Penname: Xiao-renzhe [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: August 07 2015
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Hobbiest writer and life-long appreciator of about all things G/t with a special taste for vore. Writing for this site is really fun practice. 


Feel free to contact me on discord to talk writing, interests, or anything really. And I love any kind of feedback!


Discord handle: xiao renzhe#1192


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Reviews by Xiao-renzhe
Summary:

A depressed young man seeks psychological treatment, but ends up getting more than he bargained for when he shrinks in the office of Dr. Sandra Adams, who has a very unusual appetite.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8117 Read Count: 47806
[Report This] Published: June 21 2011 Updated: June 23 2011
Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 07 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Result

This was the most unique and interesting vore story I've read in a long time! I loved the way you used it here! Good message! This was also very well-written in general; sharp in it's realism and very sensual in language and presentation. A very refreshing read!

Author's Response:

It's always a fun surprise getting reviews on old stories. Thanks for reviewing, and I'm glad you enjoyed the read!

Re-do by Intheliar Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Sydney lived all of her life regretting one single action she made as a teenager. When's she's given the chance to make amends, she doesn't hesitate.


Categories: Butt, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Gentle, Scat, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10125 Read Count: 13617
[Report This] Published: January 07 2018 Updated: January 08 2018
Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10 2018 Title: Chapter 2: We All Have.

I LOVED this! And I love your commentary towards the end about violent vs gentle. This website (and particularly the vore tag) is in dire need of more gentle giantesses, and I love the spin you’ve given it! It’s so close to my own daydreams in terms of musing about what it would be like to go back and enter your childhood brain, and I’d never thought to turn that into a G/t story. I really hope you continue this story as they explore their new relationship, or others like it if you decide to let it be. Good work!

Author's Response:

   <3 <3 <3

   Really appreciate you taking the time to let me know all that, Xiao-renzhe. I'm happy you enjoyed the story! And honestly, Sydney/Vince could very easily have had adventures together; I could've thrown in more cute conversations or even have them confront Desirea and the gang and wring an apology out of them somehow. I know I barely covered it, but Vince's past was fairly difficult. He was meant to be seen as a survivor who got picked on in numerous ways, but I skipped all the sad bullying stuff and started near his happy ending-- meeting Sydney. Unfortunately, I'm a bit of a tease. When I think of a great scenario, that's all I think of-- I don't think about endings or the journey-- so I just end up wanting to do a short story to get my idea across. I guess what I'm saying is, I don't plan on continuing this series, and it's not because I don't think there's anything left for them to do, it's just that I feel ill-equipped as an author to give them the proper adventure they deserve. (Anyone reading this already has my permission to continue this story with their own 'twist' on it if they so choose, as long as they mention my username somewhere as a small modicum of credit.)

   As far as other stories, they'll likely include the same ultra-thoughtful giantesses (when concering the tiny main character), so don't worry about that... Sydney is a saint, but she's also not the only saint possible I could create. Except, I don't know when I'll type another one. It could be a week, or it could be six months. I won't rush it, but if I get the inspiration/daydream to make another, I will spend a huge portion of my day, everyday, until it's done. It wears me out, haha.

   Now that I'm thinking about it, the original Sydney life was pretty depressing. Imagine the friend she could've had, but didn't.

   Anywho. The part near the end was part of the initial daydream. This story was birthed from two ideas [What if we got a second chance at life with our current memories, to fix our biggest regret] and [I want a giantess to learn the cold truth about evil giantesses and all the shit little men go through. What if... they read some stories, and felt repulsed by them-- resolving themself to be the exact opposite. A gentle giantess, with increased awareness on the unexpected dangers of being a shrunken human.] The perfect protector, friend, or lover.

   Thanks for your review. You, and the others, give me hope. Have a 'good one.

Summary:

After his lifes work causes an accident leaving him much reduced in size, Edward finds himself with little purpose in life. His flat mate, a woman who worked on the failed project with him, tries to cheer him up, but things go a bit further than expected.


Categories: Vore, Giantess, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8706 Read Count: 13459
[Report This] Published: January 08 2018 Updated: January 08 2018
Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 25 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So I've been meaning to write a review for this for a loooong time. This story really stuck with me when you first published it, and I think it's been an inspiration for me on more than one occasion in my own writing since. You really captured several of my favorite aspects of what I find to be the best kind of vore scenario. It's off the cuff, experimental, the "giantess" is really into it, gentle, willing, and dangerously erotic. I love that you devote almost an entire chapter just to describing the act of Edward being swallowed. It's some really superb imagery that I found just as stimulating this time reading through it as I remembered from over two years ago. 

I think that I withheld my review before because I was waiting for you to finish it, eagerly looking forward to whatever experiments she had in mind for Edward next, but if you're not planning to go any further on this one, I don't want to keep quiet about how much I loved this story forever. I was reminded to revisit it once I saw that DeviantKibate was illustrating it, and I tell ya, as soon as I made the connection that it was, indeed, "that story" that I was now experiencing in comic form, I got so excited. Congrats on that, btw. 

Anyway, everything about this story appealed to me. The characters, the setup, the dialog, Rachel's secret, dark urges, Edwards practically skeptical yet enthusiastically curious attitude, and the fact that it's realistic in that Rachael didn't just suddenly turn into a murderous monster just because she was experiencing her fantasy in the best way imaginable. It's a great story. I look forward to anything else you write, be it a continuation of one of your existing tales, or something new. Your brand of brain-magic is very much my cup of tea.

thanks for being a writer! 



Author's Response:

Thank you for such nice and detailed feedback!

I've left it open for more to be written, but I've been on an extended break from writing. I've just started to get back into it though. I have some existing work that desperately needs finishing, but I always intrended to return to this story eventually. I actually had a whole little adventure planned out for the two of them.

I'm really excited seeing my story come to life in a well drawn comic, it's awesome! Incidentally the "How to steal a clone" is also mine, a tiny short story I wrote specifically for the writing contest.

Hit me up on Discord if you like, Durandle#0216 - always happy to discuss story ideas and bounce things and see what sticks, haha though it may be a bit spoilery;)

Summary:

It's Sam's 18th Birthday and his best friend Ben has made plans. Of course, it's going to be a strip club... right?

 

NOTE: This was previously named "The 18th Birthday Accident" but it expanded past that name.


Categories: Breasts, Butt, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27102 Read Count: 29782
[Report This] Published: July 10 2018 Updated: April 21 2019
Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18 2019 Title: Chapter 4: And so...

So, being the 15th person to leave a review, it might seem superfluous to shower you with praise. That said, I really think you stumbled upon a very uniquely fun and erotic method for people playing out their g/t fetishes in terms of world-building. Most of all, you were rigorous about it. I really appreciate your attention to detail in terms of writing both a coherent plot and deft descriptive clarity. You’re a good writer!

While I enjoyed the story in and of itself, it really left me fantasizing about what I would do if a place like that really existed, and that sort of imagination-stoking stuff is what keeps me reading in general, let alone on this particular website. Good work! Cheers!

Author's Response:

I mean, you know, I don't really *mind* being showered with praise :D

Thank you for the comments/review, it always means a lot to get such feedback. I had a lot of fun writing this story, partly due to the freedom it gave to just sort of explore the fetish.

I've not had the time or mental space to do anything creative recently but I do hope to get back into it eventually. I have a half finish mamoth sized chapter of "The Perks of an Amazonian Girlfriend" that needs finishing... for almost a year!

Summary:

A writer is surprised when his girlfriend reveals she's read his secret stories. Emily has read far too many of them for her own good, and takes his deepest fantasy into her own hands. 

 


Categories: Giantess, Couples, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7038 Read Count: 28648
[Report This] Published: November 30 2018 Updated: November 28 2019
Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01 2018 Title: Chapter 1: The Stories Are to Blame

I’m really enjoying this story so far! It’s one of my all time favorite, albeit simple, scenarios. I find myself in constant want of some more sensually themed couples/willing vore on this site (even if Tim is only half as willing in one head as he is in his other). I love that they’re both focused on the utter finality of the carnal act about to unfold, because that permanence is one of the more erotic, taboo aspects of vore where I’m concerned. I also love that she’s been spending untold months gradually adopting this predatory persona displayed before him now, long too late for him to have any hope of influencing it beyond how his stories already have. If he wanted this to be ‘just’ a fantasy, he missed his chance, it would seem.
Anyway, however you choose to proceed with this, the introductory chapter alone was a breath of fresh air. Not just because I am always searching for anything even somewhat resembling willing vore. It’s well-written, clearly expressed, vibrantly charged, and all around damned good erotica. Thank you for being a writer!

Summary:

A young genius has spent months developing shrinking technology to better the world and earn his place in history, but his hungry lab assistant has other plans in mind for the invention.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Entrapment, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10198 Read Count: 28746
[Report This] Published: May 03 2019 Updated: May 24 2019
Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18 2019 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

If this is a slow burn vore story, then I suppose I understand why so few people who begin to read mine have finished! In any case, I thought this was profoundly well-executed. The introduction was adequately stage-setting and didn’t drag, and you spent a tantalizingly thorough amount of time on every subsequent step of the process, from establishing the characters and declaring the plot, to getting him firmly situated beyond the point of no return.

If I had to pick one word to describe this little work, it would be “diabolical.” I really enjoyed it. As someone who’s favorite aspect of g/t is vore while still very much liking the gentle aspect, this story really suited my fancy, and had me simultaneously rooting for the victim to somehow talk his way out of it while also taking satisfaction in the pred getting her way. This story delivers, And it was well-written. I rate it five stars.

Summary:

A shy bookstore clerk harbors a crush on a dapper little man.


Categories: Mature (40-49), Gentle, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1996 Read Count: 3300
[Report This] Published: May 30 2019 Updated: May 30 2019
Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed
Date: October 18 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Hobbies and Passions

This was a delightfully fun, exquisitely well-written little vignette. It’s so refreshing to find such attention to detail with regard to descriptions and characters. I enjoyed all the academic references as well as the main characters’ unorthodox meetup. Though I believe, for what it’s worth, at least Kant and Elliot are public forum. So he’s only somewhat guilty.

I’ve read several of your stories, and have meant to leave a review, but I was doing a gentle search randomly last month and this one really stuck with me, and I was a little surprised to find it was yours! Suffice to say this review of your writing prowess can apply to the several of yours I’ve read. You’re quite good.

I think this little story is perfectly adequate as a stand-alone encounter, though it would be remiss of me not to say that I’d love to see where their relationship goes, if anywhere, which is more to say that you did a fine job of realistically and engagingly setting them up than to say that I’m left expecting more.

Anyway, excellent writing as usual. Cheers!

Author's Response:

Thank you very kindly! I'm glad you appreciated this one. I had to pare it down several times for the contest, 2,000-word restriction, but I think that helped the exposition and it just as probably sets it apart from other stories where I had no restrictions. My thought, anyway. I'm very glad to hear you like my work, I hope to keep that up.

Summary:

Austin's Experiment goes wrong in a way you would expect.

First story! Be gentle!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Unaware, Body Exploration, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1135 Read Count: 4622
[Report This] Published: September 10 2019 Updated: September 10 2019
Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed
Date: September 17 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really good first story! You actually had me rooting for the little guy in this one. I was silently praying that he’d somehow maintained possession of the device during the “ordeal” and would just beam out of her stomach in the end, and have a helluva time approaching her about the bizarre experience later. But, alas, as I said regarding your other story, I always enjoy a vore ending for want of a “happy” ending.

In terms of writing and style, there was only one glaring error that stopped me up in my first read through in the fifth paragraph. Looks like you omitted the words “hear the” before “mutterings.” I always like it when others take the time to point such things out to me, so I hope that’s helpful.

Otherwise, I really enjoy these crisp little voyeuristic vore vignettes you’re putting out. Keep it up!

Idol Hands by Limeline76 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Justin goes on a journey while ogling a woman at his job, one that he might not return from.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2262 Read Count: 9178
[Report This] Published: September 11 2019 Updated: September 11 2019
Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed
Date: September 16 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Jessica's Night

This was a really fun read! One of the most tantalizing aspects of unaware is the enjoyment of really willing the victim to be successful in their desperate attempts to gain the attention of the unsuspecting devourer while knowing, as if watching a cliche horror movie, that their fate is sealed. I loved the part near the end where he almost got her attention, but I love vore endings even more, so I’m glad he failed.

I enjoyed the originality of the Aztec Idol, as well as the pun in the title which played into it. It was a really fun and concise method for getting the ball rolling on an otherwise straightforward “unaware mischief” story. It was well-written and easy to follow. Thanks for writing!

Summary:

What happens when you get used to your witch wife's magic antics? She starts getting creative! But that isn't always a good thing for you~


Categories: Adult 30-39, BBW, Couples, Fantasy, Entrapment, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4158 Read Count: 2674
[Report This] Published: April 14 2020 Updated: April 14 2020
Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed
Date: April 15 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Love Of Fear

I really enjoyed this story. It had some of my favorite components: being well written, plenty of vore, a pleasant mixture of gentle and dominating, and realistic characters with relatable personalities and motivations. I also adore the occasional happy ending.

Not being familiar with your OCs, I still found the characters very easy to familiarize with, as you included just enough background to establish the relationship enough for me to follow their actions without bogging down the story with too much orientational materials.

I liked that the relationship, while obviously unconventional, and some would say borders toxicity (though Jill seems to have known what she was getting into), is still obviously reciprocal and very nurturing. It was gratifying to see that Vivi prioritizes the emotional health of her lover over her satisfying her desires, even if a witch’s urges are difficult to control. It was refreshing to see a healthy dynamic when there’s such an imbalance of power. I especially appreciated Vivi’s reassurances at the end.

I’m sorry to confess that you didn’t have me going, though I didn’t feel like you really wanted to have your readers fooled. When Vivi thought of the win-win scenario in which Jill could sleep and Vivi could sate her hunger for fear, I assumed the rest was a dream. Though that in no way detracted from my enjoyment of the subsequent events as they unfolded. On the contrary, I relished in the terror with Jill at how devastating it would feel to be tossed aside by my lover in such a cruel way. Jill was still very easy to relate to in that situation, so it was still a terrifying thrill, even if I knew it wasn’t “really happening.” At the same time, I could relate to Vivi’s guilty-pleasure at pushing the envelope. How does one balance eliciting a genuine reaction with their compassion toward their partner in what ends up being an elaborate ruse? It’s almost unfortunate that Vivi wasn’t in control of the nightmare, or couldn’t dream “with” Jill, so to speak, so that she could keep it from getting out of hand. As it happened, she ended up missing out on the majority of the terror her dream-self inspired, and didn’t get to enjoy the waking fear, because Jill’s worst fears manifested in a way that even Vivi at her most devious may not have been willing to carry out.

Anyway! Thank you for the short, sweet, gentle vore story! There’s simply not enough of this kind of content on here, and I’m constantly on the hunt for it, so I delight in this addition to my favorites. Please write more!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the detailed review! I'm glad you liked it! 

 

Also, yeah, I never expected to actually trick people. Just thought seeing the big gap would make people take a second like "wait, is this really the ending?!" XD 

Summary:

A goddess protects a small village. They live in paradise and love her very much. She loves them back, frequently.


Categories: Breasts, Entrapment, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1798 Read Count: 3051
[Report This] Published: May 02 2020 Updated: May 02 2020
Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 05 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Worship

I really enjoyed the simplicity in this— short and sweet. The writing is very neat, it’s very easy to follow, and the content checks all of my major boxes; namely, gentle, insertion, and Vore. Very straightforward erotica.

I love a kind goddess who is generous with her subjects, and I enjoy a scenario where everyone wins and nobody suffers. There’s simply not enough of that sort of nurturing content in the g/t community, so I’m always excited when it pops up! Good little story! Hope to see others like it!

Summary:

A cute barista working at a cafe adds a special ingredient to a customer's bubble tea. A collaboration with the wonderful TY. https://aryion.com/g4/user/Ty975


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Vore, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Lesbians, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8654 Read Count: 4767
[Report This] Published: May 14 2020 Updated: May 14 2020
Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 16 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Bursting Her Bubble

I really enjoyed this! Your form is superbly easy to follow, and the content is delightful to ingest. It’s never occurred to me what a good vehicle for unaware vore boba tea could be! And the fact that Elizabeth “blessed” unwilling tributes to her beloved is just so tantalizingly twisted. I love it.

The arc of this story kept me guessing until close to the end, and I rather enjoy that. Way to steer clear of being to predictably formulaic. While I was able to guess who would end up drinking that last tea based on your reuse of the epithet, “the prettiest girl in the cafe,” I did not guess who would end up in it, and that was quite the satisfying surprise to say the least. What a darkly poetic dose of justice!

Your descriptions are compelling, the characters interesting, and the plot and execution stimulating. Thoroughly enjoyable read. Please write more!

Author's Response:

This comment means a lot to me! Thank you very much. I have another story in the works so you won't have long to wait! 

Summary:

In the last moments of his life, a man recounts the strange yet all-too-familiar circumstances of his demise. 


Categories: Giantess, Mouth Play, Odor, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1996 Read Count: 1724
[Report This] Published: July 01 2020 Updated: July 01 2020
Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 04 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Predator and Prey

This is a really good, succinct, and well-articulated vore-short. I enjoyed it thoroughly. I’m glad inspiration struck you, and more glad that you decided to act on it and share it. There can never be too many well-written little vore vignettes, so I hope you write more!

Summary:

Shy college student, Erin, is always criticized and teased by her friends for not indulging in the latest food trend. Stuck on her own most of the time in quarantine, she decides to bite the bullet and try this new popular delicacy as an appetizer for dinner, not knowing whether she'll be able to go through with it in the end...

My first story commission! The buyer wished to remain anonymous, but wanted to see a story focusing on a shy, unsure predator's perspective. It was fun to write, and came out pretty quickly within the hour I put it together (not including editing and all that other cleanup jazz). I like that this can kind of fit into my "Low Prospects for Littles" canon pretty well. 

For those that don't know, I made an interactive on writing.com about a world where people charged with even basic crimes or below a poverty line are shrunk and turned into consumable products (food, pets, decoration, etc.) If you're curious to check that out and are patient enough to deal with writing.com's bullshit, here's a link: www.writing.com/main/interacti…

Would love to see more additions to that world, both there and here. If you're interested in ordering a story commission from me, let's get in touch : )


Categories: New World Order, Vore, Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Gentle, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3998 Read Count: 1829
[Report This] Published: August 06 2020 Updated: August 06 2020
Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed
Date: August 06 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I thoroughly enjoyed this! I got my hopes up for the quality of the characters and the dialog based on the description, and you did not disappoint! Shy/unsure predators are definitely one of my favorite, mostly untapped scenarios. It's a very close second for me to willing/sexual vore, and it's equally hard to come by, especially executed this deftly. So glad you got this commission! 

I enjoy the little bit of world-building you fleshed out in this brief story, because it's a lot easier for me to accept the extreme sociopathy required to swallow another person against their will when it takes place in a world wacky enough for congress to have passed such draconian legislature as shrinking people and revoking their status as persons for petty crimes. 

I think my favorite aspect of this story is that Erin sort of ironically overcomes her shyness and aversion towards consuming a person once she's better able to view them as former-equals. Like a private victory for the critically introverted. I also really enjoyed that, while devouring him and feeling him squirm inside of her really excited her, she seemed to still be too shy to capitalize on that excitement "properly" until she was certain he could no longer bear witness to it, even if it's of no real consequence, since it's not like he'd see anything compromising to her from his unfortunate vantage point. 

I'm sure that because this was a commission, it will probably be a one-off, but I'd definitely read anything else you write exploring her future experimentations in "trying new things." 

 

Great story! Thanks for being a writer! 

Summary:

A story of a tiny male neera, around 3 inches small who ends up in a relationship with a female neko who is over 20 times his size. Living together with his new giant girlfriend and her sister in their apartment in a world where neeras are food...


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Couples, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7725 Read Count: 5692
[Report This] Published: August 27 2020 Updated: August 27 2020
Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed
Date: August 29 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter: Our Little Secret

First off, I'd just like to say that I really enjoyed this story. It didn't go quite the way I expected it to, and I'm glad for that on multiple counts. 

I really just expected this to be a story where Lily was kind to Chester and Lucy was consistently mean-spirited, perhaps even ending with her trying to eat him. The direction you decided to take it instead was unexpected and very refreshing! I love that Lucy was so changed by the experience that she learned to appreciate Chester and began to treat him like a person instead of a mere source of tormental entertainment. Seems like she just learned something about herself! And in exchange, it looks like Chester picked up a new trick to add to his list of "bedroom techniques" that he can impress Lily with later. 

You say English isn't your first language, so I want to pat you on the back for how easily intelligible this story is. It's a very smooth and enjoyable telling. You make little mistakes here and there that I'm not above making on my first pass through when writing either. A little editing and I think you'd be in near-perfect shape. So don't sweat it! 

I see that this story is marked "complete," but just wanted to say that if you continued adding more chapters to it, you've got a committed reader in me!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the sweet words, I am happy to hear that you enjoyed my story <3 

I have proof read it a couple of times and edited a bit but yea I knew it wasn't perfect, could definitely need someone else proof-reading it.

Also, it definitely isn't completed, I am planning on continuing this story! I am new on this site and probaly missclicked somewhere haha, I'll fix that! I got enough ideas for at least 2-3 more chapters~

Summary:

Steve has an accident at work that leads to a once in a life time trip through a coworker


Categories: Butt, Gentle, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5719 Read Count: 4281
[Report This] Published: August 27 2020 Updated: August 27 2020
Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed
Date: August 28 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was a really fun little story! I love full-tour, and your plot devices were very intriguingly applied. The "I shit you not," was both a fun play on words and a good story mechanic to accomplish your goals here. I was a little shocked by the little "development" that took place between getting him out and making things right, but the follow-on dialog just made me think that Frankie is shamelessly kinky, so it fits, and that's great. Seems like she's down for anything! Frankie and Steve Just discovered something very new about themselves. 

I know this was a request, so I doubt you'll continue on with it, but I'd definitely read more smut involving these two. I always enjoy willing tinies and happy endings! 

Your writing was smooth and intelligible as always, keep up the great work! 

Summary:

A sorceress learns a rather important lesson. Appearances can be deceiving.


Categories: Fantasy, Feet, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3558 Read Count: 2296
[Report This] Published: September 07 2020 Updated: September 07 2020
Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 07 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was a really fun and scrupulously well-written vore short! I'm a big fan of little fairies who turn the size disparity on its head to get the upper hand on careless humans. They're a tricky sort. I haven't read a lot of your work, but I intend to explore more of it, as your inventiveness, attention to detail, and presence of milieu all make for a rewarding and enjoyable reading experience, never mind the tantalizing subject matter. And you've got quite the little library of stories to choose from! Per chance you'd be willing to point me in the right direction? Other soft vore stories you're proud of? Any willing/gentle vore scenarios? It's understandable if they're all similar to this, as based on your other response below, you prefer to write "bad ends," which I'm sure I'll enjoy all the same. 

Anyway, great story! Glad you're a writer! 



Author's Response:

Hmm... stretching my brain to think if I've ever done any willing vore stuff. I don't believe so, might be something I'll add to the list to do though!

Far as stories with vore content though, Sweet Tooth ends with such a thing. Time Out has some. Toxicity has some mouthplay scenes but is unfinished. Price of Revenge ends with some. And I believe Adrift has a fair bit of vore sprinkled through it, though is also unfinished as a story. Think those are the ones I'd point folks to for soft vore stuff, though also has some crush and such sparsed through them since usually have multiple elements in stories. Hope that helps!

Summary:

The Phoenix will always rise again from the ashes.


Categories: Crush, Destruction, Feet, Footwear, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2777 Read Count: 2410
[Report This] Published: September 07 2020 Updated: September 07 2020
Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 07 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well this was a succinct and exquisitely written tale of epic terror. You put so much time love and care into carefully crafting your playthings only to destroy them in a flash of brilliance that's awesome to behold! I enjoyed Antonio's thoughts and feelings with regard to the slaughter till the bitter end. Bravo! 

Also, thanks for that list in response to my earlier review. I'll be sure to check those out. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, I was absolutely one of those people to finish making a big fancy Lego or building block construction and then have some monster knock it all down. Makes the end more impactful I find if there is some context for why its impactful. Hope you enjoy the other stuff as well!

Summary:

To him, it was a house.  To her, a light snack.  Is escape from this house of chocolate possable?


Categories: Vore, Giantess, Destruction, Entrapment, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: Gamma Tau Sigma
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2173 Read Count: 2541
[Report This] Published: September 10 2020 Updated: September 10 2020
Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 10 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Cottage Confection

As usual, your writing is always very neat and easy to follow, which I actually hold above seeing my favorite sorts of situations or tags being explored, so I just wanted to express my appreciation for your consistent care and attention to detail. Your writing paints a very effective play-by-play in my head with very few gaps that really enables effective imaginary immersion. It often delivers the same, easily consumable experience that just lets me enjoy the ride in a similar way to a comic. 

I enjoyed the man's inability to determine the entire time whether she couldn't hear him, or just didn't care. I also enjoy that she never "broke character," and so he'll never know! 

You're an extremely prolific writer on here with quite the impressive library. But I think this is my first time reviewing your work, so I'd like to say, I am blown away by the endless idea-factory that is your mind, and your constant ability to actually coax those ideas to take shape on the page. 

Excellent vore short. Thanks for being a writer!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  My general philosophy with writing size fiction is keeping it quick and getting right to the action to give something people can enjoy in just a few minutes.  It helps that for work I often have to write step-by-step instructions or summaries for people who want or need to see every detail, and I think that comes through here.  I want to put people in the shoes of the protagonist and experience everything they do, with the full gamut of senses whenever possible.

You're welcome, and thanks for finally reviewing!  If you feel up to it, you should go review some (or all!) of my other stories.  

Summary:

Despite being a legal adult, Matt's parents still make him have a babysitter! Even though they've known each other for years, Matt and his babysitter Abby are going to get a LOT closer than either could have a imagined, after Matt mysteriously shrinks.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3380 Read Count: 22899
[Report This] Published: September 25 2020 Updated: November 28 2020
Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed
Date: September 25 2020 Title: Chapter 1: The first night

Firstly, I'd just like to say that I really enjoyed the first chapter. Everyone loves the babysitter fantasy, and as unbelievable as it is that parents would assign a 19 year old one to monitor an 18 year-old, I for one find it really refreshing and fun as a concept. I appreciate you doing it this way. Also, what's implausible in a mysterious-shrink story, anyway? 

Onto the content: in terms of character introduction and development, this was very brief, but I assume we'll have plenty of time to become better familiarized with their dynamic as the story progresses, so I'm not worried about it. Sometimes it is nice to "cut to the chase." I'm sure I'm not alone in enjoying the old, "wakes up shrunk in the vicinity of a hot woman," scenario. And some good body exploration and unaware insertion is also good fun. Though, I must say, I'm rather looking forward to seeing where you go with the "gentle" and "vore" tags. That combination, along with intsertion, is definitely something I'm always on the hunt for. 

Anyway. Good start. Really hope to see more on this one soon! I'll be on the lookout for updates!