Hopefully you will have many more chapters Goddess Lucy.  I am kinda in agreement with Samantha, Bree needs to be more sadistic in her domineering.  She could have ordered Adrian and Betty to each suck one of her feet entirely into their mouths (that is one foot in each one's mouth) and even had Samantha add a bit of muscle to stuff them in.  Shoes made from bullies, he he he.  Heck, with her girlfriend Samantha's backing she could have made them both kneel down and pray out loud to her as their Goddess while all the students in the cafeteria watched on in disdain.

It is nice that Samantha swallowed Adrian, and the tilting of her head back for effect is pretty sexy.

One has to wonder if Betty, alone after her boyfriend being swallowed alive, is going to completely breakdown before Samantha and Bree.  Will they have pity or vengence upon Betty?

What is going to happen to all the students from the small plastic cylinder?  Will they end up as lunch, entertainment, or both?

Perhaps Samantha can suggest to Bree that she should pick out a student or two to enslave for her own personal abuse.  Bree wouldn't necessarily have to whip him/her/them so much as decree various punishments (e.g. one could serve as a saddle on Samantha's shoulder for Bree to sit upon, they could be forced into becoming Bree's fulltime home servants, locked in a pillory and beaten, other's could even sentenced to death by Bree's method of choice)

Thanks for yet another great chapter Goddess Lucy.

I absolutely love this concept.  Terrific idea.

Why is it the women do not know they are wearing, or using transformed people?  Is it part of the plot twist?  It seems it might be nice if they knew; but then again would any of the women ever return their products so our protagonist can be transformed and his story continued?

Only two criticisms, if you don't mind.  The million dollars seems like it would attrack a lot more than five other men and a lot of national attention.  Perhaps a five hundred dollars with a thousand dollars if he's not transformed would be a bit more noncontroversal.

My second criticism is just grammar usage and spelling mistakes.

Hopefully you'll let us know what life is like for this guy as Angela's shoes with pletny of details about her foot.  Keep up the great work.

Really great story. It's nice how he revells in Sarah's fart odor.  What will happen if Sarah leaves though? Will Mark be able to get inside Sarah's panty and right up to her butthole? Hmmm, with his porthole device he could make himself tiny enough to fit through the fabric of her panty and regrow to a half inch once he's on the inside.

Very nice read.

I really like how you promote the Goddess motif, er-um, ha-hum, Goddess Lucy. {smiling}

Hmmm, a big bunny girl.  All I can picture is Bugs Bunny's girlfriend.  I guess she's like a Jessica Rabbit, only in reverse roles, er-um, species.

Aside from my visualization issues, the five humans in a little box is a great dynamic.  It really describes their roles as a mere item you put in a package rather than important, thinking beings.  I am surprised they are wearing clothing.

I have a feeling I am going to be rooting for the girl who waved and yelled "Hiiiii!"

I wonder where this is going, especially with all the mention of Lily's big feet.

Hey, Goddess Lily - Goddess Lucy, coincidence???

Why does this comment section keep screwing up my reviews.  This is the fourth or fifth time I'm attempting to write a review for this chapter.  Let's see if GW can post it without adding a thousand word addition about fonts and styles.

I kind of guessed a third of the way through chapter 1 that Samantha was actually Sam's mother, which honestly is, well a turn off.  When that was varified at the end of chapter 1, I was reluctant to continue reading this story line.

However, I found your writing and your descriptions very intriguing, so in my mind I looked at Samantha as Sam's Step-Mother.  When you wrote that Samantha is in fact Sam's Step-Mother in chapter 2 of your story the fantasy became much more, shall I say acceptable.

In fact, it is reminiscent of "Bill & Ted's Excellent Adventure" with Missy {Amy Stoch} as the stepmom.  You never described Samantha / Debbie in too much detail, but Amy Stoch would be a good basis for her.  Then again, so would a lot of women now that she has been defined as Sam's stepmother. 

This is really quite a great story.  You mention the technology, yet not in such as degree the story is bogged down by it.  Your foreshadowing is great and leaves the reader guessing.  Best of all is your story content, which is top notch.

Please keep this story going.

I like that Mia was the one who "set up" the bus tours. 

I do have to wonder, how much of Mia is modeled after yourself Goddess Lucy?  If I recall, you love calling tinies "insects", just as Mia did {and admittedly as I like to be referred to, big smile}.  I also can't help notice your third person perspective is almost first person when it comes to Mia.  Now you have me wondering if you have long blonde hair too??? {he he he}

There is a question I have though.  Didn't the Nanos start the story off at 2cm originally?  After you wrote the bus was only 2cm I went back and reread chapter 1 and now the Nanos are 1mm.  Did you change that or am I mistaken?

I have a toy Greyhound Bus from when I was a kid.  It's put away; but it's about 5 or 6 inches long.  I just know next time I come across it while putting things in storage I'll be thinking of Mia.

Hmmm, what happened to all Natalie's previous doll people?  Will he shrink so much he gets trapped in the doll's shoe?  So much more to find out.

Natalie sounds a bit crazy, wonder just what she would do with him if he were doll sized???

Keep it going!

All I can do is ask where the burger joint is you work at, I'll be there mañana!!! 

Wish I could feel sympathy for Andrew, I don't.  I do have to admit, I'd rather live to serve continually than be torn away by death, though if I'm gonna have to die this is the way I wish to go, Goddess Lucy.

The descriptions of Andrew at your foot, loosing himself in kissing and massaging your foot brought back a pleasent memory; but this is about you Goddess Lucy, not me.

If you ever start your Church Of Goddess Lucy, you can count me in as your servile monk or devout high priest or your little alter bug-boy (er, grown man, he he he).  "All Praise Goddess Lucy!"    ; )  

Another fine story.  Thank you for writing this.

Oh by the way, I've been posting some stories.  I have to add to the next chapter to "French Weave", though "Tomgirl" is progressing slowly.  I think you'll find they are nothing like "Debbie's Diarrhea" if you should ever care to puruse them, or not (Heck, you ARE a Goddess).

I assumed her boot's toe was only an inch or so high; but come to think of it between a thick sole and boot material, I can see her boot's toe section being over 2".  Thanks, I have a better visualiztion now that you mentioned 2".

Can't wait to read what she does to her incompetent general(s).

What more can I say than "Thank You" for continueing this fantastic story.

If you should make the research facility part of future stories, please let us know what happens to the tiny guy in the pill box and Lori.

This chapter was, like all your previous chapters, incredible in your descriptions {your words paint quite a vivid experience} and personal moral acceptance / personal responsibility of having a tiny man living between Becca's asscheeks.

Some have suggested that Krystal be Becca's choice as a second; but what if Becca demanded Krystal be given her own tiny boy in exchange for long term experimentation/retention of her own tiny?  Kind of a "I want him long term anyway, let's see if I can get Krystal a tiny of her own for doing so".