship between Gailina and Erry?
Author's Response: Perhaps...I can only wait and see, since I have some other stories to tell as well. Thanks for reviewing!
A lonely man finds himself at the mercy of an unaware woman with a head-cold.
I concure with everyone - great story. Hopefuly now that he's on her head perahps we can get some ear action in the near future? That that she'd be able to hear him at that scale - but he should put in the effort at least
I've thought about that a great deal, and it's still in the top 3 choices for possible directions for the next chapter. We'll see when I started writing. This story won't be updated too often though...think of it as a very long term narrative. Thanks for your review!
See my Timescrybe2 account, as I am going to ask the admins to terminate this one as soon as I've finished moving the stories to the new account. This old timescribe account has been malfunctioning since Jan 2019, causing hassles for both me and the readers. I plan to get rid of it ASAP.
What? No Space: 1999? I'm disappointed!
I made a rule with myself that this story would be just the puppet characters, and then broke it to use the Journey to the Far Side of the Sun's new planet to replace the shrunken Mars, but my plan was to try to write a time travel crossover between UFO and Space 1999 some time in the not too distant future too.
They are my favourite shows of Gerry's, but it was hard to work them into a crossover, because UFO is clearly set in 1980 (unlike all the futuristic puppet shows in the 21st Century); and with Space 1999, once the moonbase was blasted out of earth orbit, the possibility of interaction with other characters was pretty much impossible.
I haven't thought of anything in either show to build a gts plot from either, but maybe I'll make up my own.