Reviewer: timescribe Signed
Date: October 04 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This is the best one you've done so far. I love the more detailed mouth play. You kept the mystery about how he shrank. It's all implied. Very original build-up. Explored the character's dual opinion of Brandon. A human black widow, perhaps.
I always thought Jack and the Beanstalk would have played better, if the giant's wife had been the one who wanted to eat Jack.
Author's Response: Haha that's a nice thought about jack and the beanstalk.
i was inspired by a friend to write this story.
Being married to a loving husband it would, in my opinion be a very cruel and heartless act to consume him after having sex.I did get very aroused whilst putting into words my feelings, it was a very fullfilling story to write in many ways which i cannot describe here.
Amanda.