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Date: August 05 2023
Title: Chapter 1: ~Volume I~ Chapter 1 - Prologue
Wow! I finally got around to reading this and I'm HOOKED. The cruelty is insane and rare for a story on this site. The extreme themes and writing are all top notch. I really hope Ben and Liz make it out.. but you did say no one makes it out after an encounter with Jacob
Is there a particular reason you picked Valdez? As someone who has lived in the area it was like getting hit with a flashbang seeing it in a story.
Author's Response: Sweet! Ecstatic to have you here! :)
I'm really happy you like the story! I have become obsessed with writing it, and am already planning the sequel after I finish the 3rd volume of this first book. As for Ben and Liz, the next chapter will offer some closure on a few plot points I've been holding out for long enough now. I plan on releasing it later today!
Yes, I wanted somewhere remote but still familiar. I found Valdez on the maps and loved its look and appeal. I felt that if I were Blaire, it's the place I'd pick to escape a totalitarian family structure. It also gave me a way to add an additional level of depth to the story I thought.
Looking forward to see your feedback on the next chapter!