Penname: BigAl [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: April 08 2006
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Summary: Ben, a desperate man who has lost his job, turns to crime to feed his impoverished family. But the new penalties for this sort of crime are...unpleasant.
Categories: New World Order, Vore, Object, Transformation, Teenager (13-19)
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: The Justice Chronicles
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1566 Read Count: 121574
[Report This] Published: April 26 2006 Updated: May 01 2006
Reviewer: BigAl Signed starstarstar
Date: May 02 2006 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Enjoyed the story, Peter! Would love to see it developed into a mini-series featuring punishments for some other crimes!!

Author's Response: I might just give that a try!

The Doll by banfield Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary: To be input later
Categories: Butt, Crush, Toilet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10953 Read Count: 14015
[Report This] Published: June 28 2006 Updated: June 28 2006
Reviewer: BigAl Signed
Date: July 24 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Banfield, you are quite right that nowhere near enough people take time to review stories or give opinions. I have to admit to being guilty of this as well!

For what my opinion is worth, I love your style of writing, and this particular story is brilliant... What I wouldn't give to be that doll (at least at the start!!)

Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

Many thanks, BigAl, for your uplifting comments. I'd love to "keep up the good work" but I regret to say that the impetus I once possessed has left me, but my visions have remained and will not leave me.  Have you read the other yarns on our wonderful site..."Read Meals" for instance?

Summary:

Mrs.Ryder harbours a deep desire to shrink and swallow her former employee Sarah. She invies her to her office for a private meeting.

A story in it's own right but with references to my previous story 'How Mrs.Ryder ate Peter.'


Categories: Giantess, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5665 Read Count: 10770
[Report This] Published: July 09 2008 Updated: July 09 2008
Reviewer: BigAl Signed
Date: July 11 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved this story!  Somehow must have missed your original story which is also excellent!  Thanks for posting it!

Summary:

There once was a family, a very successful family that owned a very successful family business, located in a smaller town, that was on the outskirts of a major city. Jack, Jr. the eldest son of the founder, Jack Simms was now the Operations Manager. Jack Senior had passed away several years ago, so his wife, Barbara and her mother, Katherine, had taken over the daily operations of the company, doing all of the tasks the Mr. Simms had always done. The work required many long hours for those first few years, but now that everything was going along so well, a bit of free time had made itself available.


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Couples , Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Giant, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Muscle, New World Order, Slave, Toilet, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, FM/f, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28760 Read Count: 152423
[Report This] Published: October 25 2008 Updated: February 02 2009
Reviewer: BigAl Signed
Date: January 15 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I LOVE this story so far!  Great stuff!  Can't wait to see what they have planned for the two guys they just captured!

Reviewer: BigAl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 03 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Although I'm not keen on Giant men (so chapter 8 wasn't my favourite!), chapter 9 has brought it back to the top of my favourites list!

I love the way you describe the action and the suffering!  Keep up the good work!

Summary:

It is to become compulsory for everyone in the United Kingdom to have an I.D. card. The authorities have drawn up plans to send teams of specially trained young women around the country to deal with persistent dissenters.


Categories: Crush, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8803 Read Count: 19780
[Report This] Published: May 08 2009 Updated: May 08 2009
Reviewer: BigAl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 10 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thoroughly enjoyed this story, Pope Eddie!  Makes me even more determined not to get an ID card now! :-)

Author's Response: Many thanks BigAl. No to ID cards!!

Anne Baptiste by banfield Rated: X starstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

Anna goes searching for a prey --- and finds one.


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Insertion, Violent, Vore, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3092 Read Count: 28621
[Report This] Published: May 18 2009 Updated: May 18 2009
Reviewer: BigAl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 28 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Prey

Apologies for not reviewing/rating earlier!  I'm another of those who reads and then forgets to do the important things like feedback!

Banfield, I've said it before but I'll say it again: I LOVE your stories!  You have an excellent way of using the English language to perfectly describe events and situations.

Thanks again for another superb story (and of course thanks to PE for posting the original!)



Author's Response:

Hello Big Al, it's a long time since you kindly posted your favourable comment. Does seem a pity that you dropped off. Like so many others, our mutual interest could reward you with further yarns...some different but of the same ilk. But there again, you may have lost all interest in the subject matter, or even deserted this site? Would like to know either way. Cheerio!  Tony

Three Choices by banfield Rated: X starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Another defiant male is excecuted, in a most horrible fashion, by the Federation.
Categories: Giantess, Slow Size Change, Butt, Insertion, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2316 Read Count: 14669
[Report This] Published: May 28 2009 Updated: May 28 2009
Reviewer: BigAl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 28 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Bill's Defiance and Choices

Banfield, thank you so much for writing this story!  I've never particularly liked the thought of being made to carry an ID card but the thought of Beyonce turning up on my doorstep with those three choices... lol, can I have all three please?!

Author's Response:

 Many thanks BigAl for your comments. As I write such yarns I am entirely into the story and really get excited at the thought of being subjected to either of those Three Choices - but what a dilemma to be in!   I'm still awaiting Pope Eddie to mention something. After all, it was his idea, and he gave me his blessing to write those sequels.    So where are you P.E?

p.s. Bill did have all three, but could not experience the final choice.

Summary:

A miniature super-villain attempts to wreak vengeance on Wonder Woman. Will she even notice?


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Butt, Body Exploration, Humiliation, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7855 Read Count: 55762
[Report This] Published: June 24 2009 Updated: August 03 2009
Reviewer: BigAl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 27 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this story so far!  Apart from a bit of reminiscing, the comedy touches are great!

Summary: A city councilman is caught engaging in dodgy dealings and has an encounter with the harsh justice system of the far future.
Categories: Object, Toilet, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: The Justice Chronicles
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1179 Read Count: 36684
[Report This] Published: January 25 2010 Updated: April 14 2010
Reviewer: BigAl Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: April 16 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great to see you back, Peter! Great start to this story!

Summary: 3 friends go to Audri's house for and experiment run by her dad.  The experiment is cloning followed by shrinking.  After they are shrunk, her dad refuses to return them to orginal size because he is afraid they will tell someone.  He gives Audri permission to do whatever she wants with them.  What will she do?
Categories: Unaware, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Giantess, Adventure, Adult 30-39, Butt, Body Exploration, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Toilet, Slave, Slow Size Change, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7147 Read Count: 194911
[Report This] Published: June 30 2010 Updated: July 11 2010
Reviewer: BigAl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 05 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The invitation

I actually love this story!  I must admit, my two favourite scenario's with a giantess are being trapped between the buttcheeks and being swallowed alive, but surviving the journey to come out alive!

This story had both of those things so I enjoyed it very much!  

Summary:

A young male hitch hiker is picked up by a beautiful woman -- but he gets more than a lift.

The ravishing goddess wants Tony to satuate her lust -- and to eat him!!!!!


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Humiliation, Toilet, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3351 Read Count: 20978
[Report This] Published: September 22 2010 Updated: September 22 2010
Reviewer: BigAl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 23 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Kidnapped

Ah, it's always nice to see a new story from one of my favourite authors!  Another lovely story Banfield!  You have a wonderful way with the English language and you describe the situations perfectly! Thank You!

Author's Response:  BigAl, I have just been informed that you might not see my response to your kind review. I placed it as another yarn or something. Please see my reply on site.

Tutoring by newschool2626 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 33]
Summary: Nick is about to learn what place he'll have in the world if he can't pass his math class.
Categories: Adult 30-39, Butt, Feet, Insertion, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21045 Read Count: 181128
[Report This] Published: February 21 2011 Updated: March 03 2013
Reviewer: BigAl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 03 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Epilogue

Loved this story!

Reviewer: BigAl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 09 2011 Title: Chapter 10: The Tutoring Ends

Loved this story and would really appreciate another chapter (or epilogue) on how Mr Anderson is getting along with Brianna!

Summary:

This is a series of short stories involving primarily butt stuff. There will be toilet stuff, so beware.


Categories: Butt, Crush, Instant Size Change, Toilet, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59862 Read Count: 544276
[Report This] Published: April 19 2011 Updated: January 25 2023
Reviewer: BigAl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 30 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Day at the Pool

Thanks for these stories, BootyPatrol!  I love butt stories so have thoroughly enjoyed your selection!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I've been wanting to see stuff like this, so I figured I'd try to write it myself.

Summary:

A nice guy in a frustrating situation has his world suddenly turned upside-down. Through an accident of circumstance, he gets to experience much more of his beautiful assistant than he could ever have imagined. The desires and ambitions of more than one person, however, might influence his fate.

 


Categories: Adventure, Butt, Body Exploration, Feet, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21285 Read Count: 137078
[Report This] Published: June 09 2011 Updated: April 22 2013
Reviewer: BigAl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 14 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Only just found this story with the latest addition! Don't know how I missed it before!
Anyway, thoroughly enjoying it and look forward to seeing what happens next!

Summary:

I've moved my stories and their continuations over to the Kindle Store. The Website won't allow me to delete the story, so I'm sorry for having to remove it like this.


Categories: Butt, Couples , Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 228 Read Count: 79852
[Report This] Published: August 17 2011 Updated: May 01 2014
Reviewer: BigAl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 09 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Removed

Love the story so far Thornton! Can't wait to see Thornton between her ass cheeks!

Summary:

Detective Constable Lisa Stewart of the Metropolitan CID gets more than she bargained for when she is assigned to a case where tiny footprints are found at the site of a rather strange and sinister murder. More strange murders lead Lisa to believe that there is a serial killer on the loose, but this serial killer has the power to shrink their chosen victims.


Categories: Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Crush, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 36722 Read Count: 71955
[Report This] Published: October 03 2011 Updated: November 25 2011
Reviewer: BigAl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 05 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Welcome, Lisa! I absolutely love this story so far! Four chapters in and I find myself checking in every few hours to see if there's been another chapter added!! I have to say that your writing style is very professional, and like a printed mystery thriller you have me absolutely hooked! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

I'm very flattered by your kind comments BigAl xxx

Summary: Two teenage girls get their lives changed forever when a geeky girl decides not to take their teasing anymore. Will they be able to survive this girls anger?
Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11424 Read Count: 116386
[Report This] Published: October 11 2011 Updated: June 25 2012
Reviewer: BigAl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: October 12 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good start! Looking forward to seeing what happens next!

Summary:

Three long-time friends get the experience of a lifetime when they discover that a shrinking pill has been invented.  Now, all three of them will get to experience their vore fantasies firsthand.  What adventures will they have together as they explore the depths of their friendship and love of vore?  Tune in for the next exciting episode!


Categories: Gentle, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5473 Read Count: 19756
[Report This] Published: December 02 2011 Updated: December 02 2011
Reviewer: BigAl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 02 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - First Step Into a Larger World

I'm loving this story so far! One of my "things" is to be eaten and to survive the experience so I'm hoping this story is going to be one of my all-time favourites!!
Keep up the good work!